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Posted: 17 August 2010 at 11:26pm | IP Logged
Congrats on second thread Hazra...
Great update... hope Sheena and RV get caught soon... hope Nupur listens to Mayank.. continue soon. :)

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cont asap
lovely update
thnx for the pm
 
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thanks for the pm very nice updateSmile

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thanks for the pm very nice updateSmile

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hi guys...updated next part..i hope u like it...dont forget to comment...read n njoy...

gunjan leaves from there...
n to herself-gunjan ne sab kuch sun liya...ah bhagwan ye sab mere sath hi kyu ho raha hai...Cry
g to herself-kuch to baat hai jo di mujhe batana nahi chahti hai..par mai jaankar rahugi...mujhe mayank se baat karni hogi..Unhappy
gunjan calls mayank...but mayank forgot his mobile at home...
g to herself-ye mayank mera phone kyu nahi utha raha hai..Unhappy
mayank is very angry...
m to himself-nupur apne ap ko samajti kya hai..jaisi ki sab galti meri hi thi...ab mai bhi usse kabhi baat nahi karuga..Angry
mayank was crossing the road and one car crashed with him...he got hurt and his hand and started bleeding...many people were gathered...samrat was on his bike..
s to himself-ye itni bhid kyu hai yaha par...kahi kisika accident to nahi hua hai...dekhta hu..
samrat us bhid mai jata hai...and he was shocked to see mayank bleeding...
s-mayank...mayank...Unhappy
he went to him..
s-mayank...mayank kya hua tumhe...mayank...mayank utho mayank..oh no...ise hospital le jaana padega..Unhappy
man-ambulance ati hi hogi...
women-ise to bohot chot ayi hai...bhagwan iski raksha kare..
after sometime..in hospital..
doctor-ise to bohot chot ayi hai..aur khun bhi kaafi beh chuka hai...i think...inka operation karna hoga..
s-what...Unhappy
doctor-bohot badaa accident hua hai...aur agar operation nahi hua to...to inki jaan bhi jaa sakti hai..
s-kya...ap...ap operation shuru kar dijiye..Unhappy
doctors mayank ko operation thetre mai le gaye...samrat was very tensed..
s to himself-ye sab kya ho gaya..ab mai kya karu...chasmish...chasmish ko inform karta hu..Unhappy
he calls gunjan..she receive the call..
g-hello...
s-hello chasmish...
g-samrat...kya hua??
s-chasmish...vo...
g-kya hua samrat??bolo na..
s-vo accident..Unhappy
g-accident...samrat kiska accident...bolo na samrat...Unhappy
s-vo...mayank ka accident ho gaya hai...aur..vo..vo abhi operation thetre mai hai...doctor ne kaha ki operation karna zaruri hai varna...varna mayank ki jaan bhi jaa sakti thi...Unhappy
g-kya...kaunse hospital mai ho tum??Unhappy
s-city hospital..
g-samrat...mai abhi ati hu..
s-thick hai chasmish..
both cut the call...
nupur comes..
n-gunjan..tera chehra itna utar kyu gaya...kya hua??
g-di...di..mayank ka accident ho gaya...Cry
n-kya...Unhappy
nupur was shocked..
n-ye..ye tu kya bol rahi hai...
g-di..abhi samrat ka phone aya tha aur usne kaha ki mayank operation thetre mai hai..operation karna bohot zaruri tha varna..varna uski jaan bhi jaa sakti thi...di hame hospital jaana chahiye...chaliye na di..Cry
then nupur remembers that she talked to mayank on phone today and told...
"n-mujhe kuch nahi sunna hai..aur mai to ye chahti hu ki dubara tumhari shakal kabhi nahi dikhe..i hate u mayank..i hate u...aur ab mujhe tum kabhi bhi phone mat karna..hamare bich jo bhi tha vo sab khatam..samje tum..Angry"
n to herself-ye sab meri wajah se hua hai...mere muh se ye kya nikal gaya..mai hi zimmedar hu mayank ki is halat ke liye...CryCry
g-di..di kya soch rahi hai...chaliye na..Unhappy
nupur and gunjan were going and diya stopped them...
d-tum dono kaha jaa rahe ho??
then gunjan tells everything to diya..diya was shocked..
d-what..oh my god...chalo mai bhi ati hu tumlogo ke sath...chalo..lets go..Unhappy
gunjan,nupur and diya leaves from there..other side...at mayank's home..
mm to herself-ye mayu kaha chale gaya...apne room mai bhi nahi hai..aur apna mobile bhi yaha bhulkar gaya hai...kaha jaa sakta hai aur vo bhi mujhe batae bina..Unhappy
they reach hospital...uday and benji were also in the hospital..
n-samrat...mayank kaisa hai??Cry
s-nupur..abhi tak kuch pata nahi hai...vo operation thetre mai hai...Unhappy
u-nupur..dont worry..mayank ko kuch nahi hoga..
b-ha nupur..
g-par samrat ye sab hua kaise...Unhappy
s-mai to apni bike par jaa raha tha to maine dekha ki bohot bhid thi..mujhe laga ki kisi ka accident hua hai aur mai us bhid mai gaya to dekha ki mayank ka accident hua tha..Unhappy
n-par accident kaise hua??Cry
s-pata nahi nupur..mayank car ke sath crash ho gaya tha...
n-Cry
g-di...mayank ki mom ko inform karna hoga..Unhappy
n-shilpa aunty...unhe...unhe to pata bhi nahi hoga...Cry
g-di..ap ek kaam kariye..mayank ke ghar par phone kariye aur unhe sab kuch bata dijiye...
n-nahi...mujhme itni himmat nahi hai...mai phone karti hu tu baat kar...Cry
g-thick hai di...
nupur call at mayank's home..shilpa aunty pick the phone..
mm-hello...
g-hello...
mm-kaun??
g-aunty mai gunjan bol rahi hu nupur ki behen..
mm-gunjan..ha beta...kya hua??
g-aunty vo...vo mayank..
mm-mayank..kya..
g-aunty...vo mayank ka accident ho gaya hai..
shilpa aunty was shocked..
mm-kya...Unhappy
g-ha aunty..ap jaldi se city hospital aa jaeye...Unhappy
mm-ye...ye sab kaise hua??aur...aur mera mayu kaisa hai...Cry
g-aunty..mayank operation thetre mai hai...ap pls jaldi hospital aa jaeye...Unhappy
mm-op..operation thetre...Cry
g-aunty..pls ap jaldi aa jaeye..
mm-mai..mai abhi ati hu..Cry
both cut the call...
g-aunty bohot ro rahi thi..pata nahi ab kya hoga..Cry
n-ye sab meri wajah se hua hai..Cry
s-tumhari wajah se..nupur isme tumhari kya galti hai..
n-meri hi galti hai...maine mayank ko bohot daata tha...mujhe use itna nahi daatna chahiye tha..Cry
g-di...ap roiye mat...chup ho jaeye di..mayank ko kuch nahi hoga...vo bilkul thick ho jaega...Cry
hey guys..here ends my next part..i hope u like it..so kya hoga ab??kya mayank thick ho jaega??kya nupur mayank ko maaf kar degi??kya mayank aur nupur ka sach sabke samne aa jaega??janne ke liye wait kijiye mere next update ka..love u all..
hazra
 
 


Edited by hazraluvarjun - 25 June 2011 at 5:21am

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Posted: 20 August 2010 at 10:49am | IP Logged
hey hazra...awesome update dear!!!Hug

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Posted: 20 August 2010 at 11:02am | IP Logged
awesome update
do conti..soon
 

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wow
 
lovely
 
amazing
 
plzzz upadte as soon as possible
 

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