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iluvsalman

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Posted: 13 August 2010 at 5:54am | IP Logged
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hi guys...i know this time i m very late in updating my ff...but i dont get much time..very busy this days..i hope u all understand....anyways..i m back with my ff's.....i have updated next part....i hope u like it....read and njoy...
diya calls samrat...samrat receive the call..
s-hello..
d-sammy..abhi isi waqt ghar pe aao..bohot zaruri baat kehni hai..
s-mai raaste mai hi hu candy...bas thodi der mai aa raha hu..
after sometime....samrat comes..he went in gunjan's room..
s-nupur...kaisi ho tum??
n-mai thick hu...
d-sammy.....ye sara plan tumhari dost shina ka tha...usi ne ye sab karvaya aur ranvjay bhi uske sath milna hua tha...Angry
samrat was shocked to hear this..
s-kya...Unhappy
g-ha samrat..diya thick keh rahi hai...ye sab shina aur ranvijay ne kiya....di ne mujhe sab kuch bataya....
then samrat comes to know everything..gunjan and diya tells him everything..he became angry...
s-shina....shina ne aisa kiya...Angry
n-mujhe to pehle se hi ye shina kuch thick nahi lagti thi...Unhappy
g-di...ap thoda aram kar lijiye..ap bohot thak chuki hai...Unhappy
d-ya nupur...gunjan thick keh rahi hai...
n-thick hai...
s-nupur..dont worry..mai sab thick kar duga...
d-chalo guys..ab nupur ko aram karne do..
all went outside..
d-gunjan..kya soch rahi ho??
g-diya..mujhe yakin nahi ho raha hai...shina ne aisa kiya...maine to uspar kitna bharosa kiya..di ne mujhe kaha bhi tha ki unhe shina par shak hai par maine di ka yakin nahi kiya...mai...Cry
s-chasmish..pls tum ro mat...mujhe bhi yakin nahi ho raha hai..shina to meri kitni achi dost thi aur usne hi......mai use nahi choduga...Unhappy
d-par shina aur ranvijay kaha hai??
s-mujhe nahi lagta hai ki vo dono kal clg ayege...par mai un dono ko dhundkar rahuga..sabak sikhana bohot zaruri hai un dono ko...
d-ya sammy...u r right...
after sometime...other side..
shi-ranvijay...ab ham kya karege....ab tak to vo mayank aur nupur apne ghar pohoc bhi gaye hoge...ham to fas gaye na..Unhappy
rv-ha shina...ab agar ham clg gaye to pata nahi kya hoga..us nupur ne sab kuch bata diya hoga sab ko...ham to khatre mai pad gaye...mujhe to kuch samaj mai nahi aa raha hai...
shi-ye sab us aniket ki wajah se hua hai..ek ladki ko sambhal nahi sakta hai...idiot...
then ranvijay went to aniket and slapped him tightly..
rv-teri wajah se ham fas gaye...ek ladki ko sambhal nahi sakta...Angry
ani-mujse galti ho gayi..mujhe maaf kardo..Unhappy
shi-shut up and leave fro here...aur dubaara apni shakal mat batana...get lost...Angry
aniket went from there..
shi-ab kya karege ranvijay..Unhappy
rv-shina...mujhe lagta hai ki ab hamara mumbai mai rehna muskil hai isliye hame.....
shi-kya??
rv-hame mumbai chodkar kahi aur jaana hoga..
shi-what...par kaha??
rv-i dont know..
shi-ranvijay...delhi mai meri ek friend hai aur uski shadi ho chuki hai to uska ghar vaise bhi band pada hai to ham vaha reh sakte hai...aur vo mujhe manaa nahi karegi..
rv-par uske ghar wale...
shi-uske parents is duniya mai nahi hai...
rv-idea acha hai....free mai ghar bhi mil jaega..Smile
shi-hmmm....vaise bhi mere parents to yaha rehte nahi hai isliye mai jo chahu vo kar sakti hu...Smile
rv-ab chalo..jaldi se samaan leke ate hai ghar se...
shi-tumhe raasta pata hai??
rv-ha...chalo..
shi-par agar hame kisine dekh liya to??
rv-dont worry...nahi dekhege..ab jaldi chalo..
shi-ok..
other side...
m to himself-pata nahi nupur mere baare mai kya soch rahi hogi...maine itni badi galti kaise kar di....mujhe nupur ko phone karna chahiye...Unhappy
mayank calls nupur...nupur cuts the call..he again calls her but she again cuts the call...
m to herself-mera nupur se baat karna bohot zaruri hai....mujhe uske ghar par phone karna chahiye...
he calls at her home...gunjan pick the phone from the hall and nupur pick the phone from her room..
n-hello...
m-hello nupur..
gunjan sab sunti hai..
n-tum...tumhari himmat kaise hui yaha phone karne hi...Angry
gunjan at other side thinking that why nupur is talking rudely with mayank...
g to herself-ye di mayank se aise kyu baat kar rahi hai..Unhappy
m-nupur..mujhe tumse kuch baat karni hai..
n-mujhe kuch nahi sunna hai..aur mai to ye chahti hu ki mai dubaara tumhari shakal kabhi nahi dekhu..i hate u mayank..i hate u aur ab mujhe tum kabhi bhi phone mat karna...hamare bich jo bhi tha vo sab khatam..samje tum...Angry
nupur cuts the call..
m to himself-thick hai...agar ise mujse baat nahi karni hai to mujhe bhi koi shok nahi hai....Angry
mayank was in a very angry mood and he went outside without informing his mother...other side...
g to herself-ye di aur mayank ke bich hua kya hai..mayank ne to di ki help ki hai to fir di ne mayank se itni buri tarah se kyu baat ki...kuch to gadbad hai..mujhe di se baat karni hogi...Unhappy
gunjan went in the room..
g-di....
n-gunjan tu...kya hua??
g-di mujhe apse kuch baat karni hai...
n-kya??
g-di...apke aur.....mayank ke bich kuch hua hai kya???
nupur was shocked..
n-na....nahi to.....nahi..tu..tu aisa kyu puch rahi hai??
g-di..maine phone par apki aur mayank ki baate sunli hai...
n-kya.....Unhappy
g-ap mayank se itna rudely kyu baat kar rahi thi??
n-vo.......gunjan...Unhappy
g-di kya hua??
n-gunjan...tu to janti haina mai mayank ke sath hamesha jagdaa karte rehti hu to.....
g-to kya di??
n-gunjan chod na...mujhe...mujhe coffee pina hai..pls mere liye coffee leke ana...
g-thick hai di..
gunjan leaves from there...
n to herself-gunjan ne sab kuch sun liya...ah bhagwan ye sab mere sath hi kyu ho raha hai....Cry
g to herself-kuch to baat hai jo di mujhe batana nahi chahti hai..par mai jaankar rahugi...mujhe mayank se baat kari hogi..Unhappy
hey guys...here ends my next part...i hpe u like it..dont forget to comment...so kya hoga ab??kya gunjan sach jaan paegi??kya samrat shina aur ranvijay ko dhund paega??kya hoga mayank ko??kya nupur mayank ko maaf kar degi??janne ke liye wait kijiye mere next update ka...love u all..
hazra
 
 
 
 


Edited by hazraluvarjun - 30 September 2010 at 11:03pm

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bautifull update dear

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Posted: 13 August 2010 at 6:15am | IP Logged
hey Hazra,
nice part Smile
thxs for the pm Smile
and do continue soon waiting for ur next update Smile


Edited by mayur-arti.4eva - 13 August 2010 at 6:26am

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nice part

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nice part
do continue soonSmile

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cingo 4 the 2nd thread dear...awesome update.............pls continue soon dear

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finally u updated
wow
an awesome update
do conti...soon

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hey dear nice part thanks for pm do continue soon

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