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Posted: 17 August 2010 at 8:26pm | IP Logged
Hey Nirali!!
I just caught up wid ur fic...... Man is it great.....!!!!!
Truly loved it!!!
Sweetie do update longer na..... N dont worry I was also new n very less confident...... Lekin ab dekho I am very much invilved here!
N can't imagine my life without IF!!!!
Need anything PM me k???
Love ya!!

Jinszy!

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thank u friends for appreciating this story,plz bookmark this thread as i cant pm u all.i dont know whats the hitch but i get error msgs,so plz keep checking this thread.

Part 6

"so,tell me"

"kya tum sachmuch jaldi mein ho?"

"haan,imp meetings hain ek do,tum bolo kya baat thi?"

she was trying to appear as normal as she could but the nevrvousness and fear was clearly evident on her face and muskaan could see that,although she could not hear what there talking as she was seated at a quite good distance from them.

their coffee arrived.

"here it is,have it....bolo na riddhima,kya zaruri baat karni thi tumhe mujhse?"

he asked taking a sip from his hot coffee.

"armaan...woh main...."

"haan...woh tum kya?"

"woh main keh rahi thi ki...."

"haan,aage bhi kuch bologi?mujhe already late ho raha hai"

ridhima's thoughts,

"armaan,kya tum meri aankhon mein nahi dekh sakte jo mere labon pe nahi aa paa raha?kya tumhe inme apne liye pyar nahi nazar nahi aata,armaan ?plz armaan,i cant tell u...r words necesaary?actually no words can convey the intensity of my love for u,then y do u want me to explain the inexplicable armaan?y cant u see it in my eyes what i feel for u???"

armaan waves his hand,

"hello...kahan kho gayi...tum kuch kehna chah rahi thi na?"

"haan....woh....main....armaan...woh main keh rahi thi....ki....ki...aaj mausan kitna acha hai na,lagta hai baarish honewali hai....waise tumhe baarish pasand hai?"

"mujhe baarish pasand hai yaan nahi,kya yeh jaanne ke liye tumne mujhe yahan bulaya hai riddhima?"

"nahi armaan...woh main...."

just then a girl in mini skirt comes near them...

"hi amy...what a plesant surprise baby..."

she said almost throwing herself on him..armaan gets up and hugs the girl leaving riddhima fuming in anger.

"hi,sheena.....am so glad to see u here"

"by the way, who is she?dont tell me she is ur new gf...ur taste cant be sooo horrible"

armaan felt embarrassed,

"oh come on sheena....how can u even think like that?"

"thank god,i was wrong...she is sooo behenji types u see"

"yeah,u r right...she can never be my kinda girl...she is just a family friend...bus achanak mil gayi and for courtesy sake i joined her"

riddhima had enough,she looked at him with thousands of emotions in her eyes brimming with tears and without a word,she rushed out.

muskaan on the other hand sensing the seriousness of the situation got up and went to him.


"what did u tell her?"

"excuse me,do i know u?"

"i am muskaan,riddhima's friend....tumne kya kaha us se armaan?"

"hey girl,cool down...maine socha woh kahin armaan ki nayi girlfriend to nahi and he clarified that a behenji type girl like her can never be his girlfriend...thats it..whats big deal"

she looked at her with disgust,

"now will u plz shut up and let me talk to him?"

"what do u think of urself mr. Armaan malik?tumhe logon ki pehchaan hoti to aaj in cartoon type girls ke saamne apni jhuthi shaan banaye rakhne ke liye riddhima jaisi ladki ki insult naa karte....tumhe pata bhi hai ki woh tumhe kitna chahti hai,kitna pyar karti hai woh tumse?yahi batane aayi thi woh tumhe...par woh silly yeh samajh hi nahi paayi ki tum jaisa ladka us jaisi ladki ke pyar ke layak hi nahi....tum sirf in chahundri type ladkiyon ke entertainment ke liye hi sahi ho....pyar jaise alfaaz to tumhare liye bane hi nahi aur naa hi tum uske kaabil ho....aur kya kaha tumne meri dost ko,"behenji types?"...agar woh chahe na to skimpy dresses pehen kar tum jaise dus ladkon ko apne aage peeche ghuma sakti hai...but she is not one of those cats and am proud of my friend for the way she is....."

armaan was stunned to hear all these.he could not understand how to react as he never felt anything like that for her.

"excuse me,armaan malik pe to koi bhi ladki flat ho sakti hai,that does not mean armaan in behenji types ladkyion se pyar karega"

"just shut ur mouth up,u cat...one word more and u will be gone,do u understand?"

she continued turning to armaan,

"i was a fool to have got her convinced that she should atleast let u know once how she feels for u but i was soooo wrong....u dont deserve riddhima....she is too good for u"

and she rushed out banging the door,worried for her friend.


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So heres the th part.pls drop ur comments.



Edited by sweetnirali - 18 August 2010 at 8:33am

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Posted: 18 August 2010 at 5:50am | IP Logged
awesme update
loved it
love the way  muski stund up 4 her friend
cant wait 4 armaan 4 feel jealous when he shes ridzy with adhi
con soon
thanks 4 da pm 

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Posted: 18 August 2010 at 5:56am | IP Logged
heyyy dear,
nice part
continue soon



love
Riddss

Norz

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Posted: 18 August 2010 at 6:48am | IP Logged
lovely part
love muskaan
love the way she defend her frd

MysticalRealm

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Posted: 18 August 2010 at 7:32am | IP Logged
Hey Nirali!!
Sweetie this was I have to say ur BEST part till now!
Truly u rocked it!
I love how Muski stands up for Riddhima!!
That almost made me cry!
I love this fic!

Jinszy!

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Posted: 18 August 2010 at 8:27am | IP Logged
luvelyyyyy...plssss make updates bit longer

update sooooooooooonnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn

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Posted: 18 August 2010 at 9:42am | IP Logged
contd soon
add me in ur pm list
nice ff
loved it
but too small dear(lol)
update big one na pls if u dont mind

love
sonia

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