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sweetnirali

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Posted: 16 August 2010 at 4:04am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Sweet_Ashum

Wow
Cool part
N hey Nirali, whats the matter?
Why do you want others to continue?
You are doing a good job
So plz you continue it yourself coz you might be having some storyline in your mind which we would love to know through your updates
Do update soon
Take care


Its because i am new here,and i just had this concept in mind but now findting it bit difficult to shape it up:)its just not coming out the way i want it to,so invited u all to co operate and volunteer.i jotted down this part in 10 mins,watever popped up in my mind:)thanks for appreciating.

Edited by sweetnirali - 16 August 2010 at 4:30am

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Riddss

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Posted: 16 August 2010 at 7:50am | IP Logged
heyyyy dear,
nice part
continue soon
thanks for Pm.



love
Riddss

cutiepreet

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Posted: 16 August 2010 at 8:31am | IP Logged
hey.. thtzz a nice concept.. :)
i really like it and luv reading AR ffs... sooo plzzzz continue.... luking forward to see Armaan's reactions which is obviously gonna hurt Ridz but then we will see our lover boy trying to get his love back.... awwww
plzzzz add me to ur PM LIST.... :)
thanxxx and continue soon.. :)
Preet <3

sweetnirali

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Posted: 16 August 2010 at 12:34pm | IP Logged
hey guys,here goes the next part.

Part 4


"hey muski,main kya pehnu,bata na?"

"yaar tu inni sohni hai ki jo bhi pehnegi,sundar hi lagegi"

"offo,bata na"


"ok baba,saaf saaf bol na ki aaj "unka" qatl karne ka iraada hai"

she said nudging riddhima to which she got a light smack on her shoulder.

"oooouch...ek to madad karo aur maar bhi khao"

"bata na muski"

"chal tere wardrobe mein dekhte hain"

after having some spent good time,they finally settled on a white churidaar suit with light royal golden embroidery on it.

"yeh theek rahega na?"

"hey bhagwan,not again..come on ridz,maine tujhe itne dresses suggest kiye par tune sabhi mein koi naa koi meen-mekh nikal kar reject kar diye aur finally dress apni pasand ka hi select kiya,phir ab soch mat zyada,u will look gorgeous in it"

"chal ab main nikalti hun"

"sham ko aa jayegi na time pe?"

"haan baba,aa jaungi"

muskaan replied pinching her nose.

riddhima hugged her,when they broke the hug,muskaan saw tears forming in her eyes.

"hey ridz,kya hua?"

"kuch nahi"

"come on,tu bilkul fikr naa kar,dekhna sab theek hoga.agar tera pyar sacha hai to woh khaali haanth nahi lautega and i know how deep and divine ur love is for him,so just do what is required to do and leave the rest to god"

she said wiping her tears and started tickling her.

"chhod na muski"

"yeh hui na baat,chal ab main chalti hun.look ur best today"

she said winking at her and waved her bye.

she got lost in her thoughts.her whole world revolves around him but will he reciprocate to her feelings?he has always been oblivious to her presence or so it seemed,then is it not stupid to express her feelings to him?how could she do that???

"no..i cant"

but then she remebered muskaan's words,

"atleast give ur love one chance,so that u dont regret all ur life for not even letting the person know how deeply u loved him"

so she brushed off these negative thoughts and started getting ready.


she changed into that white suit and sat in front of the dressing table.taking her kohl and outlining her eyes,she grabbed the blush and brushed her cheeks slightly not wanting to put too much on.picking her light pink lipstick she put it on and for last touches she added a tinge of gloss....it didnt seem like much but it still left her looking beautiful.putting on her silver dangling earrings and bracelet she got up and gave her self a final look.she felt the butterflies in her stomach start to flutter as the thought of meeting armaan popped in her head.

after what seemed an eternity,the clock finally struck 4.the very thought of armaan gave her goosebumps throwing her into a sea of indescribable madness.

                             * * *

So this was the part 4,pls leave ur comments.

Edited by sweetnirali - 16 August 2010 at 12:46pm

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Norz

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Posted: 16 August 2010 at 12:38pm | IP Logged
hey
nice part
cant wait for 4th part
can u plzzz pm the link also
because he becomes difficult to find the ff
 
res for part 4
riddima is sooo much looking 4ward 4 her date
she will be haert broken
plzzz jaldi jaldi inki mulaqat karwa doo


Edited by cute.arsh - 16 August 2010 at 12:41pm

moonlight2630

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Posted: 16 August 2010 at 1:40pm | IP Logged
hey nirali
fantastic update
i loved RM friendship bond muski is very supportive and caring.
can't wait 4 next update
keep writing Thumbs Up u r going very well
i really really like this FF.
plz counti...
pm me plz
update soon.

sjain

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Posted: 16 August 2010 at 2:17pm | IP Logged
nice

update soonnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn

cutiepreet

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Posted: 16 August 2010 at 2:55pm | IP Logged
hey.. this was a nice part to see Ridz and Muskaan's bonding... Muski is supportive to her... i luv tht of her... and Ridz awww dont cry baby he will cum to u once day eventually but def u'll have to wait...:(
thanxx for the PM and plzz plzz continue soon..
luking forward to their meeting...
uugghh Armaan is gonna break Ridz heart..Cry
but still update soon.. :)
Preet <3


Edited by cutiepreet - 16 August 2010 at 3:00pm

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