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Obssessed about you,(AR FF) 9th prt updtd. (Page 3)

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Posted: 14 August 2010 at 8:14am | IP Logged
Thanks friends !

Am unable to pm all as i keep getting error messages while doing so,so pls keep checking this thread:)
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Posted: 14 August 2010 at 8:37am | IP Logged
heyyy dear,
nice part
try to update longer part


love
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Posted: 14 August 2010 at 9:07am | IP Logged
wow loved it. story going good. do pm me.
love
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Posted: 14 August 2010 at 1:28pm | IP Logged
nice parts
do pm me
sweetnirali Senior Member
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Posted: 16 August 2010 at 2:39am | IP Logged
part 3

Finally riddhima musteres up all the courage that she could and dials armaan's number with trembling hands.

"hello"

"hell....hell....hel....."

"who the hell is this?"

"arm...armaan,riddhima here"

"kaun ridhhima?"

"shahank gupta's daughter"

"oh tum??haan bolo,kya kaam tha?"

"woh....woh...main....woh..."

Muskaan pinches her.

"woh main keh rahi thi ki ki....tum kya kar rahe the?"

"tumne yeh puchne ke liye phone kiya hai?"

Muskaan shook her head and takes away the mobile from her.

"hello armaan,muskaan here,riddhima's friend.if you are not too busy today,can you meet riddhima over coffe today evening at barista or wherever it suits you"

"riddhima?"

He sounded puzzled and bit disappointed.

"why dont we meet up?i can meet riddhima some other time"

"khotya,mainu line maar raha hai,teri to...."

muskaan mumbled in such a way that it is not audible on the phone.

"i would love to meet you,but i am bit busy today and riddhima has something very important to talk to you,so why dont you guys meet up today"

"okay,aap ke kehne pe hum aapki friend se mil lete hain is ummid pe ki aap jald hi is nacheez ko khidmat ka mauka dengi?"

"jee zarur,honewale ji-ja-ji"

"kya...kya...kaha tumne?"

"kuch nahi,kuch nahi.abhi main rakhti hun,be there at 5 today"

"bye"

And she hungs up the phone.

"yaar ridz tujhe puri duniya mein ek yahi mila tha?"

riddhima blushes.

"oye hoye...abhi se aise sharma rahi hai?"

"muski,tune usse bula to liya,par main kya kahungi us se,darr ke maare meri to zubaan hi band ho jayegi uske saamne?"

"bol to aise rahi hai jaise waise badi zubaan chalti hai teri.dekh ridz,ab apne dil ka izhaar to tujhe hi karna hoga sweetheart.isme main kuch nahi kar sakti"

"par main akeli nahi jaa sakti,tu bhi aayegi mere sath"

"arre nahi yaar,main kabab mein haddi nahi banna chahti"

Riddhima gives her a light punch.

"ok baba,ek kaam karte hain main aaungi tere saath,par main kahin door baith jaungi,ok?"

"ok,you are my best friend"

And riddhima hugs muskaan.

"arre aaj bada pyar ho raha hai friends mein"

Padma enters with a tray of tea and pakoras.

"garam garam banaye hain,jaldi se kha lo"

"oh aunty,i love you soo much"

And they both started chattering,discussing about riddhima's date,relishing pakoras.

                             * * *

So this was part 3.pls do comment.



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moonlight2630 IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 16 August 2010 at 3:01am | IP Logged
hey nirali
very nice update
plz try lit bit longer
can't wait 4 next update
plz update soon.
sweetnirali Senior Member
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Posted: 16 August 2010 at 3:37am | IP Logged
if anyone wants to continue it,i will really be very happy.pls do comment,all will be accpted,suggesstions,feedback,criticism.

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Posted: 16 August 2010 at 3:41am | IP Logged
Wow
Cool part
N hey Nirali, whats the matter?
Why do you want others to continue?
You are doing a good job
So plz you continue it yourself coz you might be having some storyline in your mind which we would love to know through your updates
Do update soon
Take care

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