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moonlight2630

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Posted: 13 August 2010 at 7:39pm | IP Logged
amazing concept
gr8 start
plz counti...
add me in ur PM list
update soon
waiting 4 ur next update.

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sweetnirali

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Posted: 13 August 2010 at 11:37pm | IP Logged
hey friends,i said its open for all,so if u really liked the concept plz volunteer to continue.

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Posted: 14 August 2010 at 6:07am | IP Logged
part 2

She was lost in her thoughts,not knowing what to say to her mom,padma.

"hey ridz,kaisi hai yaar?"

Muskaan entered her room and she took a sigh of relief.

"hello aunty,kaisi hain aap?"

"main theek hun beta,tum dono gappen ladao,main tum dono ke liye garma garm pakode aur chai bhijwati hun"

"oh aunty,u r too sweet"

and padma went away.

"thanks muskaan,tu bilkul theek samay pe aa gayi"

"woh to theek hai,par tere chehre pe yeh barah kyun baje hue hain?"

"maa papa ne mere liye ladka dekh rakha hai,main bhi mil chuki hun us se,abhi naam hai uska,papa ke dost ka beta hai and he is just perfect par tu to jaanti hai na ki......"

Ridhima turned away and again went to her window.

Muskaan went near her and put her hand over her shoulder.

"i know,teri mushkil kya hai.tu us idiot,stupid,donkey armaan ko pasand karti hai"

She giggled while riddhima turned around and glared at her.

"ok baba,i know tu us donk....eeeehhhh...i mean armaan ke baare mein kuch nahi sun sakti,par yaar jab tu usse jaanti hai ki woh itna bada flirt hai,uske liye yeh pyar wyar koi maayne nahi rakhta to phir tu usse kyun chahti hai????"


"yahi to mujhe bhi nahi samajh aata muski,i know he is a flirt.par phir naa jaane kyun main jab bhi usse dekhti hun,ek ajeeb si kashish mehsoos hoti hai jo mujhe aaj tak kisi ke liye meshoos nahi hui.usse dekh kar lagta hai ki jaise bhagwanji ne usse mere liye hi banaya hai aur khud ko aaine mein dekhti hun to lagta hai i belong to him and ONLY him.main nahi jaanti ki is rishte ka kya anjaam hai,nahi jaanti ki armaan jaisa ladka mujh jaisi ladki ke liye kabhi aisa feel kar sakta hai yaan nahi,par itna zarur lagta hai ki main sari umr uske bina to jee sakti hun,par kisi aur ke saath nahi"

"oh ridzy,i dont bel this.maine kabhi socha bhi nahi tha ki tujh jaisi jhenpu ladki ko kabhi pyar bhi ho sakta hai aur hua bhi to kis donk.....sorry...sorry i mean hua bhi to us flirt se jisse teri feelings ki shayad hi kabhi kadr ho"

"ab main kya karun muskaan,mere uppar pressure aa raha hai aur main kisi bhi haal mein apne papa ko sharminda hote nahi dekh sakti,par main kya karun,kuch to bata"

"hmmmm.....tu armaan ko phone laga"

"WHAT??????"

"suna nahi tune,tu abhi ke abhi armaan ko phone karegi"

She said handing her mobile.

"par muski...main...main...i mean main kaise..."

"main.... main... kya kar rahi hai,come on,itna pyar karti hai usse aur ek phone karne se bhi haath kaamp rahe hain tere?"

"par...par...woh....main...kya kahungi main usse?"

"tu aaj usse barista mein milne bulayegi"

"WHAT????NO WAY"

"yes sweetheart,ab tu phone mila rahi hai yaan main hi bula lun usse??"


To be continued...


Pls drop ur comments...if any of u want to continued,u r welcome.yippi,with this one,i become a groupie:)

Edited by sweetnirali - 14 August 2010 at 6:09am

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AbhiNikiLuver

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Posted: 14 August 2010 at 6:16am | IP Logged
WOW! Awesome!



Can u pls add Nikki in here for Abhi? Mera bechara Abhi... hope he doesn't fall in love with Ridz..... :(

Sheena

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moonlight2630

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Posted: 14 August 2010 at 6:19am | IP Logged
OMG it's so interesting
plz pm me
update soon.

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Posted: 14 August 2010 at 7:29am | IP Logged
OMG!!!
Garam garam pakode n chai???
mmmmmm, muh mein paani aa gaya LOL
Superb part
N congrats on being a groupie
Take care

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Posted: 14 August 2010 at 7:39am | IP Logged
nice one
do pm m the nxt tym

sweetnirali

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Posted: 14 August 2010 at 8:09am | IP Logged
Thanks friends !

Am unable to pm all as i keep getting error messages while doing so,so pls keep checking this thread to read updates:)

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