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Posted: 13 August 2010 at 9:53am | IP Logged
Hi guys this was one poem which I made quite a time ago, I know its not that good, I must not be wasting one post here yet I wanted share this somewhere so I am sharing it here

26 January, 15 August,
Aaj ke din karenge hum deshbhakti prakat
Aaj ke din hum hutatmaon ko yaad karte hain
Toh kya huva agar poora saal hum desh ko bhool jate hain
Aaj ka din hain Utsav ke huvi bapu ke siddhanton ki jeet
Par kya kare unhe bhulakar jeena hi hain aaj ki samajik reet
Bhagat singh aur unke saathiyon ko hum kabhi nahi bhula sakte
Magar Pados ke ghar mein janma ho doosra bhagat Singh yahi ummed rab se rakhte
Kaumi dangon ke karan khoye rashtra pita jaante hain hum
Par jab koi de kaum ki duhayee Jag uthta hain Dharam
Kapte nahi haath marne unhe jinhe kabhi kaha tha bhai
Balatkar kar baithte hain uss behen ka jiski raksha ki kabhi kasam thi khayi
Jab hota hain Aatankvadi humla hum sarkar ko koste hain
Magar reeshwat dene wale iss hath ko kabhi nai rokte hain
Seema par daate humare sipajiyon se hum bahut pyar karte hain
Par filmon aur cricket ke aagee kuch yaad nai rakh pate hain
Desh ki unnati ki hum sabhi Kamana karte hain
Par unnati mein haath batane ko jaane kyun bhool jate hain
Kartavyon ki ummed hum doosron se rakhte hain
Par apni hi zimmedariyan nahi nibha paate hain
Jab poori tarah se nibhayega hum mein se har koi apni zimmedari
Tab sahi maino mein har din manegi 15 August aur 26 January

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there is no denying fact that 15 august has turned just another holiday.... 4 2days generation...... evey1 has plans.......to complete their work which they couldnot complete in weekdays.........
at the maximum........they might watch a patriotic film........or will listen to PM's speech............... i doubt how many of them wud watch.... ConfusedConfused.........
 
i may sound filmy........... but----koi desh perfect nahi hota..........use perfect banana padta hai......... & ache log.........acha desh banate hai........its the people of the country who make country proud......u dont need to be a special hero........or join a political party ....or join armed forces to show ur patriotism ............
it just needs a little step...... as simple as keep ur city clean..... or when u drive follow traffic rules..... try & be a responsible citizen.........Smile......

what our freedom fighters have done 4 the country........4 us future genration is something commendable............it can never be 4gotten....... but we have to make our country..........much better....4 our coming generation............. Big smile Big smileBig smileBig smileso freedom 4 me wud be.........freedom.....4m all those things........which hamper the country's image on the world map...... Smile

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Posted: 13 August 2010 at 11:45pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by chinnu_manikyam


FREEDOM AT MIDNIGHT

 India is our country. The incredible, rapid growing world power with developing industrialization and well build up brains with a positive attitude towards world peace and no terrorism strategic plans.


wow yaar. nice essay.. we should proud to be an Indian..."JAI HIND"...TongueSmile


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Posted: 14 August 2010 at 1:03am | IP Logged
from me a simple messege......HAPPY INDEPENDENCE DAY.....JAI HIND!

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I believe India still under the bondage from all the disguised discriminations as well. Today's youth always look for professional courses and those who are unconventional are seen as losers. No one has even got a tinge of social commitment. We need to stop thinking ourselves as inferior to the westerner. Brain drains needs to be reduced and the youth needs to take cues from the honourable freedom fighters to build a new nation. Also the burning issues such as Khap murders should be dealt firmly.
 
In the case of our beloved show, I wish to see it taking a new dimension. I sincerely wish that it goes beyond its scope and deals with social issues ( dowry, female infanticide etc.) and stories where people are prevented from committing crimes because prevention is always better than cure.

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15th August 1947 hamare desh Bharat ko Ajaad hoye kayi saal beet gaye..Kayi chamkti subah aur kayi andheri raate ayi aur aj ek baar fer waqt 15th August 2010 ki dahleez par akar ruk gaya ta ke in salo main humne kya paya aur kya khoya iss sab ka hisab kiya ja sake..Pichle 2-3 din se shaheedo ke putlo ki safayi ka kam shuru hogya hoga aur Aj fer koyi mantri Delhi main hamare desh ka tringa lehrahega.. isse beech lakho log phull barshayege aur tringe ko salam hoga.. tv par desh bhakti ke geet chalege aur fer 16th August 2010 ko vohi tringa kahi jhuka huya milega.. shaheedo ke putlo par fer se mitti jam jayegi.. aur hamare desh ke neta fer se Kursi ke jang main jhujh parege.. Sirf 12 ghante aur fer se sab kuch pehle jaisa ho jayega... Agar isse Ajadi diwas kaha jata hain ton hume apne app par sharm ani chahiye.. Bhagat Singh, Kartar Singh Srabha, Udham Singh, Aurobindo Ghosh,Barin Ghosh,Ramprasad Bismi,subhash chander bos,Chandrashekhar Azad,Bal Gangadhar Tilak aur baki sab Krantikaro ko agar pata hota ke hamare desh ka yeh hashar hoga voh kabhi bhi shahadat na dete..

Ameer ameer ho raha hain gareeb gareeb ho raha hain... charo aur hahakar machi hoyi hain... kissan khudkhushiya kar rahe hain... Ek gareeb admi jo poora din majdoori kar 2 waqt ki roti mushkil se khata hain usse iss ajadi ka kya? aur iss 15th August ka? fyada nahi nuksaan he hoya ..sarkari chuti ki vajah se 1 din barbaad hogya... kya isse Ajadi kehte hain?

Ajkal paisa he sab ka baap hain paisa he bhai aur paisa he har ek sukh ka sadhan.. Paisa kamana buri baat nahi hain par kisi ka khoon aur paseena bechkar paisa kamana? kya bolege isse app? election ke douran kya hota hain ke neta har kasbe aur gao main jate hain poora nasha aur paisa logo ki aur phenkte hain aur log vote dete hain.. ab app log kahoge ke log paisa na le? agar main 1 maheena kaam kar 3 hazar rupee kamata ho aur mujhe meri 1 vote ki keemat 3 hazar mil rahi hain main pagal thora na ho jo aisa moka hath se jane doga...kya fark padhta hain satta main kaun atta hain system ton vohi rahega na!! jo neta paisa kharchta hain election ke douran, voh kursi milne ke baad nikelaga bhi ton sahi na? aur kaise mikalega? 1 job ki keemat 10lakh .. paise do aur sarkari noukri le lo.. uper se lekar neeche tak poora department aise he chalta hain aur agar koi imandar officer ata hain usse yeh gandi nali ke kerrhe tikne nahi dete ... ajkal ton voh baat hain ke mantari ke phone ke bina doctor tika bhi nahi lata!!

Videsh foreign countries kyo ate hain log? 100 main se 70 aise hain jo agents ko 10-15 lakh rupee dekar majboori ke mare ate hain... socho jin goro ko desh se nikalne ke liye shaheedo ne shahadat di.. ajj hum paisa dekar uni ki desh gulami ke liye ja rahe hain!!kehte hain ke ladhka ya ladhki videsh hain ..poori tarah set hain kya kisi ne yeh jan ne ki koshish ki ke kya karn hain hum yaha aa rahe hain voh bhi 10-15 lakh rupee karza lekar? agar kisi ko apne ke desh main rujgaar mile bahar aane ki jarorat na padhe!! 1 job hain aur uske liye 1 lakh applications !!! kya kare aj ka youth? kaha jaye? kiske samne jakar apna dukhra roye? jab koyi shahookar akho ke samne baap ki darhi ko hath dalta hain ton chup chap khade hokar taliya ton baja nahi sakte na? yehi karn hain ke hamare bharat mahan ka bhavish ajj ka youth karza lekar bahar aa raha hain .. aur jine apni tango ka 1 hafte main 2 baar check up krana padhta hain voh hamara desh chala rahe hain!!

aj batao jo admi bachpan se sone ki thali main khana khata ho!! chandi ke bartan main pani peeta ho kya voh admi desh ke ek aam admi ki halat samjh sakta hain? mujhe ton nahi lagta aisa!! app jis mahol main rehte hain apki soch ussi tarah ho jati hain aur app har baat apne tareeke aur experience se sochte ho!! Issi liye jitna waqt yeh Gandhi pariwar hain ya BJP ke budhe thag, kuch nahi ho sakta ek gareeb admi ka!! agar gareebo main se koyi neta nikal kar atta hain tabhi unke bare main soch sakta hain jinki poori zindagi issi fikar main nikal jati hain ke kal subah kuch khane ko milega ya nahi?

Hamre desh ka poora system corrupt ho chuka hain ..kehte hain ke hum khud apna system banate hain aur voh ton ussi din nishchit ho gya tha jis din Ambedkar ne sawidan likha tha!! samjhdar log samjh gaye the ke desh ka kya hal hoga age chalkar!! main yeh baat manta ho ke agar Nehru ki jagah Sardar Vallabhbhai Patel desh ke Pardhan mantri hote ton aj Bharat ki tasveer kuch aur hoti.. Lekin kaun Samjhata Gandhi ko!! ek galt faisla aur aj desh ka har gareeb bhugat raha hain...

Ap main kuch mera likha padhne vale soch rahe hoge ke kya hawa main batein kar raha hain aur jinhone kabhi apne ghar se nikalkar kisi gareeb ke ghar ki aur pyar aur humdardi ki nazar se dekha hain, voh meri baat samjhega!!! Jo Ameer hain voh ajaad hain jo chahe kiya khaya peeya ..aur gareeb aj bhi gulaam hain rotti ke 1 tukdhe ka, iss system ka!!!

Agar iss desh ka youth ek hokar corruption aur desh ki har ek burati ke khulaf awaaz utha le.. iss tanashahi sarkar ki jadhe hil sakti hain!! lekin afsos aisa mumkin nahi hain!! hume asani se ladhyea ka sakta hain pardesh ke naam par, rang ke naam par, religion ke naam par!! pehle aisa Angrezo ne kiya aur aj apne ke log kar rahe hain!! bas skin ka color he badla hain baki loot-khoh, maramari voh same he hain!!

Ant main yeh kehna chahoga ke kirpa jo bread apne kutto ko dalte ho usska adha bhi kisi gareeb ke bache ko de do ton apko duwaye he dega!! hum lakho-karoro ke daan kiye ja rahe hain par Kehte hain ke sabse badha daan kisi bhukhe ko khana dene main, kisi pyaso ko pani dene main he hota hain!! kisi gareeb ki aur ankh nikalkar mat dekho ..ankh nikalni he hain ton us system ko nikalo jiski vajah se voh aj beech sadhak ke khada apke hath main fadhe food ko bebas nazar se dekh raha hain!! Kehte hain na koi maa ke pet se har koi nanga he nikalta hain fer uske tan pe kaphde hoge ya nahi yeh maa-baap ki halat par nirbhar hota hain... aur koyi maa ke pet se yeh sochkar nahi niklta ke main badha hokar Doctor banoga ya fer mujhe 2 waqt ki rotti he mil jaye bahut hain!! yeh sab bhi maa baap ki halat par he nirbhar karta hain!! aur maa baap ki halat nirbhar karti hain hamare desh ke system par.. jo ke poori tarah corruption pe fas chuka hain!!


Jai Hindi!!! Azadi Diwas Ki sabko bahut bahut Mubark baat..

Agar koi 1 banda bhi mera likha padh us par amal karta hain ton mujhe dil se bahut khushi hogi aur main manoga ke meri 1 hour ki mehnat safal hogyi





Edited by bhinder.kamboj - 14 August 2010 at 11:38am

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Posted: 14 August 2010 at 10:15pm | IP Logged
Sorry for the late response... I only noticed this thread yesterday night and wanted to reply, but ran out of time. Just adding my two cents as well... Smile

Like Debayon said, Independence means freedom with responsibility. Great responsibility, in fact. It's well known how hard our freedom fighters, leaders and citizens had to strive in order to rescue India from the shackles of foreign rule. When we look at to the great pains and horrors they endured for this, how can anyone not be motivated to do the seemingly smaller things which is our duty as Indians? Patriotism and devotion to the country and our fellow Indians is something which should arise from within, which no one needs to tell us. It should be something as unconditional and powerful as our devotion to our loved ones. It is something which should be demonstrated in actions, not just words. There are many people who would be willing to stand on the rooftops, wave our flag and scream that they are proud Indians, yet the next minute they don't hesitate to go and engage in illegal activities. No matter what is the level of those activities, they are stabbing their country in the back. Sadly, this list includes a lot of high-ranking officials as well.

Then there are the people who almost directly say that patriotism and duty for their country is of little importance for them. I've met decent, grown-up people who didn't even bother standing up during the National Anthem, or singing along. When asked how one should try to be a good citizen of India, their answer is "Arre chhodo yaar, ek humare yeh sab karne se kya hoga?". This is exactly the kind of attitude which is clouding many of the citizens' decisions and making them forget their duty to the country. Worse, they are only spreading this attitude and encouraging their family and children to be the same way. Why is it that when the news arrives how our brave soldiers died when defending the country from foreign militants, they will go "ooh" and say how proud they are of them and their country, yet they can't do something as simple as keeping the city street clean by not spreading trash or spitting there? Fighting for the country in wars and battles, and defending it from invaders is arguably the highest form of patriotism there, but patriotism is not just limited to these duties.

Being a conscious citizen is patriotism. Standing up and singing the National Anthem and National Song with heart is patriotism. Not spreading waste and following the rules is patriotism. Being honest and being courageous to refuse when asked to do an illegal thing is patriotism. Helping preserve our wildlife and floral diversity is patriotism. Trying to eradicate poverty and illiteracy and helping in the development of the country is patriotism. Creating a favourable impression of India in foreigners, whether online or in person, is patriotism. Keeping your country's head high on an international level by winning competitions is patriotism. When called, going to national duty and joining the war is patriotism. Saving someone from a homicidal terrorist, at great risk, is patriotism.

While the last two are obviously rare and highly demanding situations which not everyone is capable of, everyone can at least try to follow the rest of the points (and many more similar ones) which are seemingly small but are very important for the country! From where did our great freedom fighters like Bhagat Singh, Lala Lajpat Rai, Mahatma Gandhi etc. get the strength and motivation to be willing to wade through Hell itself in order to gain freedom for India? The answer is that their love for the country and its citizens, and their determination to reach their goal under any circumstances was far greater than anything the British Raj could throw at them, not even death itself. This kind of patriotism cannot arise within anyone just by listening to speeches or reading books. It has to be truly felt and come from the heart! And when it does, then doing duties for the country feels not only easy, but something to be genuinely proud of!

I can't say we can say that youth today aren't valuing our hard-earned Independence, because from my personal experience I noticed that several young people are genuinely devoted to our country, while the same cannot be said about quite some grown-up people. I think the individual's personality matters more than their age in this case. When the enormity of the importance of duty towards the country and the true greatness and potential of India is realized by them from the heart, patriotism apne-aap aa jaati hai! So let's all be true proud Indians and let our actions prove it, chalo duniya mein Bharat ka naam uncha karein! Smile

BHARAT MAATA KI JAI. JAI HIND!

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Alright, I know that India is quite corrupted, but why do you think so? Firstly, I believe it ius the land-man ratio in India. So many people living in such a small area, which of course leads to a greater struggle for existence. Secondly, when the British left us, they took away most of our wealth, resources etc..Basically, we had to start from scratch! In addition the divide-and-rule left us in a further political turmor, further heightened by the rising tensions between India and Pakistan during the Cold War. Obviously, people would want to live a better life, because in our country, it's always a do-or-die situation. And a better life is certainly incomplete without money, which everyone would want. Imagine yourself as a chowkidaar with 3 kids and a wife, doing night duty, and someone wants to get in but you strictly have orders not to allow anyone to enter. The man who wants to enter suddenly pushes a Rs. 1000 note at you.Now what would you do? Of course, if better sense prevailed, you would not take the bribe. But if this was a real life situation, most likely the person would, thinking of his family, his little kids etc.. We may feel it's not right, but we have probably never been in such a situation before. Anyways, the struggle that we go through probably makes us curse about why India of all the places, but I believe the struggle is good for us, it teaches us how to be tough and self-sufficient, how to survive in damn tough conditions, in fact, that is the essence of true independence. Other citizens of other wealthy countries have already been provided with everything, they have been placed in a world where the basic necessities have been provided to them, and they can afford to goof around and not study, and still lead a healthy life, while the Indians and Asians who imigrate there looking  for a better standard of living, do most of the hard work for them.So, we must never compare with them, situations are different. Another reason why we must never compare India to other western countries is because of how long they've been independent. The US became independent in 1776, unlike India, which became independent in 1947. They've had their share of goof-ups too, and they struggled too(The Great Depression), but they learnt from their mistakes, and became a successful nation. I think India can do the same too, especially since India has sharper brains on the rise.
 
Another thing I have noticed is that the common man always complains about the government doing nothing. In Delhi, people say NDMC is at fault. In Kolkata, KMC is at fault, and in Mumbai, SS/MNS is always on the rise. Everyone is seen passing the buck to others. I think we should stop this, and instead of finding problems, look for solutions collectively.
 
I think I hate, yes, hate about India is the regionalism aspect involved. Frequently, I see people bashing people from other states(on other forums) and stuff like Santa-Banta jokes still exist!OuchLike Akshay Kumar said in Khatta Meetha " England mein English milte hain, America mein Americans milte hain, India mein sirf Bengalis, Madrasi, Gujrati, Punjabi milte hain, koi Indian nahi milta"ClapClapPeople must remember that we carry an Indian passport, and not any Bengali, Madrasi or whatever passsport.
 
OK....that's all from meLOL

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