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Pareeksha - An eternal love story

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Rajkumar Dharam' A very cultivated, obedient Rajkumar. Dedicated and respective to his culture, Dharam states himself as very cultural. Very nave in matters with Rajkumari's, Dharam falls for Rajkumari Sia. Adored by everyone in the kingdom, Dharam is especially close to his younger brother, Veer. Though teased by him on several occasions, Dharam neglects too many practical jokes.

Rajkumar Veer' An immature cultivated, mutinous Rajkumar. Objective and disregarded to his culture, Veer states himself as very uncultured. Very cunning in matters with Rajkumari's, Veer falls for Rajkumari Nandini. Pampered by everyone in the kingdom, Veer is extremely close and protective to his older brother, Dharam. A prankster and frolic towards Dharam, Veer detests too many rules and regulations.

Rajkumari Sia' A very humble, shy Rajkumari. Committed to her lord Ganesh, Sia respects every human being from the bottom of her heart. Innocent and docile in the matters of marriage and love, Sia falls for Rajkumar Dharam. Cared by everyone in her kingdom, Sia is partially close to her younger sister, Nandini. Sia is very punctual yet frightened of weapons and blood.

Rajkumari Nandini' A clamorous and blaring Rajkumari. Committed to weapons and horses, Nandini dislikes any interference in her life. Reserved and snobby in the matters of marriage, Nandini falls for Rajkumar Veer. Partially loved by everyone in her kingdom, Nandini is partially close to her older sister, Sia. Nandini is unpunctual and only frightened of the dark.


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Contents

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Part 2 - Page 1
Part 3 - Page 1
Part 4 - Page 1


Edited by Harmonious - 10 August 2010 at 5:06pm

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Part 1

The dullness enhanced to the atmosphere in the Golden Hall. Many of the faces seemed affectionate and sympathetic, but yet the girl didn't know what had happened to her mother. Staring down at the laid figure; it seemed as if the colour had drained from her face, her harmonious voice barricaded behind a wall which couldn't be broken, her glossy red lips sealed and her eyes closed forever...

Rajkumari Nandini: Ma koh kya hua hai, Sia?

Rajkumari Sia: (sobbing) Kuch nahi hua Ma koh, Nandini. Jao tum thori der ke liye so jao. Pari, isse le jao..

Nodding meekly, she gave a look at her dead mother unknown of what had happened to her and then followed the maid who lead her up the classy stairs. Concurrently, the corpse was lifted and for the last time, Sia saw her mother leaving her house forever..

After 10 years everything changed. The Rajkumari's had grown older and the Maharaj had gone senile among these years. Now the palace is ruled by the Rajkumari's uncle who is brutal and disregarded towards them..

Concurrently, there was a palace named Aryanagar. Aryanagar was a land of happiness and joys and everyone adored the Maharaj, Maharani and the Rajkumars. The palace of Aryanagar was the biggest amongst the all and so had the most powerful soldiers and weapons. Palace of Awadhi and Aryanagar were on perfect terms and so the story tells all about their journeys..

As we fade away from Awadhi, a hard sheen of light enters the magnificent chamber where a round bed is occupied. Concealed by the blanket, the Rajkumar of Aryanagar is trying to hide from the sunlight and the echoing screams of his mother..

Maharani Nivriti: (yanking the blanket off him) Veer! Utho, Veer! Tum kabhi nahi sudro ge! Tumhe pata bhi hai ke kya waqt hai, tumhe surya namaskar nahi karna kya?

Veer: (mumbling) Aaj nahi, Ma. Aaj Suraj Ji se kaho keh hume shama kar de. Hum kal puri raat chanda ji koh gurte rahe..

Maharani Nivriti: (giggling) Tum bhi na, Veer! Dharam toh keh raha tha keh tum kal jaldi so gaye the. Chalo ab, utho! Maharaj ne hum sab koh shaahi kamre me bolaya hai..

Veer: (moaning) Ab maine kya kiya, Ma? Kal ke hadse ke liye toh mujhe suna diya tha na, aur kitna sunaye ge..?

Maharani Nivriti: (pulling him off the bed) Veer! Zaroori nahi ke har bar tumhare bare me hi ho sab kuch.. tum jao aur naha lo.. aur phir seede, shaahi kamre mein aana aur jaldi.. (rushes out of the room)

Veer: (mumbling and falling back on the bed) Ji Ma..

A few hours later, when everyone was present in the 'Shaahi Kamra', the Maharaj heartily announced..

Maharaj Aryawardhan: (smiling) Aap sab ke liye bohut bari khush kabri hai. Kal Rajkumar Dharam aur Rajkumar Veer Awadhi jaah rahe hai. Awadhi ke Maharaj Natraj toh aap koh yaad hi honge? Kal unki beti Rajkumari Sia ka janam din hai..

Veer: Kya humara jaana zaroori hai? Aur sirf hum hi kyu? Aap kyun nahi aur Ma..

Maharaj Aryawardhan: (glaring) Veer! Unho ne sab koh niyotra beja tha par kal hi mujhe aur Maharani ji koh Shiv Ji mandhir prasad charha ne jana hai aur uske baad maha mantri ji se bhi milna hai. Isliye unko bura nah lage toh aap dono hi jaye ge..

Dharam: (interrupting) Ji Maharaj. Hum aur Veer zaroor jaiye ge. Bas aap sab kuch hum pe chor dije..

Maharaj Aryawardhan: (beaming) Dharam, hum me aap se yahi umeed hai ke jin koh jaana chahiye woh Awadhi ja ke hi rahe aur kissi bi haal me wahan se ek din rahe bina waapis nah aye.. (eyeing Veer)

Veer: (gasping) Ek din!? Ek din, kyun? Hum toh sirf shaamil hone jaah rahe hai unki khushi main toh phir humme wahan rukhne ki kya zaroorat hai..

Maharani Nivriti: Veer, unki icha thi ke aap aur Dharam kamse kam ek din unke saat rahe. Itne saalon se woh aap ka intezaar kar rahe hai, toh acha nahi lagta..

Maharaj Aryawardhan: (warning) Aur aap unke adarsh ka palan kare ge, warna hum se bura nahi ho ga. Aap aaj hi nikal jaiye thake kal thak aap pohunch jaiye aur iske ek din baad aap waapis aah sakte hai..

Dharam: (nodding) Ji Maharaj. Hum abhi nikal the hai. Chalo Veer..

Meanwhile, in Awadhi, the Rajkumari's were having a hard and rough time with their uncle who went on blabbering noisely about manners eyeing Nandini most of the time..

Maharaj Natraj: (glaring at Nandini) Aur is baar kuch ghar bar hui tho phir hum se bura nahi ho ga. Us bar Rajkumar Harsh jab aye the toh humari naak kat gayi thi! Is bar hum aisa kuch nahi chahte!

Nandini: (rolling eyes) Par usme humari galti kya thi? Humne toh unhe sirf ek thofa diya tha par agar unhe uska istemaal karna nahi aaya toh usme humari kya galti hai..

Sia: (interrupting) Maharaj, iss bar aisa kuch nahi ho ga. Aap hum pe barosa rakhiye, iss bar Nandini kuch ulta seedha nahi karegi..

Maharaj Natraj: (barely listening) Pishli bar bhi aap ne kuch aisa hi kaha tha, Sia. Par aap inhe rok nahi payi aur humari naak katwa di. Is bar aap dono ko kari se kari saza mil he gi agar kuch ulta seedha hua..

Nandini: (taking Sia's side) Aap isse kyun daant rahe hai, woh hum hi the jisne kiya tha woh sab. Sia ne humme bohut rokha bhi..

Maharaj Natraj: (smirking) Woh toh hum bohut aachi thara se jaante hai. Sia ke janam din me kuch ghar bhar nahi honi chahiye. Acha ho ga ke aap yahan tashreef laiye hi na, kamse kam mehmaan toh surakshit rahe ge..

Sia: (aghast) Yeh aap ne kya keh diya, Maharaj. Meri behen mere janam din pe naah aye, isse acha toh hum janam din hi nah manaye..

Nandini: (rolling eyes) Sia, humme waise bhi abyas karna hai. Tumhara janam din manana shayad humare naseeb mein hi nahi hai.. (muttering under breath) Par un Rajkumaron koh toh hum nahi chore ge.. unhe yahan se baga de ge tabhi asli maza aye ga..

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End of Part 1. Will update Part 2 Soon..


Edited by Harmonious - 10 August 2010 at 7:04am

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Part 2

Dharam: Waise, tum kabhi Awadhi gaye ho?

Veer: (snorting) Hum ne pehli baar aisa naam suna hai aur tum jane ki baat kar te ho. Haan ek baar humne sandesh para tha kisi Maharaj Someshwar ka ke unki patni Maharani Sanvi ki mrityu ho gayi..

Dharam: (aghast) Yeh sandesh tumne kahan se para..?

Veer: (scratching head) Yaad nahi. Main bohut chota tha jab maine woh sandesh para tha. Shayad Pitaji ke kamre se..

Dharam: (teasing tone) Waise wahan bohut khoobsurat Rajkumariyan hain. Ma ne humme bataya..aur iss bar woh paki tumhari shaadi kar de gi..

Veer: (gasping) Dharam, tumhari shaadi humari shaadi se puri ek saal pehle ho gi. Woh kya naam hai uss Rajkumari ka..aah Mohini..

Dharam: (annoyed) Hum uss sirpiri se khabhi shaadi nahi karege. Tum kyun nahi kar lete Mohini se shaadi. Woh toh tumhe Ujjaine bhi bula rahi thi..

Veer: (changing the topic) Woh dekho, Awadhi aah gaya..

Both the princes can't believe what is in front of their eyes. A beautiful Royal Garden barricaded by two huge gates. Two guards are standing in front of the gates with a royal suit on and a sword hanging from their waist. They turn to see the princes and exchange baffled looks..

Dharam: (clearing his throat) Hum Rajkumar Dharam hain aur yeh Rajkumar Veer. Hum Aryanagar se aye hai Rajkumari Sia ke janam din ki shoob kam naye dene..

Guard 1: (staring at them from head to toe) Theek hai, par tum dono ke akele aye ho? Maharaj aur Maharani ji nahi aye?

Veer: (sarcastically) Isse tumhe kya? Humme undar pradane do aur apna kaam se kaam rakho..samjhe?

Giving him a glare, the guard opened the gate allowing the princes to gallop in as they followed the rocky path, the second guard stared at them unconvincingly while the other mouthed a few swears..

After a few minutes of silence, Dharam eyed a girl watering the plants. He turned to face Veer who was heading in another direction. Calling out to him angrily, Veer turned to face him meekly..

Veer: (surprised) Kya hai, Dharam?

Dharam: (hissing) Yeh humara mahal nahi hai, Veer jisme tumhe gusse chale jaah rahe ho! Humme tori puchtaach karne do..

Sia: (startled) Ji, kya hum aap ki madat kar sakte hain?

Surprised by the sweet voice, Dharam turned to face a girl dressed more like a princess. Dazzled by her beauty, he ran out of words and just stared at her which made her a little uneasy and fidgety..



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Sia stared back at the handsome prince with all the innocent eyes searching for several answers. She didn't know but some intense force caused her to remain silent until..

Veer: (clearing throat)Ahem..maaf kije, par hum Rajkumari Sia ki janam din ki khushi main aye hai aur hum ek din ke liye yahan ke mehmaan hai..

Sia: (startled) Ji, hum hi Rajkumari Sia hain. Par aap kahan ke Rajkumar hain..?

Dharam: (interrupting) Ji, hum Aryanagar ke Rajkumar hain. Main Rajkumar Dharam hoon aur yeh Rajkumar Veer hain..

Sia: (smiling)Aap se milkar bohut khushi hui. Aap koh yahan aane main koi dikhat toh nahi hui na..?

Veer: (yawning)Ji nahi, humare paas ghor sawaari thi isliye hum itna nahi thake..

Dharam: (glaring) Veer! Maaf kije, yeh thora tak gaya hai tabhi aisi ulti seedhi baatein kar raha hai..

Veer: (surprised) Acha? Main thak gaya aur mujhe hi nahi pata. Wah Dharam tum toh humare mann mein jaank lete ho..

Sia: (interrupting) Aiye, hum aap koh undar le chalte hai. Wahan par, Maharaj aap ka behsabri se intezaar kar rahe hain..

And with that she lead the two curious Rajkumars inside as they were dazzled to see the beauty of the palace. Everything was glistening and they felt hallucinated. Finally she stopped in front of the chamber and knocked meekly..

For a few minutes the door remained closed and then it flung open and Rajkumari Nandini stood dressed in boyish clothes with an angry expression. This time, Veer was dazzled to see her but she barely paid any attention to him..

Nandini: (glaring directly at Sia) Kya hai? Itni der se kyun katka rahi thi..?

Sia: (beaming) Inse milo. Yeh Aryanagar ke Rajkumar Dharam aur Veer hain. Waise tum pitaji ke kamre mein kya kar rahi thi?

Nandini: (sidestepping Sia) Unki daant soon rahi thi. Par tum toh janti ho na ke aaj ka janam din kitna mazedaar hone waala hai..

Veer: (interrupting) Aap yahan ki Rajkumari hain?

Nandini began to snap when suddenly Sia interrupted..

Sia: (interrupting) Ji Rajkumar Veer. Yeh Rajkumari Nandini hain, humari choti behen..

Veer: (muttering under his breath) Lagti toh kahi ki dakhoo rani..

Nandini: (glaring) Aap ne kuch kaha, Rajkumar Veer?

Veer: (pretending to be surprised) Hum ne? Kuch bhi toh nahi, hai na Dharam?

Dharam: (stammering by Nandini's glare) Haan, Veer ne toh kuch nahi kaha..

Nandini:(turning towards Sia) Pitaji undar hain, hum ab chalte hain, abyas ke liye. Sia, tumhari liye ek khushkabri hai, Rajkumar Harsh bhi aah raha hain..

Sia: (shocked) Kya! Tum sach keh rahi ho Nandini..

But she got no reply as Nandini was at the end of the corridor disappearing behind the pillar..

Dharam: (curiously)Yeh Rajkumar Harsh kaun hai? Aap usse janti hain?

Sia: (nodding) Ji. Pichli baar toh Nandini ne usse baga diya tha par iss bar Pitaji zaroor humari shaadi usse teh kar denge. Khair aap undar aiye..

Dharam stood stationary for a few moments as Sia walked inside tears brimming in her eyes. Veer yet stood their noticing Dharam's sadness and then a plan struck his mind but for this he needed Nandini's help..

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nice ff.plz do continue Tongue

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Part 4

The Maharaj was seated on the silhouette couch as the three royals walked in with their palms joined together. The Maharaj immediately stood up beaming..

Maharaj Natraj: (beaming) Rajkumar Dharam Veer! Swagat hai aap ka..yahan aane mein kohi dikhat toh nahi hui?

Dharam: (shaking his head) Ji, bilkul nahi Maharaj. Hum toh bas doh palo mein hi yahan pohunch gaye..

Veer: (amazed) Acha? Humme toh pata hi nahi chala..

Maharaj Natraj: Chalo acha hai. Waise humme aap se bohut zaroori baat karni thi. Sia, aap jaa ke bojan ka intezaam kije..

Sia nodded and turned to walk out but met Dharam's gaze and smiled. He kindly smiled back dreamily watching her go but turned back around to face the Maharaj..

Maharaj Natraj: (wondering) Rajkumar Dharam, woh hum soch rahe the ke aap aur Rajkumari Sia aur Rajkumar Veer aap aur Rajkumari Nandini kal mela dekhne jaana chahte hain?

Veer: (spluttering) Ji!? Hum aur.. Rajkumari Nandini..?

Maharaj Natraj: (wondering) Unho ne aap se kuch kaha kya? Hum unki taraj se maafi mangte hain par..

Dharam: (interrupting) Arey nahi nahi! Unho ne aisa kuch nahi kiya.. hum bilkul mela dekhne jaiye ge..

Maharaj Natraj: Ab aap jaiye, bojan kar lije.. aur uske baat shaam ke liye tayaar rahiye, aakhir humari beti Rajkumari Sia ka janam din hain..

Both the princes nodded and made their way out of the chamber. Walking through the hallway, Dharam didn't realise when Rajkumari Sia fell in his arms. Sia was embarrassed, yet Dharam and Veer were shocked..

Sia: (trying to stand up) Aap humme chore ge.. woh Nandini humare peeche baag rahi thi aur.. hum aap ke hi paas aah rahe the bojan ke liye bulane..

Dharam: (helping her stand up) Woh humme maaf kije, acha bojan hum bhi bas aah hi rahe the..

Veer: (interrupting) Haan, aur Maharaj humme kal mela dekhne bej rahe hain..

Nandini: (stepping from behind a pillar) Toh tum yahan ho, Sia! Toh tum kya keh rahi thi, Rajkumar Dharam bohut dil ke saaf hain aur yeh baat tum unhe yahan batane..

Sia: (interrupting) Nandini! Uhh.. ab hum chalte hain.. (racing off)

Nandini: (staring at the two Rajkumars) Kya hua? Bojan nahi karna hai kya?

Dharam: Ji hum abhi aaye.. (secretly happy)

Nandini turns to leave but is stopped as Veer grabs her wrist

Veer: (holding onto her wrist) Suniye, uhh.. humme aap se kuch zaroori baat karni thi.. akele mein..

Nandini: (startled) Ji? Kya baat hai..?

Dharam: (grinning towards Veer) Toh main chalta hoon..

Nandini: (embarrassed) Kya baat karni hai aap ko humse? Aur akele mein hi kyun..?

Veer: (releasing her wrist) Ji woh.. humara bhai aap ki behen se pyaar karta hain..

Nandini: Ji, hum jaante hain. Aur humari behen bhi karti hain..par aap yeh humme kyun bata rahe hain?

Veer: Kyunki aap ke Maharaj ne shayad Rajkumar Harsh ki Rajkumari Sia ke saath shaadi teh kar di hai..

Nandini: (shocked) Usme kon se bhari baat hai, hum Rajkumar Harsh koh is baar bhi baga denge.. par aap apni kher manaye..

Veer: (baffled) Ji kya matlab hain tumhara, Gamandi..

Nandini: (glaring) Hum aur Ghamandi? Bigra Rais..

And with that she turned away and walked off followed by Veer..

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lovely.very cute.plz keep writing.bye tc

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