HI GUYS, THIS IS MY FIRST FF, AS YOU KNOW AM RECENTLY JOINED THE FORUM AND HAVE BECOME AN ADDICTED ZOMBIE OF SERIAL GEET AND SPECIALLY FOR MAAN
I NEED YOUR SUPPORT AND COMMENTS TO CONTINUE THIS POST.
JUST MY VERSION OF MAAN AND GEET LOVE CONFESSION
SO LETS GET STARTED
AT THE OUTSHOUSE
GEET COMES TO MAAN:
Geet: dadima ne yeh photos bheje hai , kuch ladkiyon ki hai, aap dekh lijiye
maan: oh !!!! theek hai inhe rakdo baad menin dekhoonga (teasingly)
geet: dadima ko jawab abhi chahiye, panditji se baat karni hai
maan checking photos one by one
- yeh !! oh god isne toh kitna make up kiya hai – bhoot lag rahi ---- reject
- iss ladki ---- long hair – no – thodi modern honi chahiye ? kya kehti hoon geet??
geet : hhmmmm sadly checking her long hair
maan: ladki salwar kameez nahi, mujhe to skirts yaa phir dresses pehnti ho aur compelte city girl ho … teasingly right geet !!
GEET :: Haan toh inhe reject kardiya aapne
Maan : kahan jaa rahi ho?
Geet : Dadima ke paas
Maan : Theek hai !!! Jaldi aana ,,,, kuch kaam baki hai (mischievously)
Geet: OK (sadly) on the way thinking kya farak padta hai ki unhe kaisi ladki pasand hai phir mein itne bechain kyon ho rahi hoon? She reaches dadima's room
Geet : Dadima yeh lijiye saari photos
Dadima: Geet !! tum itni jaldi aa gayi ….. kya who sahabzade naaraaz ho gaya kya???
Geet: Nahi (sadly) unhe toh koi modern ladki chahiye
Dadima: Theek hai, tum jaao mein usse baat karoongi
Geet returns to out house
Maan : kya hua ? tumhe kuch kehna hai ??
Geet : Nahi
Maan : Achaa tum coffee peeyongi ? shayad tensed ho ?
Geet : Nahi
Maan : Theek hai to mere liye bana do
Geet in the kitchen thinking about just what happened
Maan comes very near her, She is in deep thoughts recollecting the 1st time she met Maan, office scenes, dargah scene
Maan comes near her and whispers: Main tayyar hoon ! bas tumhare haan ka intezaar hai
Geet : All of a sudden comes back to senses Sir aapne kuch kaha
Maan : Nahi toh !! tumne kya suna Geet. Kehdo job hi tumhare dil mein hai
Geet : yeh aap kaisi baatein kar rahe hai
Maan : Nahi, mein toh bas yeh keh raha tha ki coffee ready ho gayi
Geet jee bas abhi deti hoon
Maan : Achaa mujhe cookies bhi denaa
Geet trying to find it but cannot, now she is checking the upper shelves
Maan behind her, geet again starts dreaming while finding and doesn't realize that Maan is just behind her
And then Maan holds her from behind so close to each other.. both lost in passion
His touch was so strong that she could actually feel his muscles
Breeze passing through the window made geet's hair touch his cheeks. It was raining outside. He never felt this before , he could smell her perfume
Geet's eyes were closed she wanted to feel and wanted more of MAAN.
She knew that he is the one for her
Maan touched her neckline sofly, which made geet shiver down her spine, Maan's lips were close to her neck, they both could hear their fast paced hart beats and breaths
And the ultimate moment arrived
Maan whispers in geet's ears.
Maan : Dadi se kehna ki maine ladki pasand kar li hai, yeh wohi hai jisne mujhe pehli baar pyaar ka ehsaas karaya hai, yeh wohi hai jo mujhse choti baat par ladd jati hai, ek wohi hao jo meri itni fikar karti hai ki meri photo toot jaane par deewano ki tarah mere liye duaa maangne dargah chali jati hai, yeh wohi hai jisne har musibat mein babaji ke baad sirf mujhe yaad kiya hai, ek wohi hai jo mera ghar basaa sakti hai., jiske saath mein apni poori life jee sakta hoon, isine mujhe hasna sikha diya, yeh hi hai jo meri Dadi ko apni samajh kar unhe wohi pyaar aur samman deti hai jaise mein aaj tak deta aaya hoon
Geet had tears in her eyes, maan turns her and wipe her tears and ask her to open her eyes
Geet apni aankhen kholo
Geet : Sir please !!
Maan : Tumhare liye mein pehli se hi Maan hoon , SIRF MAAN
Geet Silent, her eyes spoke what her hear felt , she slightly open her eyes
Maan : jaan na chahti ki who ladki kaun hai (geet looking deeply into his eyes) WOH TUM HO GEET !! SIRF TUM >>>>>>
Maan still looking into her eyes
Geet: Maan mein aapse kuch kehna chahti hoon
Maan : Kuch nahi geet…. aaj nahi and they he gets closer to her and they hug (after a long hug)
Maan : Mein tumhare se bhi sunna chahta hoon
Geet : Kya
Maan : I LOVE YOU !!
Geet : Happy & naughtily :: I
Maan eager to hear those words ….. aage
Geet : I LOVE
Maan :: I LOVE ….aage bhi bolo
Geet : I LOVE Long pause abhi nahi….. baad main
Maan : Kyun???? Abhi kyun nahi
Geet : Coffee thandi ho gayi hai
Maan : what ?? coffee
Geet : wohi jo aapne 30 mins se uss table pe rakhi huyi hai
Maan : TUM BILKUL BACHI HOON
MEIN WAKAYI PAGAL HO GAYA HOON
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