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FF ONE SHOT MAAN & GEET ::::::: LOVE CONFESSIO

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queen_ali

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Posted: 09 August 2010 at 12:23am | IP Logged

HI GUYS, THIS IS MY FIRST FF, AS YOU KNOW AM RECENTLY JOINED THE FORUM AND HAVE BECOME AN ADDICTED ZOMBIE OF SERIAL GEET AND SPECIALLY FOR MAAN

 

I NEED YOUR SUPPORT AND COMMENTS TO CONTINUE THIS POST.

JUST MY VERSION OF MAAN AND GEET LOVE CONFESSION

 

SO LETS GET STARTED

 

AT THE OUTSHOUSE

GEET COMES TO MAAN: 

 

Geet:  dadima ne yeh photos bheje hai , kuch ladkiyon ki hai, aap dekh lijiye

maan:  oh !!!! theek hai inhe rakdo baad menin dekhoonga (teasingly)

geet:  dadima ko jawab abhi chahiye, panditji se baat karni hai

maan checking photos one by one

  1. yeh !! oh god isne toh kitna make up kiya hai – bhoot lag rahi ---- reject
  2. iss ladki ---- long hair – no – thodi modern honi chahiye ? kya kehti hoon geet??

geet : hhmmmm sadly checking her long hair

maan: ladki salwar kameez nahi, mujhe to skirts yaa phir dresses pehnti ho aur compelte city girl ho … teasingly right geet !!

 

GEET :: Haan toh inhe reject kardiya aapne

Maan : kahan jaa rahi ho?

Geet : Dadima ke paas

Maan : Theek hai !!! Jaldi aana ,,,, kuch kaam baki hai (mischievously)

Geet: OK (sadly) on the way thinking kya farak padta hai ki unhe kaisi ladki pasand hai phir mein itne bechain kyon ho rahi hoon?  She reaches dadima's room

Geet : Dadima yeh lijiye saari photos

Dadima: Geet !! tum itni jaldi aa gayi ….. kya who sahabzade naaraaz ho gaya kya???

Geet:  Nahi (sadly) unhe toh koi modern ladki chahiye

Dadima: Theek hai, tum jaao mein usse baat karoongi

Geet returns to out house

Maan : kya hua ? tumhe kuch kehna hai ??

Geet : Nahi

Maan : Achaa tum coffee peeyongi ? shayad tensed ho ?

Geet : Nahi

Maan : Theek hai to mere liye bana do

Geet in the kitchen thinking about just what happened

Maan comes very near her, She is in deep thoughts recollecting the 1st time she met Maan, office scenes, dargah scene

Maan comes near her and whispers:   Main tayyar hoon ! bas tumhare haan ka intezaar hai

Geet : All of a sudden comes back to senses Sir aapne kuch kaha

Maan : Nahi toh !! tumne kya suna Geet. Kehdo job hi tumhare dil mein hai

Geet : yeh aap kaisi baatein kar rahe hai

Maan : Nahi, mein toh bas yeh keh raha tha ki coffee ready ho gayi

Geet jee bas abhi deti hoon

Maan : Achaa mujhe cookies bhi denaa

Geet trying to find it but cannot, now she is checking the upper shelves

Maan behind her, geet again starts dreaming while finding and doesn't realize that Maan is just behind her

And then Maan holds her from behind so close to each other.. both lost in passion

His touch was so strong that she could actually feel his muscles

Breeze passing through the window made geet's hair touch his cheeks. It was raining outside. He never felt this before , he could smell her perfume

Geet's eyes were closed she wanted to feel and wanted more of MAAN.

She knew that he is the one for her

Maan touched her neckline sofly, which made geet shiver down her spine, Maan's lips were close to her neck, they both could hear their fast paced hart beats and breaths

And the ultimate moment arrived

Maan whispers in geet's ears.

 

Maan : Dadi se kehna ki maine ladki pasand kar li hai, yeh wohi hai jisne mujhe pehli baar pyaar ka ehsaas karaya hai, yeh wohi hai jo mujhse choti baat par ladd jati hai, ek wohi hao jo meri itni fikar karti hai ki meri photo toot jaane par deewano ki tarah mere liye duaa maangne dargah chali jati hai, yeh wohi hai jisne har musibat mein babaji ke baad sirf mujhe yaad kiya hai, ek wohi hai jo mera ghar basaa sakti hai., jiske saath mein apni poori life jee sakta hoon, isine mujhe hasna sikha diya, yeh hi hai jo meri Dadi ko apni samajh kar unhe wohi pyaar aur samman deti hai jaise mein aaj tak deta aaya hoon

 

Geet had tears in her eyes, maan turns her and wipe her tears and ask her to open her eyes

Geet apni aankhen kholo

Geet : Sir please !!

Maan : Tumhare liye mein pehli se hi Maan hoon , SIRF MAAN

Geet Silent, her eyes spoke what her hear felt , she slightly open her eyes

Maan : jaan na chahti ki who ladki kaun hai (geet looking deeply into his eyes) WOH TUM HO GEET !! SIRF TUM >>>>>>

Maan still looking into her eyes

Geet: Maan  mein aapse kuch kehna chahti hoon

Maan : Kuch nahi geet…. aaj nahi and they he gets closer to her and they hug (after a long hug)

Maan : Mein tumhare se bhi sunna chahta hoon

Geet : Kya

Maan : I LOVE YOU !!

Geet : Happy & naughtily :: I

Maan eager to hear those words ….. aage

Geet : I LOVE

Maan :: I LOVE ….aage bhi bolo

Geet : I LOVE   Long pause   abhi nahi….. baad main

Maan : Kyun???? Abhi kyun nahi

Geet : Coffee thandi ho gayi hai

Maan : what  ?? coffee

Geet : wohi jo aapne 30 mins se uss table pe rakhi huyi hai

Maan : TUM BILKUL BACHI HOON

            MEIN WAKAYI PAGAL HO GAYA HOON

Achha lage to Like button press karna ..............Love Nilofer

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Maneetkraze

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Posted: 09 August 2010 at 12:35am | IP Logged
Maan's confession/dialogue is tooooooo good. My favorite confession dialogue. LOLLOLLOL Very well written.Thumbs Up

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Posted: 09 August 2010 at 12:36am | IP Logged

Maan comes near her and whispers:   Main tayyar hoon ! bas tumhare haan ka intezaar hai


This line was sooooooooooooooooo sweet!Day Dreaming

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bluedreamz953

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Posted: 09 August 2010 at 12:37am | IP Logged
Love it
please continue
pls add me to the pm list
is geet pregnant in ur ff?

adoremevirgo

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Posted: 09 August 2010 at 12:44am | IP Logged
wonderful....i loved it....now really i cant wait for maan to confess....i really really wish the confession scene will be out of the world....not before seen in any other love story....and a hug is long due....

queen_ali

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Posted: 09 August 2010 at 12:55am | IP Logged
Originally posted by desigurl953

Love it
please continue
pls add me to the pm list
is geet pregnant in ur ff?
 
yes she is pregnant , thank you for your support

Jotz_92

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Posted: 09 August 2010 at 1:15am | IP Logged

awwwww such a sweet ff just Luv it

was blushing all the time during reading ur ff

swetha10

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Posted: 09 August 2010 at 1:46am | IP Logged
wow itz lovely... maan confession was cute.. plzz continue soon n do pm me..

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