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anumeha_rajat

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Posted: 08 August 2010 at 2:14am | IP Logged

wooowww amazing....

gonna be amazing....

cs is superb....

loking forward to it...

thnx for the pm.........

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Posted: 08 August 2010 at 4:58am | IP Logged
Antara Dear
very nice start
so many CHARACTERS
mein tu bhool jaooo gi koon kis ka bhai koon kis ka beta every time update read karne se CHARACTER SKETCH read karna paray ga LOL tab jaa ke yaad rehay ga ke koon kya
hey plz update soon and PM me.
waiting 4 ur next update.

Edited by moonlight2630 - 08 August 2010 at 4:57am

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Posted: 08 August 2010 at 8:33am | IP Logged
Lovely CS continue soon

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Posted: 08 August 2010 at 8:39am | IP Logged
wow soo many characters. hmmm but its interesting. waiting for ur update and thnx for the pm and do pm me again wen u update

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Posted: 08 August 2010 at 11:50am | IP Logged
PART 1

We see a beautiful house and enter it to see it all dark. Its 4am in the morning and everyone is sleeping peacefully but we hear some noises coming from upstairs, let's go check it out. We go up the stairs and see two figures standing near a door; one is a male and the other a female. The guy signals the girl to go in. The girl slowly opens the door and we see it is someone's bedroom.

The girl slowly tip toes to the side of the bed and sees a girl sleeping peacefully. The girl gives an evil grin and carefully places a toy lizard near the sleeping girl's pillow. She looks at the door and gives thumbs up to the guy. She again turns toward the sleeping girl and we see its none other than Kripa Wadwa. Kripa slowly takes out a feather from her back pocket and tickles the girl in her ear and runs out of the room. Kripa hi-fives the guy and we see it is Prem Wadwa; they quietly laugh evilly and wait for the show to begin. Back in the room, the girl feeling irritation in her ear slowly opens her eyes and the seen in front of her leaves horror struck. She immediately gets up from the bed and we see its none other than Gunjun. Gunjun looks at the lizard and runs out of the room screaming on top of her lungs. She runs down the stairs and starts running around the hall screaming. Hearing her loud scream everyone in the house run down to what is all this commotion about. On the other side Kripa and Prem hi-five each other and say in unison, "PLAN SUCCESSFUL" and laugh evilly watching Gunjun run around the hall from the kitchen door. We see three people running down the stairs in full speed; first is a guy in his mid forties, then a lady in her early forties and cute a guy running after them in his twenties.
Suddenly the three came to a halt bumping into each other because of the view in front of them. The guy in the mid forties says to his wife, "Psss, Kumkum, kya tumne raat mien Gunjun ke khane mien kuch mila diya tha?"
Kumkum: Pagal ho gaye ho kya Sumit? Mien kyun apni bachi ke khaane mien kuch milaogi.
Sumit: Toh phir humari Gunjun aise paagolon ki tarah cheekti hui kyun hall ke chakkar laga rahi hai?
Kumkum: Ab mujhe kya pata, tumari ladli hai toh tum jaano.
Sumit: Arreh waah, tum uski ma hun ya mien.
Suddenly the guy in his twenties say, " Ma, Papa aap dono please ladna band karo aur woh dekho", he points towards Prem and Kripa.
Kumkum: Atul beta yeh tumare Bhaiya aur Kripa hass kyun rahe hai? Yahan koi circus chal raha hai kya? Hai bhagwaan, ek toh yahan meri phool si bachi paagolon ki tarah cheekh rahi hai aur waahan woh do shaitaan has rahe hai.
Atul: Ma unn dono ko hum baad mien dekhenge pehle Gunjun di ko toh sambhale.
Sumit: Dekha kitna samajh daar hai mera beta.
     The trio proceed towards Gunjun and somehow stop her from running around screaming like a mad woman.
   Kumkum: Gunjun kya hua mere bache tu itna cheekh kyun rahi thi, koi bura sapna dekha tha kya?
Gunjun: Nahi Ma....sapna nahi par........par...........
Sumit: par kya beta
Atul: kya hua di...........aur please rona band kijiye.
Seeing Gunjun's condition, Prem and Kripa laugh more loudly. Kumkum and Sumit look angrily at them.
Sumit: Yahan tumari behen ki halat kharaab ho rahi hai darr ke mare aur wahan tum dono wahan paagonlon ki tarah hass rahe ho.
Hearing their Dad's angry voice, Prem and Kripa shut up right there.
Kumkum turns to Gunjun and again asks "Kya hua bache, tu itna cheekh kyun rahi thi?"
Gunjun still trembling from fear replies" Ma, Papa miene na abhi mere kamre mien ek chipkali dekhi."
Hearing her, Prem couldn't stop himself and starts laughing again, Kripa looking at her older brother couldn't stop herself either and starts laughing with him.
Atul, who was observing all this while, leaves from there. Seeing him leave, Kumkum asks "Atul beta ab tu kahan jaa raha hai?" Atul replies," Abhi aaya Ma".
Atul goes to Gunjun's room and finds the lizard; he smiles knowingly and goes downstairs.
He goes up to Gunjun and shows her the lizard. Seeing the lizard, Gunjun screams and tells him to take it away.
Atul: di aap darr thi kyun hai yeh toh nakli hai.
Gunjun: KYAAAAAAAAAAAAA.
Atul: Haan Di.
Prem and Kripa who had heard him, panicked and tried to sneak out of there, but atul who was keeping an eye on them from the corner of his eyes said, "Ek minute Bhaiya aur Kripa."
The duo bit their tongues and whispered to each other "Aaj toh gaye kaam se, mom dad already gussa hai aur ab iss Atul ke wajeh se aur bhi marenge".
They turned around and Prem said,"Kya hai Atul?"
Atul smiles and asks them" Kya aap dono nahi jaan na chaate ki yeh nakli chipkali aayi kahan se?"
Gunjun: tu yeh kya keh raha hai atul, tujhe pata hai kya yeh sab kisne kiya?
Atul nods, and looks towards the duo.
Atul: Acha Bhaiya time kya hua hai?
Kumkum and sumit look at each other and wonder what Atul is up to.
Prem: Kyun
Atul: Arreh bolo naa
Prem: Abhi 4:30am
Atul: Exactly. He turns towards Gunjan and says "Di aap toh humesha se paanch(5am) baje uth thi hai toh aaj kaise itni jaldi uth gayi?"
Gunjun looks at everyone and says" Woh jab mien so rahi thi toh tab mujhe laga ki kuch mere kaan mien jar aha hai, toh jab aankh khuli toh dekha woh chipkali mere mun ke saamne thi."
Atul then turns toward Prem and Kripa and says" Hum log toh Di ki cheekh sunke uthe the toh aap dono kaise unse bhi pehle neeche aa gaye the, aap dono toh itni jaldi uthne se rahe.............toh aaj kaise, aur upper se aaj Bhaiya aapki office se chute hai aur Kripa toh aise bhi late uth thi hai."

Prem retorts," Oye Karamchand ki chati aulaad, tu doctor hai ya koi detective jo itne sawaal pooch raha hai."
Atul: Bhaiya hun toh professionally ek doctor lekin kabhi kabhi aapki aur iss Kripa ki harkaton ke wajeh se detective ka bhi roop dhaaran karna parta hai.
Gunjun: Dekh atul tu phaheliyaan banana band kar aur seedhe seedhe bata ki tu kehna kya chata hai.
Atul: Di mien sirf itna kehna chata hun ke yeh jo nakli chikali hai yeh kissi aur ne nahi balki Prem Bhaiya aur iss Kripa ne aapko darane ke liye rakha hoga.
He looks towards the duo and asks aren't I right. Prem and Kripa look up to see Sumit with arms crossed over his chest, Kumkum standing with her hands on her hips, Gunjun having her back towards them and Atul having a winning look on his face. They silently curse Atul under their breath and nod their head confessing their crime.   
The duo nods their heads to each other and proceeds towards Gunjun to apologise to her. They go to Gunjun holding their ears and say sorry.
Gunjun look at their cute faces and smiles.
Gunjun: Aap dono bohuth bure ho..........aap dono ko pata hai ki mujhe chikali se kitna darr lagta hai phir bhi aap dono ne aisa mazak kiya. Not fair.
Sumit: haan bacho tum dono ko aisa nahi karna chahiye tha dekha nahi kitna darr gayi thi Gunjun. Ab iske liye tum dono ko saza bhi milegi.
Gunjun: Nahi Papa, miene inn dono ko maaf kiya......yeh bhi kya yaad rakhenge.
Kripa looks up happily and quickly hugs Gunjun.
Kripa: Sach Di aapne hume maaf kar diya..........aap mujhse naraaz nahi ho.
Gunjun: Arreh stupid mien kabhi tujhe se naraaz ho sakti hun bhala.
Looking at the duo hugging, Atul says "Aap dono akele hi gale lag rahe ho, arreh mien bhi toh hun, mujhe kyun bhool rahe ho."
Hearing him Gunjun and Kripa laugh and say" Haan haan tu bhi aaja." Atul smiles and joins them too. Prem in mock anger says" Besharmo, Bade Bhai ke hote hue tum teeno akele hi gale lag rahe ho, sharam nahi aati tum logon ko?"
Saying this he walks up to them and takes them in to a big bear hug and the four together start laughing together. Seeing them all together like this Sumit and Kumkum thank the almighty to give them such lovely kids.
Finally sumit says, "Ok guys time to back to sleep."
They all nod and head towards their own rooms.

OKK..........dis was part 1........hope u guys liked it and thnx everyone for those lovely comments.......next few parts will b intro 2 d other families like dis one.........will post soon

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Lovely part and a lovely family moments do continue soon

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Posted: 08 August 2010 at 12:27pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by sharma.nat

Lovely part and a lovely family moments do continue soon


hey thnx fr d comment nd m happy that u liked it

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Posted: 08 August 2010 at 12:31pm | IP Logged
great start dear....loved it.........

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