"O Re Piya"-Dancing the Night Away MAANEET OS (Page 4)

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Posted: 07 August 2010 at 8:30pm | IP Logged

thanks 4 sharing ur ff
it was awesome Clap

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Posted: 07 August 2010 at 8:36pm | IP Logged

Viji, This is wonderful!

Loved each and everything you have written! Awesome yaar!

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Posted: 07 August 2010 at 10:35pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by Durga A.

This is cute!

But I wish you would have ended it with describing their feelings towards each other a bit more.

Overall, this is really good.

Thanks Yaar....It was already so long that i wasn't sure if i should write more....Plus it was just one shot...Unless i am planning to write an FF on the same

rickks

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Posted: 07 August 2010 at 10:43pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by Zee89-Maneetfan

Arrggghhh stupid Internet!!! Angry

lost everything I wrote and it was really long!!! Ouch

Chado se, I'll try and remember what i wrote! Big smile

Omg girl!!! Shocked

I totally could imagine that happening!!! Big smile

It would be brilliant if C.V's did that scene where Geet is dancing to some song and Maan hiding behind a curtain and just watching her...with his passionate eyes... Blushing

Arree girlie you deserve a big hug!!! Hug

Hey Zee.....Thanks Yaar...I too really wished there would be a scene where Geet was dancing lost in he own world and Maan hiding and watching the whole thing....Thinking about it gives me goose bumps...

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Posted: 07 August 2010 at 10:51pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by mysterygurl1427

Are u sure that this is the first time u have written an OS?? Wow it was amazzzzzzzzzzzing!! I enjoyed reading it!!!! I loved it loved it!!! So cute and peaceful!!!!!

What makes me even more happy is that right after reading two parts of another wonderful FF...i got a pm of another wonderful scene from u!!! I was upset that i didn't have anything read!!!! When i was reading ur OS i was hoping it wouldn't end....but sigh good things always end right?? Lolz....

i hope u write more OS's.....u r good!!! It was amazing!!! good song selection as well!!

Loved it to the core!! thanks for the pm!!

-Shivani

Yes This is the FirSt time i am writing an OS....And i am really really happy you liked it Some how i felt writing more would spoil the essence....and after all it was experimental...Looks Like i am going to have to continue writing it....

rickks

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Posted: 07 August 2010 at 11:00pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by InnerPeace

Wow so beautiful Viji...i was picturing the scenes while reading Thumbs Up

Thanks Yaar....

-RushTrip-

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Posted: 07 August 2010 at 11:02pm | IP Logged

Breathtaking Viji..

lovely song, lovely correlation...its smashing...

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Posted: 07 August 2010 at 11:03pm | IP Logged

Hey Rickks! thanks for the PM..

this is beauuuuutiful!!...and the way you matched up the song with the scene made it even more intense.... Prerfectly written....

keep writing..would love to see more from your side...

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