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"O Re Piya"-Dancing the Night Away MAANEET OS (Page 4)

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Posted: 07 August 2010 at 10:35pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Durga A.

This is cute!
But I wish you would have ended it with describing their feelings towards each other a bit more.
Overall, this is really good.


Thanks Yaar....It was already so long that i wasn't sure if i should write more....Plus it was just one shot...Unless i am planning to write an FF on the sameLOL

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Posted: 07 August 2010 at 10:43pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Zee89-Maneetfan

Arrggghhh stupid Internet!!! AngryAngryAngry lost everything I wrote and it was really long!!! OuchCryCry
Chado se, I'll try and remember what i wrote! Big smile
 
Omg girl!!! ShockedI totally could imagine that happening!!!Big smile
It would be brilliant if C.V's did that scene where Geet is dancing to some song and Maan hiding behind a curtain and just watching her...with his passionate eyes...BlushingBlushingBlushing
 
Arree girlie you deserve a big hug!!! HugHugHug
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Hey Zee.....Thanks YaarHug...I too really wished there would be a scene where Geet was dancing lost in he own world and Maan hiding and watching the whole thing....Thinking about it gives me goose bumps...


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Posted: 07 August 2010 at 10:51pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by mysterygurl1427

Are u sure that this is the first time u have written an OS?? Wow it was amazzzzzzzzzzzing!! I enjoyed reading it!!!! I loved it loved it!!! So cute and peaceful!!!!!

What makes me even more happy is that right after reading two parts of another wonderful FF...i got a pm of another wonderful scene from u!!! I was upset that i didn't have anything read!!!! When i was reading ur OS i was hoping it wouldn't end....but sigh good things always end right?? Lolz....

i hope u write more OS's.....u r good!!! It was amazing!!! good song selection as well!!

Loved it to the core!! thanks for the pm!!

-Shivani


Yes This is the FirSt time i am writing an OS....And i am really really happy you liked itHug Some how i felt writing more would spoil the essence....and after all it was experimental...Looks Like i am going to have to continue writing it.LOL...

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Posted: 07 August 2010 at 11:00pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by InnerPeace

Wow so beautiful Viji...i was picturing the scenes while readingThumbs Up


Thanks Yaar....Hug
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Posted: 07 August 2010 at 11:02pm | IP Logged
Breathtaking Viji..

lovely song, lovely correlation...its smashing...


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Posted: 07 August 2010 at 11:03pm | IP Logged
Hey Rickks! thanks for the PM..Hug
this is beauuuuutiful!!...and the way you matched up the song with the scene made it even more intense....Smile Prerfectly written....Wink
keep writing..would love to see more from your side...SmileSmile
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Posted: 07 August 2010 at 11:04pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by mahi0809

OMGG.... I felt like I was in Maaneet heaven... I literally smiled, laughed, felt a tiny bit breathless myself... and when Geet dori snapped I actually said "Oh My God" with a slightly breathless laugh... u were right I used yt to listen to ore piya while reading.... created an astonishing effect..... my my my.... that was a great first one shot Viji.... sent me to heaven and made me blush halfway if thats even possible.

Still feeling the shivers down my spine


Wow....Hug Hun you just made my day......Yes O re Piya is a beautiful song (i seriously wish the CV's would take the song....)....and i wanted everyone who is reading my OS to have the song in the BG.....t would put more on the effect......It really made you blush and sent shivers down your spine toooo...

OMG this is too much for me to handle....dint know my OS would generate such an impact

Thanks Yaar

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Posted: 07 August 2010 at 11:18pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by smiliey

it was goooooooooooooodddddddddddddd..................


Thanks DearWink

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