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Posted: 06 August 2010 at 3:07pm | IP Logged
Heer's POV
 
Aaah! I screamed running down the road. What could I do when this ugly, gigantic and horrendous bulldog was chasing after me. Why was everyone just staring and not helping me. Oh i was getting so angry! it felt like my heart was about to fall out.i was running out of breath. Suddenly a young man or boy should i say grabbed hold of me and pulled me to the side. He had brown eyes, a muscular body and a grin on his face. Just then...
 
i know this is stupid but i wrote it before and it got deleted. Anyway its my first piece of writing what do you think?
 
part 1  pg. 2
part 2  pg.4
note    pg.5
part 3  pg.8
part 4  pg.11
part 5  pg.20
part 6  pg. 24
part 7  pg.31
part 8  pg. 38


Edited by ...Pwincess... - 02 October 2011 at 8:35am

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Posted: 06 August 2010 at 11:01pm | IP Logged
nice yaar
will it be a part of some sort of ff , os or ss
do write it
it seems to be funny
nice

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Posted: 06 August 2010 at 11:16pm | IP Logged
interesting
do cont
all d best with itBig smile

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Posted: 07 August 2010 at 1:05am | IP Logged
nice one hope its Prem

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Posted: 07 August 2010 at 1:44am | IP Logged
nice....interesting....continue sooon.

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intresting!!! do continue..and Pm me!!

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cool Smile please continue soon

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its really nice
make it as ss or ff

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