I had read this in one go.. It is one of of the most amazingly written and conceptualised ff I have ever read on IF. Simply outstanding. It
was so intriguing from the very first part. All the characters baba,
ali, rehana (and their family), sahana.. all so lovable. Now of course the part where Maan does Sahana's deliver.. I hav to
say I'v no persnl xperience of hw it works but I was in tears readin
that.. it was absolutely beautiful. Even the sonography n baby kicking moment, I
had the most biggest smile on my face.. Aww I'm just so in awe of the fic. I love it to
bits n wanna giv u a big hug for such a well thought n depicted piece of
writing on maneet
One of the things I found simply adorable was ramu kaka making little toys out of natural materials for sahana.. i know its a little random and I was like omg how mushy
can I get?
All this was so wonderful! Sameeras entry n geets reaction to it
made me super sad I was like whattt?? just when things seemd like they
were gonna go a step further in maneet's relationshhip.. there's a halt! Like that
enough, Dev's entry was slipped in, to pile on the pain!! Honstly I was like
I loveddd the line in (part 16) "He needed to know
what was going on in that pretty little head of hers"
and then Maan was like "what did u say?"
Hayyyye full on action!! - In the sense that, there's drama, passion,
anger love! Omg.. Love tht moment!!!
Finally, awww Dev so understanding? If only
they make him like tht in the show too! Awwww what a beautiful end!!
Awww Optiiiii!!! This is such
a beautiful ff! I loved evry part!
Awww!! Its just.. 'Awwww' lol and wow.. really wondefully written, with
sweet, heartwarming, romanctic and awesome moments! Love this ff and I hope every Maneet fan reads
it! I happened to come across it thanks to the 'Baby + Maneet = Romance' post by AnjanaToronto where u had posted the link to ur ff.. and am super happy that u did! Altho u posted it with the part where Maan delivered the baby himself, for some reason I felt like reading what the fic was about first.. and as I said before, I was hooked from the very first part. It's such a fannnntastic story! Love it!
Opti, although I absolutly love this fic and was really looking
forward to the sequel... plz dnt feel even slightly disappointd that I won't
give the sequel a good shot. I read the first part and to be honest, I just didn't really like the leap in Maneet's relationship
Am sorry it might sound lousy, but I loved them as they are in this fic.
The other romance / story isnt really for me. I hope I'm not coming across harsh or anythin! I love your writing style, the ideas in this fic alot.. but the sequel isn't really of my taste
Hope thats kl with u though
and finally.. a masssssssive thank you to you.. for basically editing your originally story so to give us the chance to read it on maneet
love it! ur a fab writer!!!!!!