Hi suryavni 😃
I'm new reader & came across this story last week.
I like that you make each chapter colourful using different colour font.
Intro. really truly confused me. I thought I'd pull my hair out - it was tragic and sad. Had no idea what was going on 😆
I thought I should give a try and keep going with following chapters.
Then slowly it beginning to make sense. You are walking us through the past by Heer's FB from her pov.
It's really amazing how Prem & Heer became poles apart starting from childhood.😲
Loved Preet's friendship with Heer & Meher. Wow what a cute pet name Buttons awww 😛
I feel like pulling Meher's cheek.
Preet & Prem meeting after so long at Teji's house was v. interesting. I like the scenes. I did get confused the way Heer or Prem mentioned there. But you managed to clarify at the end of that scene.
The pace of the story makes sense.
Really at times it felt hard to tolerate so many misunderstanding between all the people involved. Even parents seem confused 😆
Last update was left hanging 🤔 Finally PH became friend. We would like to know how they approached their respective parents & rest of family and also how each one of them reacted to this new turn of events.
Thank you for wonderful piece of creation. It was fun to read.
Looking forward to see your next chapter.
Keep writing.
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