Phoolon ke Sheher mein ArMan-4 (New Part) Page-5 - Page 3

SD u can't leave us in such a suspense.. update asap.

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wow! hilarious SD bhai.👏👏
next part padhne ke liye bekaraari se intezaar kar rahi hu.😃
please update asap.

Phoolon ke Sheher mein ArMan-3

 

As discussed Manav is 'Khafa' with Archu. See what happens next.

 

Archana- kyun naraz ho aap?

Manav- tumhe kya?

Archana- are wah..ek hi ghar mein rehte hain..aur tum naraz rahoge to kya padoshiyon ko pareshani hogi?

Manav- tum mujh se baat mat karo

Archana- kaise manoge bolo na?

Manav- achha main yeh bataun ki tum mujhe kaise manaogi

Archana- bata do na harz kya hai?

Manav- ab mera dimaag mat khao plz

Archana-batao na baba

 Manav- (silent)

Archana- aap keliye pohe bana dun to?

Manav- zeher de do mujhe.

Archana- baap re itna gussa.

 

(Song plays..kaisa hai yeh pyar tera gussa yeh tera..tauba sanam tauba sanam)

 

Manav- pak chuka hun main in gaano se

Archana- to aap ko kya achha lagta hai bolo na. Wohi karungi

Manav- really?

Archana- haan

Manav-chalo kiss karte hain

Archana- chhi gande

Manav- are chhoti wali kiss na plz

Archana- aap ka mann bas din bhar wohin pe rehta hai

Manav- nahin de sakti na mujhe..to mujhe manane ki koshish mat karo

Archana- to aap sirf kiss se hi manoge

Manav- thank God..tum ne kiss word ko muh se bola to sahi

Archana-haan..muh se bola na ab man jao

Manav- muh se bolne se nahin karne se jake baat banegi

Archana- chhi gande...

Manav- waise main tum se baat kyun kar raha hun.

 

(Archana kisses Manav suddenly)

 

Archana- ab khush?

Manav- haaila..pata hi nahin chala..dobaara karo na

Archana- dekho gussa mat dilao ab. Aap ne jo kaha maine kiya na

Manav-par yaar maza nahin aaya na. Itni jaldi tumne lips ko hata liya mere gaal se. Kiss thodi na aise ki jati hai

Archana-aur kaise?

Manav- aao kar ke sikhata hun

Archana- jyada syana banne ki koshish mat karo. Jao baazar se kuch sabji leke aao. Warna raat ko khane ko kuch bhi nahi

Manav- ek kiss kar lo achhe se phir jo kahogi wo karunga

Archana-kal dekhte hain

Manav- nahi ..abhi plz

Archana-dekho zid mat karo..warna mujhe gussa aa jayega tab papad belte rahoge mujhe manane keliye

Manav- ohhh...bolo bazar se kya laun?

Archana- main sath chalun kya?

Manav-chalo..but nakhre mat karna

Archana- chup karo..chalo main tayaar hoke aati hun

 

To be contd...

very nyc sd bhai😃
bt very short part
bt nyc 😊😊
Edited by sofsunmannee - 13 years ago

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SD bhai... jaldi jaldi update karo na pls... I'm so starved to read some good stories... skepi bhi update nahi karti jaldi jaldi.

Coming to this part.... was a very cute part... Manav saying 'haila' is so cute... I was remembering the song 'haila haila hua hua, haila haila tune chhua'  for Manav.😃

Please update soon.

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SD bhai, yet you have updated a very short part after a long time, i have to admit that it's a very nice and cute part👏....after all, Archana has to kiss Manav at last😉😆
please SD bhai next part ko thoda lamba karna aur update karne mein itna der mat lagaana. thodi jaldi update karna....can't wait to read the next part.

nikita/monica/jhanvi

Hey SD bhai, aisa kuch nahi hai, everyone still loves ArMan, and your stories too. Go by the views, not by the comments. Many people do not comment all the time, I'm telling by my own experience since I also write FF. You please keep writing, we need your doses of laughter.

Waiting for  part 4.

Hai rabba Archu  hothonpe  kiss kab karegi 😉 😆

waiting eagerly for the nxt part 😉 😍