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Phoolon ke Sheher mein ArMan-4 (New Part) Page-5 - Page 2

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Posted: 13 years ago
Good job SD..Can't wait for the next part and especially abt Bathroom ka darwajja....πŸ˜‰πŸ˜†
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Posted: 13 years ago
tomorrow during lunch time I will write it for sure and post it asap..even I am excited to write the bath room scenes...πŸ˜†
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Posted: 13 years ago

 

ArMan contact the house owner and he takes them to his one bed room house in the valley of flowers. Archu just loves the house and the surrounding. Finally they do the griha pravesh.

 

Manav- dekha ghar tumhe achha laga na

Archana- hmm achha hai..mann karta hai zindegi bhar keliye yehi settle ho jayen

Manav- mana kisne kiya..bas mujhe koi naukri mil jaye uske baad yehi reh jayenge hamesha keliye

Arcana- aur bathroom ka darwaja kaun repair karega

Manav- are main kar dunga…

Archana- chalo karo pehle uske baad baat karte hain..

Manav-are kahin se hatoda screw driver lana padega na…aaj keliye kaam chala do

Archana- aap abhi leke aao

Manav-kya keh rahi ho…2 km paidal jana padega abhi..kal le aaunga na

Archana- to aap aankh band kar ke baithe raho aur galati se bathroom ki taraf dekhna bhi mat

Manav-thik hai tum .andar to jao..(andar hi andar khush hota hai ki bathroom ka door hawa ke jahunke se khul jayega aur Archana nahte hue usse dikh jayegi)

(Archana goes in. Nahane ki awaz aati hai.Manav jake window khol deta hai and hawa ka jhonka aake bathroom ke door ko khol deta hai. Manav badi badi aankhen karke dekhne lagta hai. Par yeh kya…. Archana is in full saree )

Manav-haaila tum naha nahi rahi ho kya

Archana- main aap ko test kar rahi thi..aise hi paani ka tap kholke nahane ki acting kar rahi thi..pakde gaye na….aap bahut gande ho…mujhe pata tha aap aisa karoge..chalo aap ghar se bahar jao..main main door band karke nahaungi

Manav- aisa zulam mat karo jaan..main ab nahin dekhunga udhar..promise

Archana- thik hai…ek aur mauka deti hun

Manav- ab ki baar acting mat karma nahane ki

(Archana ab sach mein nahane lagti hai aur Manav ka dil bechain ho jata hai. Woh reh nahi pata aur bathroom ke door ke ekdum kareeb jake khada ho jata hai aur archu ki chudiyon ki khanak sunne lagta hai)

 

Archana- (Andar se) kya kar rahe ho Manav..bore to nahi a rahe ho na…aur 10 min aankhen band karke baitho..

Manav- hmmm

Archana- haaila..aap darwaje ke paas khade ho kya..gande

Manav-mujhe bhi nahana hai andar aa jaun

Archana- bachao koi mujhe

Manav- main aankhen band karke nahaunga

Archana- andar mat aao plz..aap ne wada kiya tha

Manav- wade hote hain todne kelieye hi..main aa raha hun …

(Manav tries to push the door and come inside and Archana tries to defend from the other end.

Song plays nahi nahi abhi nahin aur thoda  intezar)

 

Archana- manav andar mat aap plz..meri pavitrata ka kya hoga

Manav- aisi pavitrata ka bhala kya kaam

Archana- oh no…bade badmaas ho gaye ho tum

Manav- dedh saal se tadap raha hun janemann..aaj mujhe hadd se gujar jane do

Archana- (ro ro ke) nahi manav nahi…mujhe chhod do

Manav- kaun se shashtra mein likha hai ki ek pati apni patni ke sath ek bathroom mein nahi naha sakta

Archana- agar aap andar aaye to main aap se kabhi baat nahi karungi

Manav- (Gusse mein) chalo andar nahin aaunga..ab khush

(ja ke bed ke upar baith jata hai. Archana 10 min ke baad ekdum fresh hoke achhi saree pehen ke bahar aati hai)

Archana- bade gande ho ji aap

Manav-mujhe tum se baat nahi karni..

Archana- achha ulta chor kotwal ko daante..shararat aap ne ki..aur gussa bhi aap karoge

Manav-(khamosh)

Archana- achha narazgi door karne keliye main ab kya karun?

Manav- kuch karo mat..bas aur pavitra banke raho..mujhe chhuna bhi mat.apavitra ho jaogi

Archana- oho...itna gussa...mujhe pata hai aap kaise manoge...

to be contd..

Edited by -SD- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
SD good one...So tell me Archana ne Manav ko kaise manaya??? πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜†
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Posted: 13 years ago
nahi nahi abhi nahi..abhi karo intezar..
 
wait for the next part..thanks
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Posted: 13 years ago
Fab job SD, waiting for next instalment!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
why do you stop midway like this....
Very nice sd..😎
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Posted: 13 years ago
he he he nyc 1πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
bt jaldi update karna  samjheπŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
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Posted: 13 years ago

SD make sure Archu has a role in coaxing and seducing Manav as in your story he is romantic and she ain't...So pls keep that in mind ya?? πŸ˜‰πŸ˜›

Posted: 13 years ago
waiting eagerly for the nxt epi πŸ˜†