Short story :You Belong To Me(Shanak)part22page33 - Page 2

Posted: 13 years ago
hey very sweet parts hun
cont soon
Posted: 13 years ago
Nice work amrita...update soon
Posted: 13 years ago
Very cute, please continue updating😊......
Posted: 13 years ago
Hey Amrita....😊
Great stuff so far. It's already got my 100% attention.......πŸ˜ƒ
I look forward to the next part.
Keep up the good work hun.....πŸ‘πŸΌ
Posted: 13 years ago
Thank you all my sweeties πŸ€—
You can let me know what you want me to include in this πŸ˜‰
Will update soon
Posted: 13 years ago
Here is a short update, before I go to sleep. Hope you guys enjoy reading this and pls feel free to comment

You Belong To Me - Part 3

Daadi smiled at Khanak's exprssions and told her to calm down.
Daadi - Khanak, Look there is nothing to worry, Shaan won't come home, he would be joking
Khanak - But Daadi if he comes what should I do?

Khanak listened to Daadi and nodded her head. She then slowly walked into Shaan's room, lied down.  SHe was a bit nervous, but decided to act as Daadi told. Little did she know the outcome of her act.

Shaan walked into the house and saw Daadi sitting so quiet on the sofa. He walked towards her and asked her what was disturbing her
Shaan - Daadi, are you alright?
Daadi - Shaan, I'm glad you came. Khanak is having a bad headache and she refused to have medicine too
Shaan - But she didn't tell me
Daadi - You didn't give her a chance to speak, did you?
Shaan became worried for Khanak at once and went into the room. Daadi who was watching this gave a naughty smile.

Khanak closed her eyes when she heared the opening of the door. She knew it was Shantanu. Shaan sat on the bed next to Khanak and placed his hand on her forehead.

Shaan - (in a very soft voice) Khanak, please open your eyes. Oh! Khanak why didn't you tell me
     you were sick.
Khanak giggled thinking that Daadi's plan is really working.
Shaan - Khanak - Come on open your eyes, or else I will carry you to the doctor.

Khanak's eyes opened widely. She became afraid hearing the name of the doctor.

Khanak - No. Shantanu, I'm alright.
Shaan - Alright?

Khanak could not help herself and bursted into a laughter. Shaan became aware of her lie but let
it go off.

Shaan - Khanak.I'm feeling very hungry so I came home to eat, but you are making all these
     excuses.
Khanak - Sorry. I will make you lunch right now

SHe tried to get up but his strongs held her there.

Shaan - Wow! Mrs.Shantanu Kandelwal is in a serious mood! It doesn't suit you

Khanak gave him an angry look. He enjoyed her angry looked and looked at her lovingly.

Khanak - Will you let me go, to make you lunch?
Shaan - No way! Unless you smile

Khanak gave him a fake a smile

Khanak - Now can I leave?
Shaan - Khanak, I know you and your smile. It's not the smile I want

Shaan wanted to cheer her up. He pulled her towards him so that she has to look at his eyes. Khanak didn't expect this from Shaan, so she opened her mouth in a surprise.Shaan touched her hair ever so gently and kept them in their position. She looks beautiful. So beautiful to him. He tried to know the depth of her eyes, but so far failed on that. Shaan caressed her cheeks and she closed her eyes enjoying his action. Shaan moved his lips near her ears and whispered

Shaan - Mrs. Shantanu Kandelwal, I have to go back to office after lunch...hmm...but only if you
     are willing to send me back.

Shaan gave her one of his naughty looks. Khanak too laughed at this and went out to make him lunch.They enjoyed the lunch together. It was such a time when no one was there to disturb them. When about to leave, Shaan came to her, placed a soft kiss on her cheek. He dared not to look back or say anything, but walked out whistling as usual. Edited by amrita2010 - 13 years ago
Posted: 13 years ago
Lovely dear...do continue πŸ˜ƒ
Posted: 13 years ago
Absolutely fantastic!!
You can just imagine Shantanu doing masti like that.....πŸ€—
Great work Amrita....⭐️
Posted: 13 years ago
@amrita2010
 
Just loved it.it is simple as well.Please do continue.We all enjoy reading these things.
Posted: 13 years ago

Shaan in Masti mode.. nice..

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