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Posted: 05 August 2010 at 1:40am | IP Logged

Hey,

Nice fic.
Plz do continue soon.
And can you plz add me to your PM list.
 
Nidhi

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To Love Again - part 5


Maan unfolded the cloth that covered Geet's eyes. She opened her mouth in surprise and hugged him
Geet - Thank you sir
Maan - uff....Geet..sir? you are calling me sir? even now?
Geet - sorry sir
Maan - Please call me Maan
Geet - ji Maan ji
Maan - (holding his head with his hands) Maan ji? Geeeeeeeeeet.

With a giggle she ran accross the garden at her speed. Maan shook his head and went to find her
thinking that she is really crazy. He searched for her a while, but couldn't find her.

Maan - Geet..Are we playing hide-and-seek?

There wasn't any response to his question. He felt worried thinking that Geet could not wait
without answering to his question. He sat on the grass and closed his eyes. He heared a giggling sound,
Thinking it could be Geet, he opened his eyes and looked around. No one was there. Few seconds
later, he heard the sound of that giggle. He stood at once and decided that he will find out
who it is and there he went in his style.

He stopped walking as if his legs could not move any further. He could hear the sound of her giggles
without any barrier. It was like a soft music to his ears. Soothing and comforting at the same time.
It's her lovely 'ada' that made him fall for her. He loved her simplicity. He wanted to look at her
like this forever. She is so beautiful. Nothing in the world is more important to him other than her.
He was mesmerised in her. She was enjoying the beauty of nature. She loves flowers and wants to
enjoy everything in the world. For her life is beautiful. Meaningful. To him life was a struggle before
meeting her, but now when he met her everything has become so wonderful to him.

He was brought back to senses by the raindrops that hit him without giving a hint. He ran to her.
She was enjoying the tiny rain drops. He caught her hand and started to run towards the gate. She
stopped and looked at him.

Geet - Maan, I don't want to go
Maan - But...Geet it's raining, we have to leave

She made an angry face and twisted her lips like a small kid. He smiled at her behaviour

Maan - ok Geet, tell me what you want
Geet - Let's get wet in the rain. Sometimes we have to enjoy the beauty of the nature

She threw the flowers and started dancing. He stayed there watching her, unable to move. He smiled a ther and held her hand with his left hand and held her waist with his right hand. They moved together with beat of the rain. He slowed down after a while and looked at her huge eyes. She couldn't manage without looking at his deep eyes. They were lost in each other's eyes. It was Maan who moved first.
He put her wet hair back and touched her cheeks. She blushed and closed her eyes. He lowered his head to her neck and placed a soft kiss.She felt the warmth of his breath. She held the collar of his shirt and drew him closer and pressed herself against him. Her response made him want her more. He touched her earlobes by his lips. She moaned softly and brushed his hair with her fingers. His breathing became heavier along with hers. He couldn't neglect her parted lips. He covered her lips by his for this she responded at once. He wanted to control himself, so he withdreew his mouth. After a deep breath, he looked at her swollen lips and slowly covered it with his.

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Posted: 05 August 2010 at 5:21am | IP Logged
Veryyyy romanticcccc part.
Plzzz continueeee sooon.
Thanxxx for the pm.




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Posted: 05 August 2010 at 5:22am | IP Logged
hi amrita,

thanks for the PM honey...!!! Tongue

coming back to your update, it was cute... only maneet and i loved it...!!! Wink...... the rain scene was so so cute and you left the update ...Shocked.???? update soon...!!! why did you stop...??? guess, u're giving me a taste of my own medicine...even i do that for all my updates and my readers ask me the same thing...!!!! now i know what they'd go through..... Wink

i loved the part where geet adresses maan as "maan ji" , that was hilarious and maan calls her name all angry....."geeeeet" ...gosh i can actually imagine that scene....!!! LOL

lovely update honey...!!!! continue soon.......

soumya


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Posted: 05 August 2010 at 5:26am | IP Logged
why did u stop??
gr8 update n thnks 4 d pm:)

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Posted: 05 August 2010 at 5:32am | IP Logged
hey HugHugHug
 
awesome update. loved the rain sceneEmbarrassed
 
continue soonTongue
 

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Posted: 05 August 2010 at 5:40am | IP Logged
nice one sweet heart.. pls update sooon

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Hey nice update.. really sweet n cute... do continue soon..

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