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Posted: 02 August 2010 at 9:50am | IP Logged
good start to ur creationz career!!

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CAHAT320

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Posted: 02 August 2010 at 5:49pm | IP Logged
thank you all so mutch for liking my poem..... and i will definetly improve my ryming......

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Posted: 13 August 2010 at 3:05am | IP Logged
here comes my next poem dedicated to my second favourite femail officer tasha
                         PYARI TASHA HAMARI
sab kuch tha c.i.d ke paas
bas ek thi uski hi aash
ki din c.i.d officer aise aye
jo hamare dilo ko bha jaye
phir ek din dhera se aayi
pyari tasha hamari
 
josh tha usme har mujrim se ladne ka
hausla tha usme insaf ka sath dena ka
jisne bana liya hamare dilo me asthan
ha vahi hai pyari tasha hamari
 
hausle uske boland hai
dil me kuch kar gujarne ke jajbat
jo de sabke sukh dukh me saath
ha vahi hai pyari tasha hamari
 
koi nahi le sakta uski jagah c.i.d bureau me
vo to hai c.i.d ke dil-o-jaan
jise hum kabhi na bhool payege
ha vahi hai pyari tasha hamari
ha tasha hamari

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Posted: 13 August 2010 at 3:15am | IP Logged
hey Cahat !! Sorry for replying so late was busy these days anyways good work indeed !!! both your creations are indeed very nice,this is just your beginning and I'm sure you'll do much better any help feel free to ask us !!! hoping to read many more poems and other creations of yours Thumbs Up
Welcome to the CID poets group !!!

CAHAT320

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Posted: 13 August 2010 at 3:28am | IP Logged
thanks bhavanab i will write better next time

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Posted: 13 August 2010 at 3:29am | IP Logged
@Cahat - I got to read you poem only today!!!! I should say it is good!!!!!  keep it up and keep writing more!!!!!

shaama

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Posted: 13 August 2010 at 3:50am | IP Logged
wow cahat!!what a poem..enjoyed it a lot.. Clap

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Posted: 13 August 2010 at 3:53am | IP Logged
nice 1  
good job Clap

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