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Posted: 30 July 2011 at 10:32pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Angel-Jot.

ohmygosh! that was awesome! what a cliffhanger! ugh. Thanks Jot! I love cliffhangers so you better get used to them!

Angad's rich. predictable. ROFL but i love Kripa and how she just blurts things out. Angad's adorable. honestly. <3

i really do hope they kiss. they're a perfect couple. seriously. Thank you!

continue soon this time! and PM me when you do. I'll PM you once I complete part B as well. Thanks for reading!

-Jot.

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Posted: 30 July 2011 at 10:34pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by dazzling_armaan

THATS NOT FAIRRR... You can't leave the part like that on that "then- " ... :\
Better update soon or your FF is next in the morcha gangs list ;P

ROFL Please do not put my FF in the morcha gang's list! LOL Here's a short part to keep you happy and will try to update even sooner this time. Just getting done with summer classes so I'll have a little more time till uni starts once again.

Nisha

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Posted: 30 July 2011 at 10:38pm | IP Logged
Hi All,

Thanks so much for your comments. Hug Here's part A of Chapter 10. I'll try to post part B in a day or two and then PM everyone. End of summer classes is almost here so woot woot! I hope you're not too disappointed with this part. It's slightly a different style of writing. If you prefer more conversations and longer speeches, do let me know and I'll revert to that.


Chapter 10A

Kripa suddenly realized what she was doing. She lifted her gaze and saw that Angad had closed his eyes in anticipation of the kiss. She knew what she wanted but she also knew what she had to do. She deliberately passed his lips and kissed his cheek.

 

Angad opened his eyes. 'That was for-' Kripa cleared her throat as her voice had become husky, 'that was for being such a good friend.' She waited for Angad to smile but nothing.

 

 'Saved by the door bell,' she muttered under her breath when she heard it ring. She glanced at him. He was still looking at her with that expression. She didn't want to identify it yet. She knew what it was but it was too soon.

 

Angad tried to regain his composure while Kripa went to open the door.

 

'Hi, Kripa, we're not here to see you. Where's Mr. Hottie?' Aali barged in the house. Prithvi glared at his sister.

 

'Aali, will you get over men for now?' He glanced back at Kripa and put his forefinger under her chin to lift her head. He inspected her left side of the face, then the right side. 'Are you OK?'

 

Kripa smiled. 'I'm fine. Seriously, Prithvi, I'm OK.'

 

Mishti moved forward and hugged her. 'I'm sorry about what happened, Kripa.'

 

'I'm fine,' she smiled. It seemed like that was the phrase she had been constantly repeating for the last day. 'Seriously, you all; you can see I'm doing just great.'

 

They group went inside and Prithvi stopped seeing a standing Zaib. Prithvi knew that he would forever be grateful to this stranger for saving Kripa. He always doubted Kripa for her decision to keep this man with her, but he knew at this moment that all his doubts had been baseless. Zaib only had honesty shining in his eyes.

 

Prithvi thrust his hand out, 'Hi, I'm Prithvi.'

 

Zaib smiled. The smile transformed his features completely. He looked less formidable. 'I know. Hi, I'm Angad Khanna. Or Zaib.'

 

Prithvi laughed. It just took him a moment to completely like this stranger. Aaliya rushed forward and gave him a dazzling smile. 'Hi, I'm Aaliya. Prithvi's my brother. And this is Mishti, my sister in law.'

 

Angad smiled at both of them. He glanced at Kripa who was standing behind her family. He smiled at her and watched a huge grin encompass her face. That was what he had been waiting for.

 

Kripa watched Angad charm her friends and shook her head at them. 'You're taking his side! For the last three years you've been telling me that I might have made a mistake and now you take his side!' she exclaimed when Angad had won his argument by convincing the trio that Kripa was a complete basket case.

 

'Mr. Angad Zaib Khanna,' she walked to him and jammed her finger on his chest. 'I do not appreciate you turning these three against me.'

 

His eyes danced mischievously. 'But Kripa, I just said what was true.' He laughed at her expression and pulled her in a hug. Kripa smiled and tightened her hold on him.

 

Aali, Prithvi and Mishti looked at the couple stunned. They were behaving as if they had known each other for their entire lives! Angad had just woken up. How had they reached such camaraderie?

 

Prithvi cleared his throat. He figured it was his job to protect Kripa. She was almost like his sister. The couple broke apart. 'So Angad, what's your story?'


Nisha

Part B has already been posted and is on the same page. Scroll down for it.



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I loved your FF. AK are sooo cute.
Angad is such a sweetheart. I can just imagine him.
When Kripa told him that he was the deranged killer in her book, I could imagine his expressions.
Please continue soon and please please PM  me.
Thanks

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Posted: 31 July 2011 at 10:27am | IP Logged
Originally posted by kinshuklover95

I loved your FF. AK are sooo cute.
Angad is such a sweetheart. I can just imagine him.
When Kripa told him that he was the deranged killer in her book, I could imagine his expressions.
Please continue soon and please please PM  me.
Thanks

Thank you so much for enjoying it! I'm glad you could imagine his expressions when Kripa was telling him about the story. I was cracking up imagining his expressions too. LOL
Next part's up in a few minutes. And sure, I'll PM you.

Nisha

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Please do not forget to comment or press the like button (if you do like it LOL) Here's the next part to Chapter 10.

Chapter 10B

He glanced at Kripa who nodded. Angad started reciting his story and was very amused with the trio's reactions. They gasped at the exact same time and goggled at him simultaneously.

 

At the end of his tale, Prithvi leaned forward, 'So what are you going to do now?'

 

Angad smiled at Kripa, 'Well, Kripa's supposed to come up with a solution since she's such a hot shot writer. She can make me a deranged murderer, so I'm sure she can come up with an idea.' Everyone laughed.

 

Angad immediately sobered, 'On a serious note, I need to come up with proof. I know that my word alone should be enough but Sonia is very smart. She'll easily come up with another story to prove me wrong.'

 

He saw Kripa squinting her eyes in concentration. She frowned, shook her head and finally shrugged. 'I do have an idea but I'm not sure you all will like it.' She told them her idea in detail.

 

Angad immediately stood up, 'No way! I'm not putting your life in danger for that. Dream on Kripa. I would never forgive myself if anything happened to you!'

 

Kripa went to his side, 'Angad, it's not that bad of an idea. Come on, how else are we going to make her confess her crimes?'

 

Angad turned to Mishti, imploring that she refuse this idea. Mishti looked at Kripa thoughtfully, 'I don't like the fact that you'll be in such close proximity with that.. with that woman. But Angad's going to be there, right? So I don't see any problem.'

 

Angad looked at Mishti in disbelief. How could Kripa's own friends let her do this? He turned to look at Aaliya and Prithvi and realized that he was outvoted.

 

Prithvi put his hand on Angad's shoulder, 'Look, we love Kripa a lot. She's very precious. I know you're thinking how we can put her life in danger? But you know Kripa; she can sweet talk anyone into anything! And sorry, you're outvoted.'

 

Kripa sighed in irritation and rounded up on Angad, 'I know what I'm talking about. You can trust me on this!'

 

'I know I can trust you on this but there are so many potential problems in this plan!' Angad exclaimed with his voice rising at each word.

 

'Fine, you don't want to do this. That's just dandy! Let Sonia get away with what she's done and start your life afresh if you can! What do I care? It's your freaking life!' Kripa shouted with her chest heaving with emotion.

 

Mishti looked at Angad with new respect. Anyone who could provoke Kripa to this level of irritation deserved a medal! Kripa was always so happy-go-lucky that it was really annoying. It was nice to see a different side of her. She glanced at Aali who had a slight smile on her face. Mishti raised her eyebrows and Aali winked. They turned back to the drama.

 

Angad sighed, stepped forward and grabbed Kripa by the shoulders. As soon as he touched her, he felt a slight jolt to his system. He looked at her in surprise and saw that her own eyes had widened. He didn't realize it but his voice dropped an octave.

 

'Kripa, I care about you a lot. I just don't want you to get hurt. Whatever's happened to me, I can handle it. But I don't think I could handle you getting hurt.'

 

Kripa's voice became husky as well as she stared into his earnest eyes, 'I know Angad. But the chances of anything going wrong are very small. And you'll be there.'

 

He slid his hands down her bare shoulders and felt her shiver, 'Yes, I'll be there.'


Nisha 



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Posted: 31 July 2011 at 12:49pm | IP Logged
...i don't even wanna know what Kripa's plan is. Stern SmileROFL She's really crazy but it's adorable. And awww. Why would she not kiss him? You know, i thought it was gonna be Angad who would refuse to kiss her but i was wrong. XD

Prithvi is so sweet. =] And, well...i'm excited for the next chapter. AK's growing closeness is absolutely adorable. <3 I'm loving them. I hope this Sonia doesn't mess things up too much.

Update soon and PM me.

Thanks.

-Jot.

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Originally posted by Angel-Jot.

...i don't even wanna know what Kripa's plan is. Stern SmileROFL She's really crazy but it's adorable. And awww. Why would she not kiss him? You know, i thought it was gonna be Angad who would refuse to kiss her but i was wrong. XD I love your comments Jot! Well, she can't kiss him yet because she doesn't know the real Angad yet. She just knows him as Zaib yet. She has to get to know him yet, then maybe. Ahem ahem.

Prithvi is so sweet. =] And, well...i'm excited for the next chapter. AK's growing closeness is absolutely adorable. <3 I'm loving them. I hope this Sonia doesn't mess things up too much. I hope I stay psyched about the story. That's my main problem, motivation. That's why I started a OS gallery right now. So nobody will be left hanging. If you'd like to check it out, here's the link:
http://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1743882#45308567

Update soon and PM me.  Sure, will do.

Thanks.

-Jot.

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