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Posted: 29 July 2010 at 10:02pm | IP Logged
I AM SHOCKED!!!! SPEECHLESS...you could NEVER be so nice to write something for moi...and the rest of the people :/.

Anyhoo...the story was cute. The sister was so cruel though! haha! I liked it! I would've been like "I don't need your help...go away" I have done that before too lmao! But the little girl isn't as smart as I am. *smug muh.

Loved the ending..it confused me :P Is the little girl only allowed to stay till Saturday? haha!

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Posted: 29 July 2010 at 10:19pm | IP Logged
that is so adorable Shabzie! (:

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Posted: 30 July 2010 at 5:19am | IP Logged

Wow, this was really, really beautiful! And very, very believable!  I was smiling throughout! :) Very well written! Clap

 

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Posted: 30 July 2010 at 1:52pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by urworstnitemare

I AM SHOCKED!!!! SPEECHLESS...you could NEVER be so nice to write something for moi...and the rest of the people :/. Thanks. Keep the love coming. ;)

Anyhoo...the story was cute. The sister was so cruel though! haha! I liked it! I would've been like "I don't need your help...go away" I have done that before too lmao! But the little girl isn't as smart as I am. *smug muh.  No one is as smart as you. :) Thanks!

Loved the ending..it confused me :P Is the little girl only allowed to stay till Saturday? haha! So stupid :) It was the lil girl that said she's only going to stay till Saturday, because she is stubborn and didn't want to admit that she didn't wanna leave. Get it?


Originally posted by Anhdara13

that is so adorable Shabzie! (:


tyty. :) thanks for reading as well!

Originally posted by nisha.munim

Wow, this was really, really beautiful! And very, very believable!  I was smiling throughout! :) Very well written! Clap

 


thanks for reading & commenting! :)

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Posted: 30 July 2010 at 8:03pm | IP Logged
Whoa, Shabzie! Whatever happened to the Queen of Tragedy? Well, whatever happened, I think this one was so positively adorable :D

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Posted: 30 July 2010 at 8:59pm | IP Logged
LMAO. Never got a chance. :(

TAANK OO! :D

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why, hello shifs. ;)

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