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ManeetFF..Mujhe Haq Hai:: Chp 28::PG. 144 (Page 5)

shalini_s IF-Sizzlerz

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good start... do PM me..

-ArhiLover- Senior Member

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please post the next part soon!!
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Hey nice ff.. luved the updates.. do continue soon n plzz do pm me the updates..
-afsha- IF-Sizzlerz

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Nice update
Maan was same akrhoo
Liked the milap of Khuranas n Handas
Maan n Geet are meeting hop Maan dosent take Geet as chorLOLLOL
Update soon
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Hey nice ff
keep updateing Waiting for next part & plzz do pm me the updates..
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Khurana family is tooo good. eagerly waiting for maneet first meeting

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Thankss a ton to all of uuu..
@desigurl953: thanxx soo much ..
@sweet cherry: thanx soo much..will update soon
@MaanEET_FAN: yes yes Maan will be introduced to Geet..thanxx soo much
@sonu4ever: thanxx soo much..i tell u these workers..parosi ko to aana he tha..
@Maan_Mahi4Ever:thanxx alot dear
@lyfwidluv:thanxx so much for ur kind comment..
@Aabrayy: hahaha..sorry ..abhi kartee hoon..PM list main add..share to karna paray ga!..oh yaar..but im sure ur concept will be rocking
@scorpiangyal: thanxx so much dear..
@Starry_night: thanxxx soo much..will add ya..and will update soon
@angelwingz04: u r goral rite? lol..yaar..i was wondering whoz this..and then i juzz pmd u too..hehee..well im glad u liked also doing a FF on Krishna and prats..summer is going about urss??
@kurtee: hehehe..realllii..aray yaar..thanxx soo muchh..nahi yaar..ghussa kyon..i loved reading ur comment..and fikar not..will not make u wait longer..will update soon..thanxx soo much...mwaaaaa
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@shagz: OMG..sorrry yaar..abhi karti hoon na..sab ko dobara se add..thanxxx soo muchhh yaar..will add ya..and will pm u
@shalini_s: thank u sooo much
@MaanEetluvr: thanxxx a lott..will update soon
@swetha10: thank u sooo much..will pm ya surely
@-afsha-:yep yep..they are meeting..dont worry..he wont take her as a chor..lets see how this akrhoo maan changes for Geet
@love_lavnya: thankk u sooo muchh..will defo pm ya..
@cute-aly: thankk sooo much dear..hope u will like their first meeting!

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hey guyss here is chap 3..hope u all will like it..plzz do leave comments..
~Chap 3~

Geet: ouch! She whispered..and held the person tightly..she barely cud see the person's face..but whoever he was she didn't care and made her her grip on his shoulder even she don't fall..the person helped her to stand up..and then switched on the lights..

Geet was looking at him..massaging her throbbing toe..he was standing in the opposite direction..

Geet: thank u..she sed in a low tone..waiting for the person to turn around

He finally turned and saw a girl standing near the counter..he saw her from head to the toe..she was wearing Winnie the poo printed nite dress.. which he thought was funny..and it even made him smile..but he pretended to be angry!..her curly dark borwn hair..which were a little messed up..were making her look like a cute little girl..

"tum..kon ho?" he sed looking at her..then wid out giving her a chance to speak..

"wait a minute..tum..woh barabar waali haveli..tum..woh larkiii..kya naam tha uska..

Geet: GEET! She sed excitedly

Geet..yes..Geet ho na!

Geet nodded and smiled excitedly..then she looked at him..he was wearing a black vest..and trousers..she was impressed by his well build up body.."he is fit..looks like a filmy hero"..she thought..

"I think u r Maan..rite..the akrhoo maan"..she laughed widout even realizing wat she just sed

Maan: haan..this time Maan's facial expressions changed..he gave her the 'angry young man' look

Maan: tum yahan kya kar rahee ho!? He asked raising his 1 eyebrow and putting his hands on his waist..

Geet who got nervous: woh..kya hai na..mujhe bhook lagi thee..aur pyaas bhi..neend bhi nahi aa rahee maine socha kuch khaa loon..lekin yahan par itna andhera mujhe pata nahi chala..aur main gir gayee..lekin thank u soo much..tumne mujhe girne se bacha liya..she thanked him once again..this time wid a friendly smile

Maan listening to her sad story..waited her to be quiet: ok ok! Theek hai..yahan counter stool par betho..and yeh lo..bread and jam kha lo..he put the strawberry jam wid bread on the counter..

Geet smiled: thank u..waise tum yahan kya kar rahe thay?..she asked usually

Maan: tumko iss se koi matlab..apna khana chup chaap khaao! He ordered

Maan headed toward the make himself a cup of coffee

Geet was watching him quietly..nibbling her jam sandwich..

Geet: tum itni raat main coffee kyon piyo gai?..she asked

Maan turned..this time he was annoyed..: tum chup nahi reh sakti kya..neend nahi aa rahee ka kaam kar raha tha..iss liye..Khush!?..ab plzz apna sandwich..moun band karke khaao!..he sed irritably

Geet: moun band hoga to khaaon gee kaise!..she mentioned cracking up..

Maan noticed he used the wrong words..turning around from Geet's sight ..he laughed at himself..moreover it was Geet's laugh too which made him laugh.."this girl is funny"..he thought..but then he turned around wid an mad expression on his face..looking at Geet who was still laughing!

Maan: tum mera mazaq urha rahi ho?

Geet..who got quiet after looking at his face: nahi to..woh to..aise he..tum itna ghussa kyon karte ho?..she was done eating..and was now drinking water..

Maan who was done making his coffee..took the cup and made his way out..

Geet: ruko!..main bhi chaltee hoon..

Maan unwantedly  waited for her so she doesn't create any other problems..and disturb any1..Geet hurriedly walked to him.."waise tumne jawab nahi diya"..she sed walking beside him

Maan: main zaroori nahi samjhta..he replied wid his akrhoo attitude

Geet: achaww..she sed making a surprising face.."chalo..koi baat nahi yaar!..kal bata dena..i don't mind" she sed patting on his bare shoulder..chuckling..her room was she hurriedly made her way to her room b4 Maan throw another reply..

Maan was irritated..he quietly made his way to his room..


He put the cup on the table in his room..and widout even having his coffee..he laid down in his bed..thinking about Geet

"iss larki ne poora mood kharab kar diya..kitna boltee hai..yaqeen nahi hota..main bachpan main iska..ISKA dost tha.."..he thought angrily and put the blanket on his face..and tried to sleep..


It was 10:00 when Geet got up..she wanted to sleep more..but she remembered Mrs. Handa's order that she gave 2 hours ago..that Geet had to be on the dining table around 10..Geet looked at the watch..and hurriedly entered the took her 30 minutes to get ready..she took a short bath..wore her skinny jeans wid a kurta left her hair open..put some kajal..and she was ready..she hurriedly made her way to the dining table..every1 was having breakfast..

Geet: Good morning every1..sorry im late..she sed looking at every1

There was Dadi..Mr and Mrs. Khurana her Mom and Maan on the table..

Dadi: its ok Beta..chalo betho..naashta karlo..

Geet hurriedly sat next to Maan..Maan who was already too annoyed wid her.. highly sighed..

Geet: Good morning..Akrhoo frend..she sed in a low tone..leaning towards him

Maan juzz stared at her..

Geet chuckled..she didn't knw y..but she loved to annoy him..

Mr. Khurana: Geet beta..raat ko neend to aagayee the na..

Geet looked at Maan who was eating his omelet..and remembered the whole kitchen scene

Geet: jee uncle

Mrs. Khurana: that's gr8!..tou tum college jaatee ho na!

Geet: jee aunty..last year..but I have to go for admission..

Mr. Khurana: oh don't worry beta! Maan will help u wid everything..kyon Maan!

Maan who was now drinking his orange juice..almost choked..

Maan: but dad..i will be busy wid office work!..he made an excuse

Mr. Khurana: don't worry about it..itnay saalon baad tumhari frend aai hai..uski help nahi karo gai..adjust hone main

Maan was quiet..he knew his father wasn't asking but was ordering him..

Mrs. Khurana: tou tum logon ko kaisa laga itnay saalon baad mil kar..Mrs. khurana asked both of them

Geet: bohot acha..Maan is very sure he will help me around..

Dadi: ofcourse beta..tumne humara ghar dekha?

Geet: nahi

Dadi: to bas..yaheen se shuruwaat karlo..Maan tum isko ghar dikhna..aur phir kaheen bahar bhi le jaana..warna bechaaree bore hojaye gee

Maan felt like a tour guide.."But Dadi.." he tried to protest

Mr. Khurana stared at him..told him to he got quiet..but angrily looked at Geet..who was enjoying her breakfast..

"yeh main kahan phas gaya" ..he murmured to himself wid a sigh

Edited by NZ_rockx - 30 July 2010 at 2:15pm

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