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Posted: 28 July 2010 at 12:51pm | IP Logged
yes off course continue yaar.. n yes update soon... cant w8.. to know wat happened next..

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Posted: 29 July 2010 at 10:03am | IP Logged
hey guys..thanxx soo much..for leaving comments..and motivating me..

u all are in ma pm list and will Pm u every time i update..Big smile..here is chap 2..hopefully u all will like it..!
~Chap 2~

Adjusting and meeting new people

Geet was tired now..and was eagerly waiting to reach their house..and rest!..she always hated traveling..now she was too bored listening to the songs on her ipod..she looked at her mom..who was sleeping..she looked at her wrist watch..telling it was rite 7:00 pm.."I can't believe a Saturday night can be this boring!..iss waqt to main apne frendz k saath chill out karti thi..aur ab yahan phas gayee" she thought while getting upset remembering the sweet memories..

Geet: Driver..kitna aur time lage ga wahan pohochnay main?

Driver: Madam..yahee koi aadha ghanta

Geet: ohh ok..

Listening that there was only half an hour left of this torture she sumwat became happy.."after half an hour I wud be in my bed..resting hopefully!!" she murmured to herself..and began to wait for their destination

 *~*Heart*Heart*Heart*Heart*~*

@ Khuranas

Everyone was sitting on the giant dining table..and was having dinner..

Mr. Khurana to his mom and wife: aap logon ko pata hai..yeh barabar waali haveli..main kaafi dino se kuch log aate hain..

Dadi: ACHA!..Handas ki haveli main?

Mr. Khurana: haan

Mrs. Khurana: maine bhi notice kiya..aik do baar..lagta hai..koi repairing karne aate hain..aur safai bhi..unkse paas saamaan hota hai..

 DADI who was now getting excited: kahin woh log yahan wapis to nahi aa rahe?..she sed hopefully

Mr. Khurana: agar aisee baat hai..then it wud be great!

Maan who was listening to them..finally tried to ask

Maan: kon aa raha hai?

Dadi: Handas!..

Maan: I knw that Dadi..lekin aap log itna excited kyon ho rahe hain?

Mr. Khurana: woh log humare bohot he ache family frendz hain..frendz kam..bilkul relatives ki tarha!

Maan: acha!

Mrs. Khurana: tumko yaad nahi hai kya?

Maan: wat?

Dadi: Geet!

Maan: Ab yeh Geet kon hai!..he didn't tried to remember and just asked his dadi

Dadi: jiss k saath aap hamesha se khela karte thay..she sed smilingly..wahi aik larki thi..jiss se aapne dosti ki thee..warna to hamesha aapka yeh attitude..sab darte hain!

Maan now making a face: acha..yaad hai mujhe..woh larki..chotee see..moti see..

Dadi and Mr. Khurana laughed at him remembering Geet like that

Mrs. Khurana: ab to woh bhi badal gayee hogi..

They were talking about them when they heard a noise..it was horn..Mr. Khurana looked at Dadi surprisingly..

Mr. Khurana: let me just make sure! Wid that sed he made his way outside..Maan who really didn't care..kept eating his favorite palak paneer..

 *~*Heart*Heart*Heart*Heart*~*

Geet and Mrs. Handa both were now excited..wid a sigh of relief they both got out of the car..and entered in the house..unexpectedly what they saw made them worried..the house was sum wat cleaned..and there was still sum repairing left to be done..

Geet getting concerned: maa..wats this? The work is not done..and im not going back..dobara se uss car main itna lamba safar..no way!

Mrs. Handa who was also as disturbed as Geet ..was thinking wat to do next..when Mr. Khurana came in the house..and saw 2 ladies standing just a few steps away from the door..

" Rupinder parjaai!"..he called..

Mrs. Handa now turned around surprisingly..since ages no one called her by her name..every 1 was used to Mrs. Handa

She saw Mr. Khurana standing at the door..a wide smile spread across her face..

"Bhai sahab!"..she walked to him..

Mrs. Handa (continued): kaise hain aap..

Mr. Khurana: bilkul theek hoon parjaai..aap kaiseay ho?..

Mrs.Handa: bilkul theek..aap tou bilkul waise he hain..bhai sahab..she sed smilingly wiping a tear frm the corner of her eye

Mr. Khurana: lekin aap bilkul badal gayeen!..

Mrs. Handa: waqt sab badal deta hai bhai sahab! She sighed..then she looked behind..Geet was standing looking at them listening and watching them..

Mrs. Handa: aray tum wahan kyon kharhee ho..come here..she called

Geet slowly walked to where they were..

Mrs. Handa: bhai sahab..bataiye yeh kon hai?..

Mr. Khurana thought for a while and then surprisingly looked at Mrs. Handa..Mrs Handa smiled and nodded..

Mr. Khurana: yehh..yehh Geet..Geet hai na!? he questioned in a surprising tone

Mrs. Handa: jee bhai sahab..yeh meree Geet hai..

Mr. Khurana: kitni baree ho gayee hai yeh..aur bohot khubsurat bhi..Geet smiled and touched his feet for blessings..

Mr. Khurana: na na..Geet..larkiyan paer nahi chootee..God Bless U my child..he sed hugging her

Geet felt soo good..and remembered her father!

Mr. Khurana (continued): chalo parjaae ji..aaplog yahan kaise raho gai..humare ghar chalo..jab tak yahan ka kaam khatam nahi hojata..tab tak k liye..he excitedly invited them..

Geet and Mrs. Handa looked at each other..and smiled..

Mrs. Handa: main yahee soch rahee thee..k ab hum dono kahan jaain gai..lagta hai abhi tak kaam khatam nahi huwa..aur phir furniture bhi bahar truck main hai..therez soo much to do..she sed worriedly..

Mr. Khurana: aray humaray hote huway fikar nahi parjaai jee..ab aap log jaldi se chalo bas..

Mrs. Handa and Geet followed Mr. Khurana..getting out of the house..Mr. Khurana ordered the truck driver to leave his truck infront of the house..and come in morning..and the three of them made their way to the Mr. Khurana's house

 *~*Heart*Heart*Heart*Heart*~*

It wasn't just a house..it was a mansion..a beautiful mansion wid white marble flooring..off white curtains tied on the either sides giant windows..giving a splendid look!..thats wat she noticed first entering in the Khurana Mansion..Geet was impressed.."thank u BaBa jee..atleast aaj ki raat..aaram se guzray gee! Geet thought getting happy..she thought she would feel awkward adjusting to a new place..but it felt like home..and after Mr. Khurana's warm welcome she wasn't much worried about the other Khuranas..

Mr. Khurana took them to the dining table..where every1 was waiting

Mr. Khurana: maa dekho kon aaya hai

Dadi and Mrs Khurana surprisingly got up from their chairs..heading toward Mrs. Handa and Geet

Dadi: Rupinder..she was still surprised to see her after ages..

Mrs. Handa touched Dadi's feet for blessing.."Maa jee" that's all Mrs Handa cud say!..she was bowled over coz of the joy..

Dadi: itnay saalon baad..ab yaad aayee tumko humaaree..dadi sed in a complaining tone..

Mrs. Handa: dadi..Geet k papa k death k baad..meray upar itni responsibility thee..k bas..time he nahi mila..lekin ab main aagayee hoon na..she sed while looking at Mrs. Khurana..

Mrs. Khurana: haan jee..ab to bas hum tumko kahin jaane he nahi daingai..she sed while hugging her..Geet was again standing behind looking at them

Mr. Khurana: aur iss se to milo..kab se yahan kharhee hai bechari! Mr. Khurana reminded the ladies about Geet

Dadi: haw..yeh Geet hai na Rupinder!..she sed in a surprise while looking at Geet

Mrs. Handa: haan maajee..yeh Geet hai..

Geet touched Dadi and Mrs. Khurana's feet for blessings..

Dadi: God Bless u..Rupinder..teri beti to pari hai..kinni sohni hai..

Geet blushed..

Mrs.Handa: yeh Maan kahan hai..bachpan main dekha tha..ab to woh bhi barha hogaya hoga na..

Mrs.Khurana: barha to ho gaya hai..lekin abhi bhi waise hi jaise bachpan main tha..akrhoo!!..

Mrs. Handa now laughed: acha..lekin woh hai kahan?

Mrs. Khurana: apne kamre main..tum log kal mil lena..kal waise bhi sunday hai..sab ghar par he hongai..abhi to tum log bhi thak gaye hogai..jaa kar aaram karlo..

Dadi: pehle khana kha lo

Mrs. Handa: nahi maa jee..bhook nahi hai..Geet also agreed wid her mom..

Mrs Khurana herself showed Mrs. Handa and Geet their room..which they were sharing..and now every1 was in their rooms..resting..

 *~*Heart*Heart*Heart*Heart*~*

Geet was trying to sleep from a long time but cudnt..becoz it was a new place..she counted the sheeps a million times..but the sleep was miles away from her..she was staring at the ceiling.."kya karoon..neend bhi nahi aa rahi..bhook bhi lagi hai..aur pyaas bhi..she looked at the wall clock..it was 12:30 am..she got up..she cudnt take it anymore..she wont be able to sleep until she eats something..she decided to go out in the kitchen and eat something

 *~*Heart*Heart*Heart*Heart*~*

Geet: yeh kitchen hai kahan!?..she talked to herself..finding the kitchen..she slowly walked where the dining table was.."Kitchen yaheen hoga!" she saw kitchen rite next to where the dining table was placed..she slowly walked there and entered the kitchen..it was too dark to see anything around..she thought not to switch on the lights..and just take something like sum fruit to eat..she quietly was finding the fridge..when she triped and was about to fall..but some1 grabbed her and didn't let her fall..

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Posted: 29 July 2010 at 10:05am | IP Logged
please continue
it is original and seems good

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Posted: 29 July 2010 at 10:12am | IP Logged
awwwwww that was amazing
i cant wait for da nxt part
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon

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Posted: 29 July 2010 at 12:02pm | IP Logged
hey.. continue soon.... intro maan fast yaar to geet.... bt ur update ws too good....continue soon continue soon continue soon LOL

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Posted: 29 July 2010 at 12:45pm | IP Logged
Hayee amazing update yaar Clap
I liked the kamchor workers, ghar nahin tayar hua LOLLOL
acha hai parosi agaye WinkLOL
I love this atmosphere, 2 families getting close Big smile
Aww Geet meeting in the kitchen, pleaseeee do update soon EmbarrassedSmile
 
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Posted: 29 July 2010 at 12:49pm | IP Logged
Soo Original .. Soo Good .. Cant Wait 4 Da Nxt Update Smile 
It's A Good Thing Dat They Started Off Fresh ... Keep On Writing Sweety Tongue 

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Posted: 29 July 2010 at 12:54pm | IP Logged
u have started a beautiful fiction plz continues nd update soon ......... Clap

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