ManeetFF..Mujhe Haq Hai:: Chp 28::PG. 144

Hey guys im starting a FF on Maan n Geet..im not really making a character sketch just introducing the characters..plzz have a look and do tell me ur views..something u don't like..or u want it changed..criticism is always welcomed 😃😳

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Geet: a bubbly 20 years old gurl who is very filmy..totally modern..but wid gud sanskaars..daughter of Mr. Handa..who died when she was 15 years old..since then her mom look after of the business and took care of Geet..shez very Laadli of her mom..shez in college's last year..Geet doesn't really belive in love..she says.."ab tak to huwa nahi..jab hoga tab dekha jaaye ga.."

Mrs. Handa: Mr. Handa's wife who took care of his business after he died..love her daughter more than anything

Maan Singh Khurana: 23 years old..hez the perfect image of the Angry young man..lives wid his Mom Dad..Grandma..the only child of Mr. and Mrs. Khurana.."sabka ladla" but very serious and akrhoo..he now helps his dad wid business.."khurana constructions"..he DOES NOT believe in LOVE..he says "insab wahiyat cheezon k liye meray paas waqt nahi!.."

Mr. Khurana: Maan's dad..a well known businessman..loves his son very much..

Mrs. Khurana: Maan's mom..a house wife..always dreaming of a bahu..who will change his sons akrhoo attitude..

Dadi: Loves Maan very much..also dreams the same as Mrs. Khurana

The Khurana Family is very gud frendz of the Handa family..

~Chap 1~

Naya Safar..a new beginning of Geet Handa!

"Bhaiyya zara aaraam se bagz rakho..kuch toot na jaaye..and follow our car.."

"Geet!..beta chalo..driver is waiting!" after instructing the Truck driver..Mrs. Handa called Geet..while sitting in the car..

Geet running down from the stairs: cuming Maa!!..she yelled..

Geet finally sitting in the car: sorry maa..got late..woh last time apne room ko jee bhar k dekh rahee thee..ab yahan aana he kab hoga..she sed sorrowfully

Mrs. Handa: its ok beta..i knw..u r very sad leaving ur house..but believe me dear..where we are going na..u will love that place..wahan bohot ache log rehtay hain..she began the convo..to cheer her daughter up

Geet: achaa..aap pehlay se jaantee hain kya? She questioned

Mrs. Handa: haan..hum ab apnay ghar jaa rahe hain..woh ghar maine aur tumhare papa ne saath main milke banaya..wahan par tumhare papa ki bohot saaree yaadien hain..she sed getting lost in past

Geet: acha..aur kya kya hai wahan?

Mrs.Handa: aur? Aur'.aur wahan tumhare papa aur meray best frendz..humare neighbors..the Khuranas..

Geet: Khuranas?

Mrs. Handa: hmmm..jab tumhare papa ka transfer nahi huwa tha na..tab hum wahan rehtay thay..they were like our relatives..we families were very close to each other..jab tum iss duniya main bhi nahi aaye the na..tab se..

Geet: achaa..itni purani friendship..tou phir wahan se jaane k baad aapne unko contact kyon nahi kiya?

Mrs. Handa sighed: uss ghar main jaane k aik saal baad tumhare papa ki death..business ka load..time he nahi mila..par ab jaa rahee hoon na..

Geet: hmmm..mujhe thora thora yaad hai..jab hum log move huway thay..u knw na..im not gud wid memories..

Mrs. Handa smiled.."yes u were around 13 years..do u remember Maan!"

Geet: Maan?..thora sa yaad hai..

Mrs. Handa: tum log hamesha saath main he to kheltay thay..he was the only kid in his house..and u were the only kid in ur house..ab to woh bhi bara ho gaya hoga..i remember..he is 2 or 3 years older than u!

Geet: hmmm..achaa..she sed while relaxing on the seat..

 The car was on the highway wid very fast speed..Geet looked out frm the widow..it was early evening..there was still a lot of time to get there to their new house..almost 3 hours..Geet was excited but more than that she was upset that she was leaving everything behind..her college..her frendz..her house!..but trying to be positive..she began to think about her new home..or shud she say the old 1!.."I hope everything will be alrite.." she murmured to herself..

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plzz tell ur views..shud i continue or not! 😛😃

Edited by NZ_rockx - 12 years ago

You know I will love it :) Do I need to say continue... Okay okay pls continue :)

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Edited by Maan_Mahi4Ever - 13 years ago

Hey

Awesome yaar, please continue 👏😳 Love the title of ur FF, that attracted me first 😃

Please carry on. I wanna see if maan believes in love meeting geet. I like the starting if this ff. It's different to the other ff's.

I like the storyline! So have Maan and Geet known each other for like 13 years? Bcuz Maan and Geet's parents knew each other before Geet was born. How does Geet not remember Maan then? They prob. didn't get to know each other until maybe a lot later....that could've happened.

I love it so far! Please continue soon!

OH and please add me to your PM list if you decide to have one.