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Posted: 27 July 2010 at 4:40pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by fj08

wow hina, this is gr8

whenever abher let us down we should have yarav instead Wink

thanks for continuing
my thoughts exactly!Big smile

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OMG part 2 was awesome Hina di!!! Loved every bit and the descriptions u give are sooo good, can imagine it all!!! loved that line  "in every sense"..too goodEmbarrassed!!! and aww Yami in a white dress..could imagine that as well, and loved how u incorporated the song playing on the spot boy's radio!! loving this!!Big smile

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thanks so much guys
all the comments mean a lot
hope I can come up with something further
have a feeling we'll need it the most today !

I'll try my best I promise :)


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Part 3

"Gaurav ... " she whispered ,while he tried to tune the radio to continue the same song...
" huh? " he asked
" you sure its not inconvenient ? "
" kya? "
" I mean,dropping me home...seriously I can take a cab ,its no big deal " she explained and he gave up on the radio and turned to face her ...
" come on Yami ,why are u being so formal ?"
" ni aisi baat nahi hai Gaurav ,its just coz u'll have to go out of your way and the roads on my side might be blocked because of the rain "
"and thats precisely why I dont want u to take a cab ,I can't leave u alone in this horrid weather ! "
Without realizing how sweet he sounded to express his concern,he carried on with the driving paying no heed to her I'll-be-fine-on-my-own talk and she couldn't resist staring at him openly...
The perfect song earlier and now the bewitching weather made her feel the romance in the air and with him beside her ,she wished for time to come to a halt...

~~~

After a few quiet long moments,he started feeling a little conscious of her fixated look ...'how is one supposed to recover from a dizzying stare session?' he wondered and eventually found a way to end her harmless yet endearing assault ... 
Slowly he pressed the button to bring her window down until a few raindrops splashed her face and she finally came out of her reverie...
Letting out an immediate inward chuckle he quickly pressed the button again to pull the window back up before she got wet ,also to save her the embarrassment but guess it was too late for that...she had already turned crimson ...

Pursing her lips and fidgeting with her long tresses ,meekly she rolled her eyes and turned to face him when he slammed the brakes to stop at the traffic lights ...

He gave her a slide glance initially but soon got drawn into a full-fledged eyelock until the cars behind began to honk their horns as the light had turned green...
this time it was Yami who came to her senses first and whispered his name to bring him back to reality...flustered he hit the gas pedal and waved a sorry to the traffic behind ...

~~~

The roads started to get flooded heavily and many were being blocked and shut to the incoming traffic...He could barely see through the wet windscreen and the wipers were beginning to wear out  ... But the ambiance inside was totally the opposite with slow instrumental tracks playing on the radio ,the scene seemed just perfect...

" Gaurav , take the next right please " she said spotting the  familiar street
" Yami ...but thats the way to my house ... " he was confused
" and mine too ...." she muttered giving him a subtle hint ...
" huh ? " he frowned
" I mean, its a shortcut to my house too ..." she retorted and he realized how sweetly yet cleverly she had sent her message across...

Soon after they drove past his house he said "so you must have passed my house a few times then ? "and  tried her technique on her...
She took her time to answer this one " yeah , I did ... a few times ..." coz she  knew what he was implying ...
" hmmm, so why didnt you ever ... " and before he could complete his sentence he got interrupted by the big no-entry sign as the road ahead was closed for maintenance works...
" kya ? " he yelled
" oh no ! sorry Gaurav ,I wasn't aware of these recent roadworks ..." she said regretting the suggestion of  the shortcut ...
" its ok Yami ...we'll just have take the long route instead ,don't worry "
He put her at ease and reversed the car around only to find the other side being shut too...
" o bhaiya ,hame jaane do please ,phir chahe aap barrier laga dena " he requested the municipality worker putting up the barriers...
" nahi saab ,ab to ye  baarish ke rukne par hi hatega " the guy was in a hurry to run back indoors ...
" par bhaiya hum ...yahan ...gaadi me ...kab tak ? " she requested him this time but
" wo sab mujhe nahi pata "  said the man rudely and speeded away on his two wheeler...


Giving each other the pleasurably  troubled look they screamed  "ab ? "





guys
I know this is super delayed and I'm sincerely sorry for taking so long
and i also know how much u guys must hate me for leaving it at that point
but i wanted to know if its still ok to take the route that i'm wishing to go
u must have an idea from the hints I left in between
let me know and I promise i wont take long in posting the next part
I'm so thrilled about the coincidence of GK's house pics published today and me writing a scene on it,just makes it all the more exciting ...
thanks for your patience and a huge Hug for all the appreciation
love
Hina





Edited by hinz - 03 August 2010 at 7:49pm

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Posted: 03 August 2010 at 5:47pm | IP Logged
HINAAAA me too screaming AB?......what next ?....you cant leave us like thatShocked......it is criminal.....i was so caught up with your writing i did not see the end.......what  are you doing to us?...are you posting the rest soon?....my  yaraveria is shooting upSmile......plz continue......dont leave us hanging in the middle of the roadBig smile .......once again a fab job Day Dreaming.....thank you.....thank you...... thank you...... this is for you Hug

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Posted: 03 August 2010 at 6:05pm | IP Logged

Ratna
thanks so much for the Hug,here's some for u Hug
and I'm so sorry to have done this
actually I have written bits of the next part already
will post it once u guys give me the go ahead
I'm a little sensitive and held up coz its YaRav  I'm writing abt and I dont want any issues what so ever :)

also coz the next couple of parts are a bit too filmy Wink
hope u know what I mean :)

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Posted: 03 August 2010 at 6:59pm | IP Logged
HINAASmile....I know what you meanWink......but plz continue.......change the names maybeSmile.......just kidding.....my POV is it should not be a problem......but i am ok with whatever you all decideSmile

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Posted: 03 August 2010 at 7:30pm | IP Logged
oh my oh my.... so thats why the house pictures helped you write and that means you have already written that part.... pls post it soon, definitely challay ga...

thanks for the brilliant write up,

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