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Posted: 25 July 2010 at 2:09pm | IP Logged
well...this chapter will be short....Embarrassed tomorrow or the day after..the long chaps will start.....Big smile
 
 
chapter----1
 
 
 
 
Meri Tanhaiyon Ki Gawah Hain Teri Yaadein
Tun To Na Aayi Par Aksar Aati Hain Teri Yaadein
Rota Hun Mein Jab Tujhe Yaad Karke
Paas Hoti Hain Mere Teri Yaadein
Neend Aati Nahin Jab Mujhako
Pass Chali Ati Hain Mere Teri Yaadein
Saath Dene Ka Vaada Kiya Tha Tune
Par Saath Nibha Rahin Hain Teri Yaadein
(nt my credit)Smile
 
 
"Arhaan Malhotra,ye naam hain mera... ek musician hoon.... shehar ke sabse badi university mein music sikhata hun...---GURUKUL.. kuch log hume pagal kehte hain... koi kehte hain deewana... khair ye to main bhi na janu akhir kya hun main...kaun hun main... us pal,jab meri zindagi tham gayi thi...usi pal se aajtak...main sirf saans lete aya hun.....jeena to maine kabka chod diya tha.... lekin aaj...aaj pata nahin.... kyun mujhe firse jeene ka man kar raha hain....firse use mehsus karne laga hoon.... shayad isiliye kyunki hawaon ka rukh firse badalne lagi hain....mohabbat ki gunj sunayi de rahi hain....... aur main firse jee utha hun....mohabbat ke liye.... woh mohabbat jo ek mare hue insaan ko firse zinda kar deta hain...... meri pooja.... jo mujhe chodke chali gayi thi...hamesha hamesha ke liye...use main firse mehsus karne laga hun....... I LOVE U POOJA........I LOVE U....."
 
 
 
 
 
"naam? manav sharma.... ek bht aam insaan hun... mumbai ki ek bank mein mere papa naukri karte hain.... bht mehnaat karte hain fir jakar mere college ki fees bhar pate hain... haan...main GURUKUL ka student hun... shehar ke sabse badi university..aur sabse expensive bhi.... yahan se jo apni padai khatam karke nikalta hain uski zindagi ban jati hain....aisa kuch suna tha.... lekin jo bhi ho.... mujhe to sirf apne papa ka haath batana hain.... unhone mere liye jo bhi kiya hain... koi baap apne bete ke liye nhi karta.... mujhe ek bada aadmi bankar apne papa ka naam roshan karna hain....
pyaar? huh...!!! pyaar ke liye waqt kahan hain is duniya mein? aur aajkal saccha pyaar kisko naseeb hota hain? yeh sab kitabi baatein hain...mujhe in baaton par koi bharosa nhi hain...."
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
"arjun naam hain mera...arjun punj... shehar ka naami industrialist akshay punj ka eklauta beta hun main.... bachpan se paison ki kami kabhi mehsus nhi ki.... maa nhi hain mera... bachpan mein hi guzar gayi... lekin papa ne maa ki kami kabhi mehsus nhi hone di... kuch chahne se pehle hi sabkuch mere saamne lakar de dete the... bht aisho-aaram ki zindagi thi meri... aabtak... lekin pata nhi kyun....dad ne meri admission is stupid GURUKUL mein kar diya.. keh rahe the...impression accha hoga... kya khak impression... yahan ladkiya to dur... ladke bhi mere type ki nhi hain... sab ke sab pagal hain... sirf padai ke bare mein sochte hain... naak mein chasma lagakar.... shayh!!!
love? well..to me its a wise game.... a game full of masti...full of life...agr thk se khel sako...then u r the winner...aur agr kahin kuch garbar ho gaya then... u will lose evrythng... so far i have been with 10 to 12 acche ghar ki ladkiyan... he he... pyaar mere bay haath ka khel hain...."
 
 
 
 
 
" hey....am armaan mallik... cool,trendy,grl's favourite...he he (jst joking).. GURUKUL ka student hun.. ya ya i know i know.. shehar ka sabse bada college..etc etc blah blah... yar.. ye sab na sirf sunne mein hi acchi lagti hain.... yahan aakar dekho...sab ke sab competition mein lage hue hain....kaun kisko pehle nicha dikhayega.... huh!!!
bht khatarnaak jagah hain yeh...aur sabse khatarnaak hain yahan ka principal.... Sri Rajeshwar Mahadevan.. bapre... hitler hain hitler.. itna ghamandi.. itna strict...kya batau tumhe...  yar yahan mera dum ghut ta hain...par kya kare degree zaroori hain... papa ka dehaant ho gaya hain... ek saal pehle... mom... naukri karti hain...ghar mein ek behen hain...uski shaadi nhi huyi hain aabtak... to ye sab zimedaari mujhpar hi hain na... kya kare... apni zimedaari se mukaar nhi sakta... I LOVE THEM A LOT.....
love? yaniki pyaar ishq mohabbat? time nhi hain boss..... baad mein sochenge... agr sochne ki zaroorat padi...toh..... he he...."
 
 
 
aisa kya hoga inki zindagi mein jo inke zindagi ko puri tarah se badal dega? u wanna know?
 
 
 
 
 
wait for the next update......LOLLOLWink
 
 
 
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Edited by kaasshh - 25 July 2010 at 2:16pm

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Posted: 25 July 2010 at 2:10pm | IP Logged
ka bey kashu!! beta sahi jah rahe ho!! bauth sahi beta baut sai!!!ClapClapClapawesome kash!!SmileSmileSmile

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Posted: 25 July 2010 at 2:11pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by -Cwezy_Manoola-

OK Jst finished watchin ur Mix n i onli have 1 wrd ...... WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOW
Loved it
thnx darling.....Hug

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Posted: 25 July 2010 at 2:11pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by luvjaysean

ka bey kashu!! beta sahi jah rahe ho!! bauth sahi beta baut sai!!!ClapClapClapawesome kash!!SmileSmileSmile
thnxxx yar.....EmbarrassedEmbarrassed

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Posted: 25 July 2010 at 2:13pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by kaasshh

Originally posted by luvjaysean

ka bey kashu!! beta sahi jah rahe ho!! bauth sahi beta baut sai!!!ClapClapClapawesome kash!!SmileSmileSmile
thnxxx yar.....EmbarrassedEmbarrassed

no prob  dear!!!!! anytime!Embarrassedanyways lub reading ur FF'S!!!!Big smileBig smileBig smileBig smile

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Posted: 25 July 2010 at 2:19pm | IP Logged
Love the intro Big smile

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Posted: 25 July 2010 at 2:27pm | IP Logged
Haila!! You're Soooo Full Of Ideasss!!
I Can Hardly Think of Anything For My FanFic! That Too Once At A Time!! Roflllllllllllllll!!! But Nah Even Im Very Imaginitive And Full Of Ideas But....Too Lazy! Rofllll
Haaayyeeeeee Loveeeeeedddddd Mohabbatein!!! UFFFFF Mind Blowinggg Songsss!!!!
Will Read When Im Free But Do Continue x

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Posted: 26 July 2010 at 1:30am | IP Logged
Kaashu yaar,I just cehcked out your VM for this ff and it was excellentThumbs UpClap.It was like as if I was watching some video from a film.You used some amazing clips there.

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