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Posted: 27 July 2010 at 3:03pm | IP Logged
hi i jst read ur update
nd it was reli good
i cant wait to read the nxt part

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Posted: 27 July 2010 at 8:10pm | IP Logged
loved it!!!!

1st eye-locK!!!Heart

update sooN!!!

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Posted: 27 July 2010 at 9:32pm | IP Logged
Hey I jus started reading ur ff & I really like it.... Great goin hun... Can u plz add me 2 ur pm list... & plz update soon .. Am waiting 4 it.. Smile

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Posted: 28 July 2010 at 2:31am | IP Logged
awesum post really lykd it.........u r really gud act mimickn d attitudes n dialogues of both maan n geet
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Posted: 28 July 2010 at 5:19am | IP Logged
Geet gets possesive for her Scooty also thats funny
Liked the way Maan tried ot hlep her par Geet toh Geet hai
Their convo is fab
Well felt Geet is lil more rude here
Lets c how they manage aage

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Posted: 28 July 2010 at 6:27am | IP Logged
Part 6
 
Geet reaches home ...dm opens d door...she gets in nd falls flat on d sofa...she is extremely angry nd describes the adventorous day in her style...
 
Geet: dm...kya duniya mein aise bhi log hote hai jo sirf apna kaha sunte he aur dusro ki bilkul nahin sunte...
 
DM: Haan...aise bhi log hote he..infact main aise ek insaan ko janti bhi hoon...
 
Geet: kaun??
 
DM: tu...
 
Geet: haha..very funny dm...tum bhi uss khurrrana ki tarah ho...
 
DM:  ab yeh khurrrana kaun he?
 
Geet: he ek...item piece...oh nahin item nahin master piece...
 
DM: seedh seedha bol  na tere jaise...
 
Geet: nahin woh aur main bilkul alag hai...woh itna rakshas type aur main ...bilkul nahin...
 
geet narrates d entire story...all d convo in detail...Antara aka anti cums...
 
Antara: kya hua G? itni chik chik kyun karrahi ho...
 
Geet: puch mat...aaj mera hua saamna wid mr.khurana..jisko chahiye ek bahana ki kaise he mujhe satana...
 
Antara; wow di...it rhymed...toh in short aapko bilkul aapke category ka insaan mila he...aapka mr.right...
 
Geet: kya? anti  woh kkkhurana mera mr.right...woh mr.right nahin sirf mr.wrong he...usme sab kuch wrong hi wrong he...!
 
geet again in a dramtic style tells d entire story to anti..antara laughs her heart out...
 
Antara: uff ho G..chodo na...btw aise adventorous kahani sunne ke baad bohot bhook lagi he..chalo...!
 
geet, dm and anti go to hve dinr..
 
on the other hand maan reaches home...he changes and aftr finishing dinr settles his clothes he had worn ...he found d piece of dupatta frm his pocket ..he tkes it out nd looks at it...remembers geet nd gves a faint smile..to his realisation...
 
Maan: yeh main hass kyun raha hoon?...lagta hai iss ladki ke saath rehkar main paagal ho jaunga...!
 
maan gets bk to wrk...d scene divides...maan sits on the table dng his wrk nd thinking abt geet simultaneously...geet on d odr hand dng her wrk, while reading the file she hs been gven as to wat to do as maan's assisstant..she too thinks abt maan...
 
Geet: oye geet! kyun tu uss gadhe ke bare main soch rahi he..file par aur jaldi soja..kal 7.30 baje office jaana he..aur haan kal toh ek special meeting he...hey Babaji..na jane kaunse manhus ghadi me yeh gadha khurana mujhse mila...
 
kaisa rakshas kisam ka insaan he...iss ke meeting ke chakkar me..main apni fav serial bhi nahin dekh sakti..
 
she sees d tym its 11.30 by her watch...
 
Geet: huh...arey baap re! jaldi padh geet varna so nahin paegi...aur kal agar nahin uth payi aur tym pe nahin pahuch payi toh yeh khurana mera kya haal karega...aur main shart bhi toh haar jaungi.nahin geet bakshi nahin haregi..main jeetungi..chal file padh geet...!
 
but geet cnt concentrate...she constantly thinks abt her fav serial...nd in btwn abuses maan too...in d process it bcums late fr her to read the file...its 1 o' clock wen she falls asleep...!
 
NEXT MORNING...
 
evry1 assembles in d conference room for the meeting...maan is bang on tym in office..he cums at 8 to office wanting to see his cappacino ready on his table wich he had told geet to ready it before  he cums to office for wich she hd to cum to office by 7.30.he goes to his cabin...luks at his table...luks at geet's cabin..nd to his surprise geet has nt yet made to office...nt seeing his cappucino on d table and geet nt being in her cabin makes maan furious and extremely angry...
 
Maan: janta tha...main janta tha ki yeh ladki 7.30 baje tak nahin aa paegi...galti no1 hogayi he iss geet bakshi se...ab toh yeh shart haar jaegi...ab toh issko mujhse koi nahin bacha paega...bt me shart ke bare mein kyun sochraha hoon..shart toh usne lagi thi na...jeetne ka bohot shauq he na uss ladki ko...ab ms.geet bakshi tumhe mujhse kaun bachega...
 
he heads to the conference room for the meeting...
 
in geet's house...geet is still asleep on the table...dm cums wid her coffee...
 
DM; Geet..abey oh geet...uthja ladki...suraj sar pe chad gaya he..chal office jane ka tym hogaya...
 
aftr repeated calls geet dsnt wake up...DM wid no choice left wid her..tkes d water jug kept on the table nd splashes all d water on geet...geet wakes up wid d heavy splash of water on her and shouts loudly...
 
Geet: nahin chodungi...nahin chodungi uss gadhe khurana ko...
 
DM: Kya? ...Uff ho yeh ladki...arey sapne ke duniya se jaldi nikal...
 
Geet realises it dat she ws dreaming and cums to her senses...
 
Geet: dm..aapne mujhe kyun uthaya neend se...main kitna achcha sapna dekhrahi thi...main bas uss maan khurana ka gala pakarkar uska khoon karne hi wali thi ki aapne utha diya...
 
DM: Khoon aaj raat ke sapne mein kar lena filhaal office jane ke liye taiyyar nahin hongi aap...?
 
Geet: uff ho dm..abhi office jaane mein bohot tym he...btw dm tym kya hua he?
 
DM: 8.00...baj gaye he..
 
Geet: achcha abhi sirf  8 baje he...mujhe toh office 9 baje jaana ...
 
while completing her sentence she realises that she actually had to go to office at 7.30..she shouts loudly...!
 
DM: Kya hua? chillayi kyun?
 
Geet: dm mujhe office 9 baje nahin balki 7.30 jana tha...ab mein margayi...joh khoon mein uss maan khurana ka karna chah rahi thi woh ab mera kaega...hey Babaji...!
 
DM: O ho! ab aise bethe bethe toh tu office nahin pahuch  jaegi na...uth... taiyyar hoja...main nashta taiyyar karti hoon...
 
dm leaves...geet starts crying in a weird manner..
 
Geet: gayi meri naukri...shart bhi har gayi mein...bohot shauq hai na tujhe shart lagane ki aur bak bak karne ki..ab woh khadus karela tujhe kachcha kha jaega..hey Babaji...
 
she says that nd falls right on d bed wid the blanket over her...she suddenly gets up..opens her mouth wide...
 
Geet: 8 baje...office...khadus khurana...meeting...bhag geet...
 
she runs to get ready...


Edited by swthrtdevisha - 26 March 2012 at 1:01am

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Posted: 28 July 2010 at 6:52am | IP Logged
Hey,
 
That's great nice update pls add me in u r pm list
& update soon the next part

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Posted: 28 July 2010 at 7:05am | IP Logged
hey so nice dear  
geet and maans part was too nice
and geet being late and her chapar chapar wow nice and i am lauging out coz of geet
and waiting what will she do
well eagarly waiting for the update dear
loved it nice
continue
  



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