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swthrtdevisha

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Posted: 27 July 2010 at 6:56am | IP Logged
Part 5
 
Geet meets raghav..an interesting guy of her type....they befriend each odr...raghav gves a file in wich wat she hs to do as maan's assisstant and secretary ...she takes it and she hs to do read it the entire night...she makes a funny and irritating expression..she leaves.......!
 
Geet tells avantika as to what happened.....geet is instructed by maan to read the file..for today she will read the file and she has to report early....d day finishes and geet goes home...wen going home...
 
geet in d parking lot out of the office is kicking her scooty trying to start it...it is nt starting....
 
Geet: kyun re dhanno? shuru hojana...kya tu bhi uss maan khurana ke jaisa hogayi..jaise woh meri baat nahin sunte ab tu bhi meri baat nahin sunegi...aaj mera din hi kharap he...Babaji meri scooty start kardo...!
 
jus then maan passes by his car nd stops..
 
Geet: hey bhagwan..! yeh rakshas yahan kya karraha he....?..office mein jo kiya woh kafi nahin tha....lagta hai pet nahin bhara...gadha..!
 
Maan: ms.geet agar aapki mann ki akashvani telecast band ho chuki ho toh mein kuch kahoon?
 
Geet: sir aapko kaise pata chala ki mein mann mein baat karrahi thi sirrrr....?
 
Maan: itna toh aapke bare mujhe pata he....ki baat kiye bager aap reh nahin sakti..aur jab nahin karti toh mann mein mujhe gali derahi hongi...
 
geet in her mind..
 
Geet: e lo! yeh toh bara smart banda he....!..sab pata chaljata he...isse panga lene main mazaa aayega...!
 
Maan: ms.geet bakshi..main aapse baat karraha hoon!....aap yahan kya karrahi he?..woh bhi iss tym....raat ke nau baje....!
 
Geet: sir main na yahan pe kabaddi khelrahi hoon...aur kuch karne ke liye he bhi nahin...aap khelenge?
 
Maan: kya?tum seedhe seedhe saawal ka seedha seedha jawab kyun nahin deti..!
 
Geet: kyunki aap sawaal hi aise poochte he...main yahan kya karrahi hoon...obviously mujhe yahan khade hone ka koi shauq nahin he....meri dhanno start nahin horahi he...
 
Maan: dhanno?
 
Geet: haan dhanno...meri scooty..achcha naam he na sir....
 
Maan: uff kitni filmy ho tum...khed chodo..chalo mmmmein tumhe drop kardeta hoon...
 
Geet: kya? main woh bhi aapke saath aapke gadi mein jaungi...jayegi meri jooti...
 
Maan: kya? kya kaha tumne?..ek toh main tumhari help karraha hoon upar se tum...ziddi ladki...sharafat ka toh koi zamana hi nahin raha...
 
Geet (softly): sharafat shariff logo se umeed ki jati he..
 
Maan: kya? kya kaha tumne?
 
Geet: sir kuch nahin...sir main kehrahi hoon main aapke saath nahi  jaungi..main abhi dhanno ko start karti hoon dekhiye...!
 
Maan: oh yes please....!...kariye..!
 
Geet(as if talking in d ears of her scooty): dhanno...meri pyari dhanno...please shuru hoja..arey yaar samajhti kyun nahin...iss gadhe khurana ke saamne meri izzat ka kachra mat kar..shuru hoja..ok..!!!
 
Geet starts kicking  d scooty.....it dsnt start...Maan gves a faint smile...
 
Maan: kya hua.? tumhari dhanno start nahin horahi he?
 
Geet: dhanno start hoja.....!..hey Babaji..kyn..mere saath kyun...?????????
 
Maan: hato..main start karta hoon...
 
Geet: hahaha..achcha joke tha...lekin mujhe hasi nahin aayegi..khabardar jo meri scooty ko haath lagay toh...toh main...
 
Maan: toh kya? kya karogi...ek toh main tumhari help karoon upar se tumhari bakwaas sunu...hato geet...please hato...!
 
Maan starts repairing the scooty by trying to start it ....geet cnt see him touching her scooty..she cnt bear that..she grabs hold of maan's hands nd tries to remove him..
 
Maan: geet..yeh kya karrahi ho geet...
 
maan also tries to push geet nd geet shouts...
 
Geet: chodiye ...chodiye..chodiye meri dhanno ko.....
 
Maan: geet...geet..chodo main karlunga...yeh kya bachpana hai...
 
Geet: chodiye sir..chodiye..
 
in the process...geet pushes maan and inturn both fall on top of each other on top of the ground..maan falls over geet...maan for the first time is so close to geet..he looks at her beauty so closely wich he adores so close for the frst tym....geet feels uncomfortable....maan looks at geet nd keeps on looking at her...he feels sum kind of attraction towards her...mahiiii plays in the background......suddenly aftr a long eyelock they both realise the awkwardness of their closeness and get up..!
 
aftr sum tym maan repairs the scooty...
 
Maan: dekha tumne...aise theek karte he..
 
Geet: bohot achche sir..lagta hai aap pichle janam mein mechanic the..
 
Maan: kya? kya kaha tumne..? ek toh maine tumhari madat ki upar se tum mujhe tewar dikharaho ho...sahi kaha he tum ladkiyon ki madat karna bekar he... tum toh thank u toh bolne ki bhi manners nahin rakhti ho..
 
Geet: toh madat karte kyun he?..maine kaha tha aapse theek karne ke liye....aur shart ke hisaab se mujhe aapna sara kaam  khud karna hai aur mujhe aapki madat ki koi zaroorat nahin he...samjhe aap....bare aaye thank u sunne ke liye...
 
Maan: toh theek he ..aaj ke baad tum sara kaam khud karogi..mujhse yah kisi se bhi madat ki umeed mat karna...varna tum shart haar jaogi...aaj ke baad main kabhi bhi kisi bhi mod par tumhari madat nahin karunga samjhi tum...?
 
Geet: mujhe chahiye bhi nahin...thank u so much ..ab aap jaiyye..!
 
Maan: mujhe bhi yahan rukne ka bhi koi shauq nahin he....
 
maan leaves from there...
 
Geet: pata nahin yeh khoon chusne wala rakshas kaha se aaya he meri zindagi me..jabse aaya he tab se meri life mein problems shuru hui he.....kher chaddo....chal dhanno..chalte he...btw tujhe maan khurana ne chuya toh tujhe chot toh nahin lagi..dard toh nahin hua na..kher chodo..chal ..chal..hum chalte he....!
 
Geet leaves from dere... !


Edited by swthrtdevisha - 27 July 2010 at 7:30am

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Posted: 27 July 2010 at 7:02am | IP Logged

hey yaar............

 
i didnt get this update in my PM.not complaining but just dont want to miss any updateTongueTongue
 
hope u understandEmbarrassed
 
anyways..........it was as usual a beautiful and awesome update................SmileSmile
 
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Posted: 27 July 2010 at 7:06am | IP Logged

hey thnxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx got the part 5 update...............................

 
didnt expect will get the next update so soon...............loving geet......yeh to kamaal ki ladki hai............
 
 
thnxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx dear...................
 
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Posted: 27 July 2010 at 7:39am | IP Logged
nice FF...

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Posted: 27 July 2010 at 7:45am | IP Logged
so nice dearClapClapClap
maan hiring geet as his assitant cum secretary wowWink
maan keeping the piece of dupatta really niceEmbarrassed
maan and geet conv is superbLOLLOLLOL
and geet calling her scooty as family member is really nice LOL
on the whole loved the update esp eye lockEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
nice update dearClapClapStar
 
sravs

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Posted: 27 July 2010 at 7:50am | IP Logged
such a funny scene!!! thanks...loved it!!!

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Posted: 27 July 2010 at 7:58am | IP Logged
nice one.. pls add me to your PM list :)

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