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Big smileBig smileBig smileBig smileBig smilesuperb update...........its seems ther is goin to b lot of dishum dishum ( i mean verbal duel)LOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOL  btween them.thnxxxxxxxxxxx dear..Embarrassed

 
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Part 4

 

Maan calls geet to the office..he has made all plans to take revenge on her....geet is damn scared and is walking slowly..she reaches d cabin and knocks...

 

Geet: sir, kya main andar aasakti hoon?

 

Maan: oh! miss geet bakshi..please..andar aiyye..main aap hi ka intezaar karraha tha..

 

geet in her mind...

 

Geet: achanak ise kya hogaya....!..tone change...iske  tone pe mat ja geet..yeh jaisa dikhta hai waisa he nahin..Babaji raksha karna..!

 

Maan: miss geet aapne aaj mere din ko bohot hi adventourous tarike se shuru kia he.....mujhe lagta hai aapki zaroorat yahan nahin kisi circus me bohot jald padne wali he...

 

Geet: gayi meri naukri...!

 

Maan: agar aapko lagta hai ki aapka mujhse bohot jald peecha chutega toh aap galat he..maine aapko naukri se nikalne ke liye nahin bulaya hai..aap yahan intern architect he na..?

 

Geet: yyyyyess sir..!

 

Maan: kitne din se?

 

Geet: pichle 6 mahine se...

 

Maan: oh wow! gr8! tab toh aap yahan ke bare main sab kuch janti hongi....

 

Geet: yes sir.....

 

Maan: toh aaj se aap yahan intern architect ke hisaab se nahin kaam karengi...

 

Geet: e le..! yeh toh mujhe demote karraha he..lagta hai seedha intern se chaprasi..!

 

Maan: aaj se tum mere liye mera sara kaam karogi..tum sirf intern architect hi nahin balki meri personal assisstant cum secretary  ka kaam karogi...! aur haan  tum meri nazroon ke saamne rahogi jab tak tum office me kaam karogi…..mera sara kaam tum sambhalogi….yaha ekdam saamne mere cabin ke saamne tumhara cabin hoga…taki main tum par nazar rakhsakoon

 

Geet: sir main..? par sir maine aaj tak yeh sab nahin kiya..avantika maam me toh mujhe...

 

Maan: (he shouts)..avantika tumhari ab boss nahin he...main hoon..samjhi tum...?? aur haan tumhe yeh sab kaam sikhna hoga...subha ko theek ..7.30 baje tum office aaogi..aur haan mujhe meri table ek cappucino chahiye widout cream..samjhi...?

 

Geet in her mind...

 

Geet: aadmi he ki rakshas...!7.30 baje bulaya par mera tv programme toh 12 baje khtam hota hai ...main woh kaise dekhungi...avantika maam toh mujhe 9 baje bulati thi....mujhe secretary ka kaam..mujhe pata hai jaan bujh kar mujhe satane ke liye woh yeh sab karrahe he...par kya karoon naukri ka sawaal hai...!

achcha sir....yeh sab main karlungi...par baki ka kaam..

 

Maan: baki ka kaam tumhe bahar mera chief accountant Raghav samjha dega.....aur agar tumne ek bhi instruction follow nahin kiye toh tum janti ho.....

 

Geet looses her control....

 

Geet: kya? kya? kya karlenge aap....?..samajhte kya hai....kaha to maine ki main sab kuch karsakti hoon..kya samjhke rakha hai ki mujhe koi kaam nahin aata..sab aata hai mujhe....!

 

Maan: ok then prove it....

 

Geet: sir aap geet ko nahin jante...mera naam geet bakshi hai..aaj tak maine koi bhi kaam galat ya adhura nahin kiya hai....yakeen karna hai toh challenge karke dekhlijiye....

 

Maan: yeh office hai...koi college nahin ki tum challenge lagarahi ho..

 

Geet: lagta hai aap mujhse dargaye...

 

Maan: mera naam maan hai...maan khurana..main kisi se nahin darta....toh theek he agar tum aise hi manogi toh main challenge lagane ko taiyyar hoon...par shart hogi kya...

 

Geet in her mind...: aapna naam toh aise kehraha hai jaise james bond ho...bond...james bond...ise kuch interesting shart deni paregi...

 

Geet: sir agar maine ek hafte me bina koi galti kiye kisi bhi kaam ko adhura na choda toh main aapko jo kahungi aapko woh karna parega...aur agar aap jeete toh aap jo kahene main karungi....manzoor...?

 

Maan: oh nice..mujhe manzoor hai...!

 

Geet: ok sir then we will see..

 

Maan: yes definitely u will see miss geet bakshi...!

 

geet starts leaving from there wen suddenly her duppatta gets stuck in d door....she tries to take it out..maan sees dat nd helps her out...he feels the tender touch of her hands as it both their hands touch each odr for sum tym.....they look at each odr and feel sumthng strange...in d process geet's dupatta tears wid a piece falling on d floor...geet noticing it gets irritated and lliterally bangs the door …she says…

 

Geet: aaj ka din hi kharap hain..Babaji mere saath hi kyun…!

 

Mann: yeh ladki manners kab seekhegi….!

 

 Suddenly Maan rewinds back to the moment wich he spent wid her a minute ago…he tke d piece of geet's dupatta falen on d floor, picks it up nd sees it……..he looks at it nd remembers his frst meeting wid her, d fight they had in d office nd her dupatta getting stuck in d door….he cnt figure out as to why he felt sumthng unusual at the tenderly touch of geet's hands….maan keeps d dupattta piece wid him in his pocket…he suddenly realises …

 

Maan: yeh main kya karraha hoon…..?? main uss nakchadi aur sarphiri ladki ke bare mein kyun sochraha hoon…

 

He is abt to throw d dupatta piece on d floor bt he coudnt..he again keeps it wid him nd starts wrking……….he gves a slight look at the door wich geet banged…..he gets back to work….!

 

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