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Posted: 26 July 2010 at 6:37am | IP Logged
Part 3
 
the officers catch geet nd move her out of the airport and wen she is out of the airport maan turns bk nd sees her again while getting into his car...
 
Maan: aise ladkiyon ke saath aisa hi hona chahiye...
 
Geet reaches office and narrates d entire story to avantika...
 
Geet: maam main kya karti....ek sarphira insaan milgaya tha....bohot hi battameez tha.....
 
Avantika: jo bhi he...mr.khurana is very particular abt d tym geet.....ab aake pata nahin kya karenge...!
 
Geet: maam aaap kyun khamakha tension lerahe ho...main hoon na..!
 
Avantika: haan haan.isi baat ka hi toh tension he...pata nahin woh tumhare saath saath mera kya haal karenge...
 
Geet: maam aap hi ne toh kaha tha ki woh bohot achche he...aap toh aise darrahe ho jaise Hitler aane wala hai...hai toh insaan na...aap sab kuch mujhpe chod dijiye...bas...
 
Avantika:  par geet...
 
geet bangs d door nd leaves ...she hs been ordered to welcum the boss wid flowers...!
 
geet in her mind talk....
 
Geet: aane do iss toronto wale gadhe ko..kuch aisa karna parega ki yeh bohot khush ho...hey Babaji pata nahin kaun he...!
 
geet goes to arrange for the flowers..she hs been instructed nt to say nethng offensive in frnt of him..finally maan reaches the office..he is stopped to welcome.....he is surrounded by a crowd of the office staff.....avantika tells him dat they hve arranged a special welcome for him........
 
Avantika: pata nahin geet kahan rehgayi...ek toh unhe airport par lene nahin gayi...aur upar se phool lane ke  kahan tha woh bhi nahin layi...yeh ladki aaj marvaegi....uff geet....
 
geet starts shouting nd says...
 
Geet: maam main yahan hoon..
 
she runs nd cums...breaks through the crowd nd inturn all d flowers fall on maan in dramatic style....all r shocked wid mouth open wide including geet...she cnt see him as he is facing his back....maan is furious...he starts speking nd wen......
 
Maan: yeh kya battameezi he...
 
Geet: sir im s..
 
wen they r saying all dis they finally notice each odr nd shout  "TUM"
 
Maan: tum? tum yahan..oh yah yeh galti dekhkar mujhe samajh jaana chahiye tha ki jahan battameezi wahan tum..girne aur girwane ka toh tumhe shauq hai....
 
Geet: aap phir se? mera picha karte karte aap yahan tak aagaye..kaise gunde kisam ke insaan he aap...dekhiye yeh theek nahin he..
 
Maan: shut up...jus shut up...jo muh mein aaraha he bole jarahi ho.....tumhe pata he main kaun hoon?
 
Geet: haan bohot achchi tarah se...aap gadhe ....sarphire....aur paagal ho...
 
Maan: dekho...aur btw tum yahan kar kya rahi ho....?
 
Geet: yeh sawaal toh mujhe aapse puchna chahiye....aap yahan kya karrahe he...zaroor aap yahan mera picha karte karte aaye he.....sharam nahin aati ladki ka picha karte hue...jaiyye..chale jaiyye yahan se..security ..security...nikalo inhe yahan se...aur inke kutto ko bhi..
 
avantika is shocked nd d entire office....she tries to intervene....
 
Avantika: geet shut up..geet tum janti nahin yeh kaun he...geet...
 
Geet: maam main achche se janti hoon inhe...jis sirphire insaan ke bare main me bata rahi thi woh yehi toh he...
 
Avantika: geet jo bhi he..bhagwan ke liye chup raho..plzzz...
 
Geet: kyun maam? main kyunchup hoon..yeh mea office he yahan pe koi bhi aira gera ghus aaye th mera farz banta hai use yahan se dhakke markar nikaldena...
 
avantka makes a frightening expression...maan is burning wid anger....geet is gng on speaking....maan shouts...
 
Maan: shut up.......!...bole hi jarahi ho.....zara apne radio fm ko band karo...aur suno mujhe tumhara picha karne ka koi shauq nahin he.........aur main aur mere assisstants kahin nahin jaenge..agar koi jaega toh woh tum ho....
 
Geet: kya? main? aapn din main sapne dekhan band kijiye....woh raha exit door...angrzi toh padhna aata hai na...kher main aapki madat karti hoon...aiyye.....
 
geet literally starts pushing maan wen avantika tries to leave geet nd seperate her frm maan..
 
Avantika: leave him geet..chodo unhe ...
 
Geet: yun kyun..maam yeh he kaun..aap inhe nahin jante..main janti hoon..yeh yeh..
 
wen she is abt to cmplete avantika shouts..
 
Avantika: geet..yeh humare naye boss hai....mr.khurana...the mr.maan khurana..hum sab ke naye boss...khurana constructions ke md...samjhi..uff..!
 
geet is shocked while maan gves his proud expressions..............'
 
Geet: bbbbbbbossssss...aur yeh...mera matlab yeh maan khurana hai....?
 
Avantika: yes geet.....!
 
Geet in her mind...
 
Geet: aaj toh toh gayi geet.....aaj tujhe yeh gadha khurana suli pe chadake hi dum lega...yeh toh mujhe kachcha chabajaega..sari khunnas nikalega aur pura badla lega...tuh bhi na geet...bina soche samjhe bas bolna shuru kardeti he...par meri kya galti he...jhagda oh unho ne hi shuru kia tha na..par woh sab chod ab toh teri naukri gayi..Babaji help please...!
 
Avantika speaks to save the situation...
 
Avantika: Mr.khurana..m so sorry for the inconvenience..actually woh kya hai na ki...
 
maan intervenes...
 
Maan: not a problem avantika....jab employee aisa ho toh kya karsakte he....
 
geet is listening nd makin angry expressions...
 
Avantika: oh no mr.khurana..geet bohot achchi ladki he..bohot hi efficient he apne kaam mein....infact use hi maine bheja tha aapko airport se laane ke liye...
 
Maan: oh..toh yeh he...mujhe samjh lena chahiye tha..aur ms.mehra..yeh litni efficient he woh toh pata chal jaega...waise bhi aaj jo mujhe receive karne wala tha use main naukri se nikal ne hi wala tha...ab toh bohot mazaa ayega...kya naam bataya apne...
 
Avantika: geet..geet bakshi..intern architect...
 
Maan: geet...ok miss geet..
 
he goes near geet beside her ears nd whispers..
 
Maan: miss geet bakshi...aap mere cabin me abhi isi waqt aayengi..nd now means now...aapse ek bohot zaroori kaam hai..!
 
Maan leaves...
 
Geet is frightend...she says...
 
Geet: hey Babaji..! ab kya hoga..yeh gadha..sadu..khadus karela..pura khunnas nikalega aur mujhe naukri se nikaldega..Babaji kuch karo..!..geet aaj yeh raksha tera post mortem kardega...Babaji bachao...
 
Avantika: kaha tha maine tumse aapna muh mat kholna lekin tum toh tum ho...sunne kahan wali ho....ab bhukto..aur haan meri taraf aise mat dekho..main kuch nahin karsakti....ab jao...bulaya hai..jaldi jao varna aur naraaz hojaenge...go geet..nd all d best..tumhe zaroorat he..
 
geet hugs avantika for moral support nd leaves frm dere......
 
Avantika: uff iss ladki ka kya hoga...bhagwan hi jaane.....i pray ki kuch aur gadbad na kare...isko bacha lena bhagwan...achchi ladki he...dil ki saaf...she is precious to us....!
 
 


Edited by swthrtdevisha - 18 August 2010 at 11:54am

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Posted: 26 July 2010 at 7:24am | IP Logged
wow dear niceClap
maan and geet fight LOLLOLLOLreally nice
i was expecting that they will fight but geet showing him exit door and wanted to send him out really cracked me i am laughing really hard dearLOL
perfect geet being geet i mean her chapar chapparLOL
and maan really love him alotEmbarrassed
update soon dear and thanks for pm meSmile
with love
sravs
 

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Posted: 26 July 2010 at 7:24am | IP Logged
ROFL..i was laughin soooooooooo much....ROFL..thnk u 4 pm....updte soon

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Posted: 26 July 2010 at 7:29am | IP Logged
ur welcum..nethng for maaneetians...love u and maaneet...Smile

Edited by swthrtdevisha - 26 March 2012 at 12:49am

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Posted: 26 July 2010 at 7:30am | IP Logged
nice part...loved maaneet fight..LOLLOL

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Posted: 26 July 2010 at 7:34am | IP Logged
LOL LOL LOL Geet is HILARIOUS when she doesn't shut up Wink
Can't believe she actually called Security to escort him out! Clap
Please update soon and add me to your P.M. list if possible Big smile

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Posted: 26 July 2010 at 7:52am | IP Logged
Nice part but spoke quite a lot i thk
She shouldnt speak so much
Update soon longer one

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Posted: 26 July 2010 at 7:55am | IP Logged
yah sure...more longer....u know hw geet is...geet toh geet hai na...bak bak nd geet go togedr ..haha!

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