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Part 56'

Geet, Maan and everyone greet everyone present there''..they are all sitting in the living room'planning how to make the wedding a memorable one'.

Neha: hey geet'hii'hii maan sir'!

Geet:hii neha!

Maan:hii neha..

Avantika:arey aaplog itne late kaise hogaye?

Geet:woh kya hai na maam'

Just when geet was about to say something, maan intervenes'.

Maan:upp..woh we got stuck in traffic'!

Avantika:oh achcha!

Geet gives a smirk and look towards maan who also gives a smile''

Neha:hey guys'ab humein iss shaadi ko yaadgaar banana hai'.!

Avantika:haan ab geet aagayi hai na..ab humari shaadi main bohot mazaa aayega!

Aditya:yaah!..geet is the best!

Maan:yah she is really the best!

Aditya:huh..tumne kuch kaha?

Maan:kuch nahin!

Geet and maan are staring at each other while others are talking'

Mihika:achcha geet'.mujhe shaadi ke rasmo ke bare main batao na?

Geet does not seem to answer and looks lost'mihika sees that she is looking at maan who is looking at her too''

Mihika:geet'geet'.

Geet comes back to reality'

Geet:huh?..tum kuch kehrahi thi mihika?

Mihika:haan'main toh bohot kuch kehrahi thi..par tum agar sunna nahin chahti toh its ok'!

Geet:nahin nahin'tum bolo na!

Mihika:'woh geet mujhe shaadi ki rasmo ke bare main batao na!            

Geet:haan batati hoon'

Maan is still looking at geet and his eyes don't seem to move from her''geet and mihika are engrossed in talking when avantika's mother come'she is extremely happy to see geet as she takes geet like her daughter'geet is also extremely happy to see her'

Avantika's mom: arey geet beta'tum aagayi'ab toh mujhe koi tension nahin hai..meri dusri beti jo aagayi'..

Geet:haan bilkul'jab main hoon tab tension kis liye? By the way aunty'.aap kaisi hai?...

Avantika's mom:ab poochrahi hai?..ghar toh aati nahin!

Geet:sorry aunty'.ab aunty humein rasmo ke bare main kuch toh batao ki kaunsi rasm kab horahi hai?

Avantika's mom: aaj shaam ko roke ki rasm hai'sagaai bhi aaj hi hogi''..kal Mata Rani ki puja hai''.phir mehendi,sangeet,haldi aur shaadi''!

Geet:wow!...bohot mazaa aayega!...sach main'.finally avantika maam ki shaadi!

Avantika's mom: hmm'..arey tumlog yahan kya bethe ho sab'sabko taiyyar nahin hona shaam ke liye..aur kitni taiyyariyan bhi toh karni hai!

Geet:taiyyariyon ki aap fiqar mat karo..hum sab hai na!

Neha:haan aunty..hum sab milke karlenge'aaj shaam ko bohot mazaa aane wala hai'!

Mihika goes near maan who is staring at geet''

Mihika:mazaa toh bohot aayega'..bro'ab aapko geet ko aapki feelings ka ehsaas dilana hi hai'aapko usse apni dil ki baat kehni hi paregi!

Maan:are you sure??...dil ki baat?...geet ko achcha nahin laga toh?..woh bura toh nahin manegi na?

Mihika:oho bro'aap bhi na'kitne darte hai!...kabhi na kabhi toh kehna hi parega na!..aur iss shaadi se achcha mauka nahin milega!...geet ke dil main kahin na kahin aapke liye pyar hai bas uska ehsaas aapko dilana hai'samjhe?

Maan:samajh toh gaya'par kaise?

Mihika:uski fiqar  aap mat karo!...planning hum karenge'aapko bas meri planning kofollow karna hai'bro'aap dil se geet se saccha pyar karte hai na?...toh bas'aap dil se agar usse apne pyar ka ehsaas dilayenge toh im sure usse ehsaas zaroor hoga''sachcha pyar kabhi fail nahin hota'!

Maan:mujhe nahin pata tha ki meri choti si mihu itni badi hogayi?...love you lil sis!

Mihika:love you bro'..!

They hug each other sweetly''..!

Mihika: achcha bro..aap geet ke liye woh tohfa laye hai jo aap geet ke liye lena chahte the?..bhool toh nahin gaye na?

Maan:nahin'bhool kaise sakta hoon..meri geet ka tohfa hai'sabse special'sabse different!

Mihika:that's like my bro'!

Maan:mihu..bohot jald woh waqt aayega jab main geet se apni dil ki baat kahunga..!

Mihika:I hope so'jitni jaldi aap geet se apni dil ki baat kahenge utni hi jaldi aapki bhi shaadi ki shehnaiyyan bajengi aur geet jaldi se meri bhabhi banjayegi'!

Maan(smiles)'main bhi jaldi se geet ko apni zindagi main shaamil karna chahta hoon'!...aur ek baat kahoon mihu'agar koi mrs.maan singh khurana banegi toh sirf geet'aur koi nahin'!

Mihika:waah..kya baat hai bro'!

Maan keeps on staring at geet while geet is smiling away and talking to her friends'seeming to enjoy thoroughly'just when maan is staring at geet,geet looks at maan'.maan turns his face to the other side and geet gives a broad smile'after all the chatting ,avantika's mother shows everyone their respective rooms''

Avantika's mom:chalo chalo'.bohot saara kaam hai'shaam ko roke ki aur saagai ki rasm hai'taiyyariyan karni hai aur saath saath tum sabko bhi toh taiyyar hona hai na!

Geet and mihika stay in one romm..maan moves to the other room..neha and ankita move into one room while raghav and arjun move to other rooms''just when geet is about to go into the room,maan calls her from behind'.

Maan:geet'

Geet turns'

Geet:haan sir'boliye'!

Maan:upp geet'woh'

Geet:haan maan sir boliye na..kya hua?

Maan:woh mujhe tumse kuch woh'

Geet (in her mind)'inhe kya hogaya'.baat karne main inko kabse taqleif hone lagi'!

Maan (in his mind)'maan  bol na jaldi se ki tujhe geet ko ek tohfa dena hai jot u specially uske liya laya hai..nahin bol paya toh saara ka saara plan kharap hojayega'aur mihu bohot gussa karegi'!

Geet:kya hua sir?itna time kyun laga rahe hai aap?...koi zaroori baat hai kya?

Maan:haan'woh..nahin'haan..

Geet:kya haan'nahin'haani nahin karahae hai aap'seedhe seddhe boliye na kya baat hai'!..(in her mind)'lagta hai maan sir pagal hogaye hai'ajeeb baatein karrahe hai'.

Maan (in his mind)..wahi maan singh khurana jo kisi se nahin darta hai pata nahin kyun geet ke saamne aate hi meri bolti kyun band hojati hai..kyun mujhe usse kuch bolne se darr lagta hai'..ek tohfe ki baat karne se itna darraha hoon pata nahin pyar ka izhaar kaise karunga'.lagta hai pyar main aisa hi hota hai'!

Geet(in her mind) agar thodi der aur idhar main khadi rah na toh khade khade main statue banjaungi'sir'agar aapko kuch nahin kehna hai toh main jaun?...woh kya hai na shaam ke liye taiyyar hona hai na?

Maan: haan ok jao'(without realising what he is saying)

Geet:ok...

While geet is about to leave..maan realises what he said...

Maan:jao?..tune jao boldiya maan?...arey rok geet ko varna gift kaise dunga...(after a pause)...geet...

Geet turns again realising something is wrong with maan...

Geet:haan sir..boliye

Maan:geet woh main tumhe...

Just when maan gains a little bit of confidence to say something,avantika's mom calss geet to come down for sometime for some work...geet goes away...but maan tries to stop her...

Maan:geet mujhe tumse baat karni hai..

Geet:sir main abhi aati hoon...thodi der main..phir baat karte hai...

Maan:par geet main...

Geet:sir main abhi aayi...

Geet leaves and maan laments his bad luck...

Maan:tera kuch nahin hosakta maan..teri love story kabhi nahin banegi...banne se pehle hi khatam hojaegi...geet se baat nahin karsakta...ek tohfa dene main tu itna time lagaega toh pyar ka izhaar karne main toh ek poori century laga dega...kamaal hai..jiss maan singh khurana se log baat karne se darte hai wahi maani singh khurana ko apne pyar se baat karne main darr lagraha hai...lagta hai dheere dheere pyar main meri bolti hi band hojaegi...!

Geet is busy helping with the wedding preparations and maan is thinking how to give her the gift he has brought for her...just when maan is wondering how to give her he gift,mihika comes there to ask his brother what had happened...

Mihika:hey bro...kya hua?...aapne gift diya geet ko?...kya kaha usne?..usse pasand aaya ki nahin?...gussa toh nahin hui na?...bolo na bro kya hua?

Maan:hogaya?..pooch liya jitne sawaal poochne the?...yah phir aur ek lambi list hai sawaalon ka?...kitna sawaal poochti hai mihu?...aur agar tu chup rahegi toh main kuch boloon?

Mihika:ok sorry...lekin aapko kya hua?...aisi shakal kyun banae rakkhi hai?

Maan: kuch nahin...woh main geet ko gift...

Mihika:geet ko gift kya?..gift diya?

Maan:nahin..nahin de paya...main geet ko gift nahin de paya...

Mihika: what?...aap geet ko ek gift nahin de paaye?..bro aap bhi na...aap na...aap na...

Maan:janta hoon...janta hoon ki main ek bohot bada idiot hoon...stupid hoon main...dumb maan singh khurana...

Mihika starts laughing...

Maan:tu hass kyun rahi hai?...

Mihika:arey..meri marzi...woh kya hai na maine aapko hamesha apne aapko best kehte hue suna hai..apne aapko idiot kehte hue main pehli baar sunn rahi hoon...

Maan:very funny..yahan mera dimag kharap horaha hai aur tu bhi na...

Mihika:bro...aap bhi kamaal ho...geet ko ek gift nahin de paaye...very bad...itne saal apne world ke alag alag jagao par apne business kiya hai aur ab aapko ek gift dene main itni problem?

Maan:arey yaar...pata nahin kyun geet ko saamne dekhte hi meri bolti band hojati hai...pehle pehle jab hum jhagarte the tab koi problem nahin hoti thi aur ab jab main usse pyar karta hoon ta dekhte hi bolti band hojati hai...wahi maan singh khurana jiske saamne log bolne se darte the wahi maan singh khurana ki aaj pyar main bolti band hogayi...waah..!...mujhe lagta hai mihka ki dheere dheere meri na bolti hi band hojaegi...kya pyar main aise hi hota hai?

Mihika:haan...pyar main aise hi hota hai...arey..pyar main achche achcho ki bolti band hojati hai...dekhiye bro...thoda sa confidence..bas aur kuch nahin...arey aap ek gift dene main itna waqt lagarahe hai toh pyar ka izhaar karne main kitna waqt lagayenge...bro...ab mujhe hi kuch karna parega...!

Mihika decides on taking geet to her room and helping her to select what she will wear in the evening's function...as she has never attended weddings like this before,she insists on geet helping her to select what she will wear...and so that maan gets an oopurtunity to give him his gift for geet...

Mihika:hey geet..tum please mere saath chalo na...

Geet:kahan..?

Mihika: kamre main...meri help karne ke liye...mujhe samajh nahin aaraha hai ki main kya pehnoon shaam ke function ke liye...actually maine pehle kabhi bhi Indian weddings attend nahin ki hai..toh mujhe pata nahin hai ki kya pehenna hai..toh geet please chalo na meri help karne ke liye...tumhare alawa mujhe aur koi nahin help karsakta..please..please...please help me...

Geet:ok..ok...of course main tumhari help karungi mihika...chalo...!

Geet and mihika go to their room to help what she will wear for the evening...while mihika signals maan that this is the right time to give her the gift he has brought for her...otherwise he won't get any oppurtunity further...

Mihika:geet..yeh red ghagara kaise lagegi?...

Geet:tumpar toh har colour achcha lagta hai...

Mihika:bolo na geet..please...

Geet:upp..mujhe lagta hai ki tumhe red ko green ke saath combine karke pehenna chahiye..bohot achcha lagega...dekho...!

Mihika:yah..ur right...sach main...bohot achcha lagega...geet..thanks a lot ur a genius...tumne meri bohot badi problem solve kardi hai...

Geet: u r always welcome mihika...!

Mihika:waise geet...tum kya pehen rahi ho shaam ke liye?..kuch decide kiya hai?...

Geet:haan...lekin main bhi thodi thodi confused hoon ki kaunse function main kya pehnoon...

Mihika:toh decide karlo..jaise ki koi particular colour...red?

Geet:no...red nahin...

Mihika:green?

Geet:no..not green...

Mihika:toh phir...

Just then mihika is about to give a suggestion...maan calls mihika for which mihika leaves the room so that maan can come and give the gift...geet who is confused as to what to wear herself..ponders over her thoughts...while maan who is leaning onto the door is looking at geet lovingly,engaged in her thoughts...

Geet:kya pehnoon main shaam ko?..yeh greenwala?..nahin yeh bohot hi zyada bhari hai...yeh yellow wala?..nahin yeh toh haldi ke liye hai...saare dresses ko functionwise arrange karne ka yehi nateeja hota hai ki aap ek dress repeat nahin karsakte hai...toh kya pehnoon...?

Maan:geet...

Geet turns back and sees its maan...she wonders what happened.she gives a smile to him..

Geet:arey sir...aap?..kuch kaam tha aapko?

Maan:haan kaam tha...tum iss baat ko lekar confused ho na ki tum kya pehnogi shaam ke function ke liye...

Geet:upp..woh nahin...haan..nahin..haan..pata nahin...

Maan:geet..tum bhi na..isme confusion ki kya kya baat hai?...kuch decide nahin kiya?

Geet:nahin...wahi toh problem hai..ki kya pehnoon?

Maan: toh iss problem ko dur karne ka mere pass ek solution hai...

Geet:solution?..kaisa solution?

Maan:yeh...yeh hai tumhare problem ka solution...

Maan takes out the gift...wrapped in gift paper...

Geet:sir yeh kya hai?..

Maan : fruits aur vegetables...

Geet:kya?...aap mere liye sabzi laye hai...

Maan:geet...main tumhare liye sabzi wrap karke leke aaunga...geet..isse khologi toh pata chalega na ki isme kya hai...

Geet:sir yeh mere liye hai?

Maan:nahin...mere liye hai..geet tum sawaal bohot karti ho...yeh tumhare liye hai...samajhlo tumhare problem ka solution isme hai aur Bhagwan ne tumhari madat karne ke liye mujhe yahan pe bheja hai...

Geet takes the gift and opens it ...she finds a beautiful pink ghagra-choli embellished with stones on it...her eyes open wide when she sees it...it was such a beaitiful attire...

Geet:wow...its so beautiful...sir...bohot khoobsoorat hai...lekin sir yeh bohot mehenga lagraha hai...aur main itne mehenge gifts nahin leti...

Maan:bas..kardi na parayo wali baat..gift mehenga hai ya nahin yeh nahin dekha jata...gift dene ke peeche ka maqsad dekha jata hai...dene wale ka dil dekha jata hai...aur tum ho ki kuch bhi...ek dost samajhkar tumhare liye kharida tha lekin tum toh interested hi nahin ho...theek hai..rehne do...!

Geet:sorry sir...woh main...im really sorry..theek hai main kuch nahin kahungi...waqai main sir bohot khoobsoorat gift hai...

Maan:toh iss khoobsoorat gift ko tum pehnogi aaj shaam ke function ke liye?

Geet:sir...main...woh...!

Maan:kya main woh...?..dekho geet agar tumne yeh aaj shaam ke function ke liye nahin pehna toh main samjhunga ki tum mujhe apna dost nahin maanti...

Saying this,maan leaves from there...leaving geet behind to take her decision...geet smiles at this gesture of maan...she jumps to joy when she receives the special gift from maan..

Maan comes out of the room smiling...when mihika gets hold of him...

Mihika:kyun bro?...bohot smile karrahe ho?...lagta hai finally gift de diya...varna mujhe toh laga tha ki aap kabhi nahin depayenge...

Maan:maan singh khurana ek baar koi cheez karne ki thaan leta haitoh usse koi nahin rokpata hai...samjhi?

Mihika:oh really...thodi der pehle kiski halat kharap horahi thi gift dene ke liye huh?

Maan:arey shuru shuru main hota hai...pehli baar kisiki gift deraha tha aur woh bhi geet ko...aur gift dediya na...bas...!

Mihika:haan...de toh diya aapne lekin usse pasand aaya?...usne kya kaha?...pehnegi aaj shaam ko woh aapka diya hua gift?

Maan:haan..usse pasand toh aaya lekin woh pehnegi yah nahin i'm not to sure...kyunki mujhe lagat hai usse thodi hesitation horahi hai...par maine usse kehdiya ki agar usne mera diya hua gift aaj shaam ke function main nahin pehna toh mujhe lagega ki woh dil se mujhe apna dost nahin maanti...

Mihika:Hey Bhagwan..phir se dost...phir se dosti ki baat ki aapne...aap kabhi dosti ke aage badh hi nahin sakte hai...agar aisa hi haal raha na toh zindagi bhar aap usse friendship band bante reh jayenge...samjhe...?

Maan:toh kya kehta usse?...geet...main tumse bohot pyar karta hoon...please mere pyar ki khatir mera diya hua gift pehenlo...

Mihika:maine aisa kehne ke liye thodei kaha tha...maine toh dosti se aage badhne ke liye kaha tha...kuch ishaara toh dete usse lekin nahin...yaad rakhiye agar aap dosti se aage nahin badhpaye toh woh kabhi aapko ek dost se zyada samajh hi nahin payegi...!

Maan:haan..ho sakta hai...

Mihika:ho sakta hai kya...yehi hoga...!

Mihika leaves...maan gets worried thinking whether geet would acknowledge his gift...geet,on the other hand wonders what to do...she wonders why did maan give her such an expensive gift...she shrugs off her thoughts and believes that friendship is the only cause for the gift...

Finally the evening comes...its the engagement ceremony of aditya and avantika...all of them get ready...decorations are done...guest start coming in...one by one everyone get ready and come down...ankita looks pretty in a purple anarkali suit,while neha wears a beautiful white ghagra choli...arjun looks handsome in a white sherwani...his eyes search for mihika.when suddenly mihika comes down,looking beautiful in red-green ghagra-choli...his eys fix on her...she looks extremely gorgeous...he compliments her and mihika gives a sweet smile to it...the bride and the groom come..everyone is present...enjoying themselves when maan singh khurana makes an entry...looking dashing in a golden-brown sherwani...everyones eyes turn around to look at him...everyone present discuss about him...he comes down when mihika compliments him...

Mihika:wow...thats like maan singh khurana...mera bhai sabse zyada handsome hai...!

Maan:woh toh main hoon...

They share a laugh amongst themselves but  maan's eyes only search for geet...his geet...he wants to see whether geet has accepted his gift whole-heartedly...he is searching for geet everywhere when he hears sounds of a payal tinkling...slowly..slowly the sound attracts maan and he feels geet has come...he slowly turns behind to see that geet has come...dressed in the beautiful attire which maan had gifted her...maan is stunned to see how gorgeous and how beautiful geet is looking in the pink attire...geet looks absolutely beautiful in it...maan cannot take his eyss off her...she slowly comes down and maan slowly walks forward towards her...geet has a sweet smile on her face...she comes down and stands near to maan...maan and geet keep on looking at each other...seeing that geet is looking so beautiful,he could not help himself from complimenting her...

Maan:wow..you look beautiful...!

Geet is surprised and her eyes widen on receiving a compliment...she has a smile on her face...

Geet:ji?...aapne kuch kaha?

Maan comes back to reality...

Maan:huh?...maine kuch kaha kya?...

Geet:arey mujhe kaise pata hoga...aapne kuch kaha ki nahin yeh toh aapko pata hoga na...aapka muh hai aur waise bhi aap toh kuch bhi bolsakte hai...after all aap maan singh khurana hai na...

Maan:geet..tum bhi na...!..waise mujhe yeh kehna tha ki tum waqai main bohot achchi lagrahi ho...bohot khoobsoorat...

They again get lost in each others eyes...when suddenly both come back to reality...geet's eyes widen and she says...

Geet:sir aaj ka din na calender main mark karna parega..bohot important din hai...

Maan:kyun?

Geet: kyunki mujhe aapne yani ke the maan singh khurana ne compliment kiya hai woh bhi itni jaldi..bina waqt lagaye...varna hamesha toh aap dus saal laga dete hai compliment dene main...

Maan:very funny...

Geet laughs and maan admires her...jus when maan is lost in her,mihika comes there...

Mihika whispers in maan's ears...

Mihika:agar aap kahein bro toh aapki aur geet ki shaadi issi mandap main karvade...

Maan comes back to reality...

Maan:bakwaas mat kar mihu...pagal hogayi hai kya?...

Mihika:main pagal nahin hui hoon...aap hogaye ho...pyar main...geet ke pyar main...samjhe?

Maan:very funny...par dekh na mihu...geet kitni khoobsoorat lagrahi hai na...mera diya hua gift usske sivay aur kisi par bhi achcha lag hi nahin sakta...dekha geet ke dil main bhi mere liye kuch hai varna woh mera diya hua gift kyun pehenkar aati?

Mihika:haan lekin hosakta hai ki geet ne sirf apne dost ke liye kiya ho yeh sab...

Maan:ha hosakta hai...par tum dekhti jao...maan singh khurana ka kamaal...

Mihika:okay...!

Maan goes and stands beside geet...everyone is complimenting geet on which she looks at maan...

The engagement ceremony begins...aditya and avantika are happy...and seeing them together and happy,geet is immensely happy...maan,who is standing beside geet is admiring how caring and loving she is...geet starts talking to maan...

Geet:pata hai sir...mujhe shaadiyaan bohot pasand hai...do dil jab ek dusre ke hojate hai toh bohot achcha lagta hai kyunki isse achchi baat kya hosakti hai jab do pyar karne wale ek dusre se hamesha ke liye miljayein...hai na sir?

Maan:sach geet...jab do log ek dusre se pyar karte hai na tab unhe milna toh hota hi hai..kyunki unki jodi khud Bhagwan banakar bhejta hai...

Geet:yeh baat bilkul sahi kahi aapne sir...pyar se badhkar kuch nahin hota hai...!

Maan:(looking at geet)...waqai main...pyar se badhkar kuch nahin hota hai...!

The ceremony begins and they all start their celebrations...maan starts singing to which geet is immensely surprised...he sings the song " Rab Rakha" to bless the couple and make their celebrations memorable...geet also joins into dance with the entire gang of friends joining in too...during the song,geet goes through some strange emotions towards maan which she has never felt before...maan and geet bring the couple on the dance floor...and while they are dancing,geet and maan stand beside each other indulged in their own conversation...

Geet:maan sir...kitne khush lagrahe hai na woh saath main?

Maan:haan..bohot khush lagrahe hai...!

Geet:kaash mujhe bhi koi aisa milta jo mujhse itna hi pyar karta...

This makes maan look at geet lovingly...he keeps on looking at her...he decides to tease geet a little...

Maan:haan..lekin bechare ki kya halaat hogi tumse shaadi karke.

Geet:kya matlab?

Maan:matlab yeh hai ki geet usse toh bravery award milna chahiye tumse pyar aur shaadi karne ke liye...

Geet:kya kaha aapne?...kya main itni bhayanak lagti hoon?

Maan:nahin geet..tum bhayanak aur daravni bilkul nahin lagti...tum toh bohot zyada bhayanak ho...

Geet:aap na...baaz nahin aayenge...waise jaise boss waise unke employees..aap itne bhayanak hai ki humein toh bhayanak hona hi hai...taki jab log humein dekhe toh unhe pata chaljaye ki hum maan singh khurana ke company main kaam karte hai...!

Maan:haan toh theek hai na...(goes near to her ears)...mera kuch toh asar hua hai tumpar...!

Geet turns and looks into his eyes...they look into each other's eyes for a long time...when geet comes back to reality and maan smiles...geet also faintly smiles...

Geet:ha ha ha..very funny...waise sir..mujhe bhi iss baat ki fiqr hai jiss ladki ki aapke saath shaadi hogi usko bhi toh bravery award milna chahiya..hai na sir?

Maan:haan...maan singh khurana ki biwi banna koi asaan baat thodei na hoti hai!

Geet:haan...bechari ki mushkilein hi to badhengi...!

Maan:waise geet maine suna hai ki dusro ki shaadiyon main aksar apna jeevan saathi miljata hai...

Geet:haan kabhi kabhi aisa bhi hota hai...kabhi kabhi dusro ki shaadi main apni khud ki shaadi bhi fix hojati hai...

Maan:toh phir theek hai...iss shaadi main, main apne liye ek dulhan dhoond hi leta hoon...kyunki main soch raha hoon ki main finally shaadi kar hi loon...!

Geet becomes absolutely surprised...feeling slightly jealous...

Geet:kya????...aap aur shaadi?...

Maan:kyun?...main shaadi nahin karsakta hoon kya?...main insaan nahin hoon kya?

Geet:nahin...

Maan:kya?

Geet:ummm...mera matlab hai ki aap abhi shaadi karnege?...itni bhi jaldi kya hai sir?

Maan:arey jaldi hai geet...mujhe na ab settle hojana chahiye aur dekho na..yahann kitne saare eligible ladkiyan hai...koi na koi achchi ladki toh mil hi jayegi...

Geet feels highly jealous...she is angry...

Geet:yeh?...aur eligible ladkiyan?...kaunse angle se yeh aapko aapse shaadi ke layak samjhte hai aap?...aur waise bhi shaadi ka faisla itni jaldbaazi main nahin karni chahiye...shaadi ek bohot badi responsibilty hoti hai sir...soch samajh kar faisla karna chahiye...shaadi koi morning walk toh hoti nahi ki subha mann kiya toh nikal gaye walking ke liye...similarly shaadi ka maan kiya toh bethgaye mandap main kisi se bhi shaadi karne...!

Maan: kyun?...agar main shaadi karoon toh tumhe kya problem hai geet'''.koi problem hai tumhe (maan smiles)

Geet:haan...

Maan: kya?..problem hai?...kya problem hai tumhe geet?

Geet:kuch nahin'

Maan: nahin geet bolo'.kya problem hai tumhe..!

Geet: sir'agar aap ne shaadi karli toh humara boss kaun banega??

Maan:kya?? (smiles)''geet main shaadi karloon toh isme mere boss bane rehne main kya problem hai'main thode hi shaadi karke vida hojaunga'tum bhi na geet'nahin'tumhe koi aur problem hai'batao mujhe kya baat hai'

Geet:( in her mind0'phas gayi na geet'aut tu bhi'kuch bhi bolti hai'waise mujhe pata hai yeh mujhe pareshaan karne ke liye yeh sab kehrahe hai'ab dekhiye ki geet aapko kaise pareshaan karti hai'...dekhiye sir problem yeh hai ki agar aap shaadi karenge toh mujhe bhi shaadi karni paregi na''.

Maan becomes amazed at what she said..he thinks that she has understood that he loves her and she loves him  too'.he smiles'

Maan:really geet??...main shaadi karunga toh tum bhi'..

Geet:haan..karni toh paregi na'woh kya hai na main ye maanti hoon ki ek employee ko apne boss ke footsteps ko follow karni chahiye''boss shaadi kare toh employee ko bhi shaadi karni chahiye''akele boss shaadi karein toh achcha nahin lagta hai na sir''.toh maine bhi decide karliya hai ki aap main bhi aapki tarah settle hojaun..ek achcha sa ladka dhund hi loon apne liye''.

Maan:kya??...ladka ?...geet tum ladka dhundogi apne liye?...

Geet: haan..bina ladke ke main kaise shaadi karungi''.ek achcha ladka toh dhundna parega na shaadi ke liye jaise aap dhundenge ek achchi si ladki''.

Maan:( in his mind)'.margaya maan'ab kya hoga'kahin yeh sach main kisi aur ladke ke saath shaadi na karle'..!

Maan sees geet flirting with other boys and become furious .To teach her a lesson maan also starts flirting with other girls  which makes geet jealous too.Will they  really find someone from themselves or will they confess their love for each other??...

 



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