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Posted: 25 July 2010 at 6:13am | IP Logged
This is a story of two different individuals who unite by the special feeling of love...totally different from each other and with poles apart characteristics,they meet in unusual circumstances...the story is a pure divine love story where these two were actually destined to meet...

A  girl named Geet Bakshi who is Indian by values and follows an Indo-western style in her dressing...loves to live life in her own terms...sweet, bubbly proud of her mistakes...just passed college and joins a construction company as an intern architect...she lives with her little sis Antara who is in school and Dai Ma who brought up the two sisters...as their parents are no more...she is loved dearly in d entire office...!

Maan Khurana...a man who is hard core business man and takes ovr the company where Geet works...he lives life on his principles nd believes what he does is right..a handsome man with a pleasing personality but his life changes completely when geet cums to his life...he loves to stay away from love...but some where he adores it when he sees others in love...but never admits it...!

He stays away frm his family...there is a reason to it...!

Geet cums frm Delhi to mumbai nd Maan, a native of Toronto cums to mumbai as he takes overa company...!

Part 1
The scene starts where geet gets up in the morning and asks for a cup of coffee from Dai Ma who she fondly calls DM...nd her lil sis Antara getting ready fr school...she call her Anti...!

Geet: DM meri coffee kahan hai...? jaldi laooo!

DM: Uff ho yeh ladki...subha hui nahin ki iski shuru hojati hai...laiii!

Geet: Anti kahan he tu...chal aaj mein tujhe school chod deti hoon...!...

Antara calls Geet ...G..!

Antara: G ..tum abhi abhi uthi ho kaise chaloge mere saath..? sorry par mujhe late nahin hona...!

Geet: arey aajakal help ki koi value hi nahin rahi...kya zamana aagaya hai...

Dai Ma enters..

DM: theek hi toh kehrahi he...tu abhi tak uthi bhinahinbed se aur tera charity function shuru hogaya...use school jaane de aur tu taiyyar hoja...job ke liye late hojaegi..!...teri maam tujhe dategi..chal jaa.

She has her coffee and takes her scooty nd runs to office..in a nice blue churidar wid oxidised jewellery...she luks pretty as usual nd reaches office...geet ws chatting abt last nite's telecast of her fav serial's episode when a special meeting is called in the conference room by her boss named Avantika Mehra...she loves geet too...!

In the conference room...
Avantika: ok people aaj mein ek bohot important aanouncement karne jarahi hoon...humare company ko ek nayi company ne take over kiya hai...khurana constructions...dnt wry,...main aapki aaj se boss nahin rahoongi infact main bhi unke under kam karungi jo aapke naye boos honge...

Geet speaks up...

Geet: lekin maam kyun..?...pata nahi kaun gadha aayega humara boss banke...

Everyone  including avantika start laughing but...

Avantika: par geet humare shares ke waje se aisahua he..nd dnt wry aapka naya boss bohot achcha he...

Geet: hmmm woh toh aane par hi pata chalega...

Avantika: aur geet tumhe ek kaam karna hai...woh 2 ghante baad toronto se aarahe he..tumhe unhe airport jaake lena hoga aur unhe unke ghar tak pahuchana hoga...make sure he dsnt hve a problem..

Geet is shocked nd says..

Geet: par main kyun?uss gadhe ko mujhe hi leke aana parega...pata nahin kaun hai..!

Geet leaves for the airport..

If u ppl like d intro then i will continue...do comment plese guys..this is fr u ppl..)Tongue


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Edited by swthrtdevisha - 06 September 2013 at 10:04am

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great
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surely...i will update...!

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Nice strt
Liked Geet's bubbly nature
Hop she dosent creates prob in the airport
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Geet reaches the airport...geet is as usual late and she is angry to the core....!

 

Geet: pata nahin kaun hain...avantika maam ko replace karega...arey jaldi me toh naam lena bhul hi gayi...kher kya farq parta hai...dekhungi toh samajh jaungi dikhega toh gadha jaisa na...par flight aaya ki nahin...mujhe use ek naam dena chahiye.... toronto wala gadha yah phir firangi gadha....pata nahin kaun rakshas he jisne avantika maam ki position leli..chaddo geet aur dekh ki flight aaya ki nahin...!

 

geet starts running nd rushes to find whether the flight has come or not....in the mean time the hero enters...Maan Khurana is waiting nd calls Avantika...avanitka says dat she hs sent sum1 frm d office..b4 she cud tell d name of the person he kept the phone....maan is furious..

 
Maan: Pata nahin logo ko responsibilty kyun dete he..pata nahin avantika ne kise bheja hai....zaroor koi irresponsible insaan hoga...uff mujhe late horaha he...pure 1 ghante se airport mein wait karraha honn.sabse pehle office jake iss insan ko naukri se nikalunga..oh god..!
 
Maan is so angry dat he orders his team to leave frm dere....his funny assistant Raghav follows him...Maan is walking fast wid anger...
 
Geet starts fighting wid d airport officials in order to get inside...
 
Geet: aap mujhe andar jaane kyun nahin derahe he..? aapka ghar he kya aur kya main aapko chor lagti hoon jo main andar jaungi aur saare plane chori karke lejaungi...hahaha!
 
officer: dekhiye maam hum aapko andar nahin jaane de sakte..rules hai maam..
 
geet: bhaar mein jaye aapke rules...mujhe kisi ko lene jaana hai aur mujhe late horaha he...
 
Geet in her mind...
 
Geet: pata nahin kahan phasgayi...yeh toronto wala rakshas..khoon chusne wala chamgadar kaun he...isse mile bager hi meri problems shuru hogayi pata nahin jab milungi toh kya hoga...!
 
Geet: dekhiye aap mujhe jaane dijiye...toronto wali flight aagayi hogi....
 
officer: maam aap late he..toronto wali flight land hochuki he aur mostly  saare passengers check out hochuke....
 
Geet: hey bhagwan! Babaji ab kya hoga..? avantika maam k main kya bolungi ki mujhe airport mein woh toronto ka rakshas nahin mila...!..meri toh bali  chadjaegi...madat karo please..
 
Geet breaks the door...moves d officers nd runs to find her new boss...officers run aftr her...
 
officer: maam rukiye....
 
geet runs nd on d odr hand maan is walking down...both r walking towards each odr......nd the moment cum wen they finally meet each odr for the first time....
running nd walking  Geet nd Maan bump into each other ...geet bumps into maan nd maan catches her through her waist...maan saves her from falling down...mahiiii plays as usual in d bg....they look into ach odr...maan look and stares at her as if he hsnt seen a beautiful girl than her nd geet's eyes r closed....maan adores her beauty nd gives a fade smile...geet opens her eyes nd sees maan for the first time..they both luk at each odr as if there is no1......they keep on lookin wen suddenly...maan raises her nd geet settles her dupatta...
 
Maan in anger...
 
Maan: yeh kya battameezi hai...tumhe dikhayi nahin deta...aandhi ho kya...yah phir dhakka dekar chalne ki aadat hai...
 
Geet: oh hero! thoda aapne baatoon ko break lagao...jo muh main aaraha he aap bolejarahe...ladki hoon iska matlab yeh nahin ki aap kuch bhi bolenge....wat do u mean ki dhakka deke chalna ...main yaha kisi ko dhundne aayi thi...aapse takrane ka mujhe koi shauq nahin he....aur waise bhi aap mujhe battameez kehrahe he...battameez toh aap he...ladkiyon se baat karne ki shayad tameez nahin seekhi he aapne...ek toh jo kaam karne aayi thi woh hua nahin aur upar se aap...hey Babaji aap aise insaan kyun banate hain...
 
Maan: kya kahan tumne? sharam he yah nahi aur waise bhi mujhe tum jaise ladkiyon se baat karne ka koi shauq nahin he....tum ladkiyon ki yehi problem he ...thodi khoobsoorat kya hojati ho apne aap ko beauty queen samajhne lagti ho...aur ek toh girne se bachaya..thank u toh kahan nahin  upar se...god pata nahin kiska muh dekhkar nikla main subhe subhe...
 
geet: apni hi shakal dekhkar nike honge isilye toh din kharap hua...aur mujhe khoobsoorat kehne ke liye thank u so much..aur haan sharam toh hogi hi nahin na mujhme. kyunki kabhi kabhi besharam logo ke saamne besharam banna parta hai..aur haan mera aur time waste mat kijiye...apne kutto ko lekar yahan se jaiyye...
 
Maan: kya kaha tumne?...kutte...?
 
Geet: haan aapke piche piche chalrahe he toh aapke kutte hi honge na..
 
Maan: bari batameez ladki ho...na bolne ki tameez hai na kuch...aur main tumhara time waste karraha hoon..time toh tum mera waste karrahi ho...aur mujhe hamesha sikhaya gaya hai ki gande cheezo ko muh nahin lagana chahiye...
 
Geet: wahi toh! mujhe bhi yehi sikhaya gaya hai...main Babaji se pratharna karungi ki aapse meri kabhi phir se mulaqat na ho..
 
Maan: mujhe bhi nahin he.....
 
Geet: ab hatiye saamne se...yah phir dhakka dekar hataun
 
Maan: oh please...
 
thy part frm each odr nd both r very angry....maan luks back nd see her walking nd wen maan luk frnt geet luks back nd walks back again...
 
geet: pata nahin kaisa banda hain yaar.. ladkiyon se baat karne ki tameez hi nahin...chachundar kahin ka....i hope yeh naya boss aisa na ho...Hey Babaji...!
 
Maan: oh god! yeh ladki thi yah sample piece...mera sara time waste kardiya..i hope mujhe isse dobara milna na pare....
 
they both leave in their respective directions.....but thy do not know wat does destiny have in store for them...they will meet again...!
 
 
 

 


Edited by swthrtdevisha - 25 July 2010 at 11:24am

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