Have not read it yet....but title is awesome, confusing, attention grabbing and cyptic.
Edit : Just finished it....good one considering that you are a newbie here and this is your first attempt. 👏
Just take some care about the spellings...the way Hindi words are written in English may be a bit tough. And yeah...it is evident that you are not 100% comfortable with Hindi...never mind anyway. It was a good story.
Edited by visrom - 13 years ago