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Posted: 23 July 2010 at 2:21am | IP Logged
Have not read it yet....but title is awesome, confusing, attention grabbing and cyptic.
 
 
Edit : Just finished it....good one considering that you are a newbie here and this is your first attempt. Clap
 
Just take some care about the spellings...the way Hindi words are written in English may be a bit tough. And yeah...it is evident that you are not 100% comfortable with Hindi...never mind anyway. It was a good story.


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Posted: 23 July 2010 at 2:35am | IP Logged
Its fantastically written!! very gud job!! Clap keep it up!! aur abhi sir rocked here!! Lolz... d story was short but action and fast paced... awaiting ure next story! Big smile
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Posted: 23 July 2010 at 2:37am | IP Logged
Originally posted by drilabh

Its fantastically written!! very gud job!! Clap keep it up!! aur abhi sir rocked here!! Lolz... d story was short but action and fast paced... awaiting ure next story! Big smile
 
i completely agree with drilabh
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Posted: 23 July 2010 at 4:47am | IP Logged
Thank you all for your feedback. Though I want some detailed ones. Do you like the codes? Please let me know.

@visrom Yes I agree. I am not at all comfortable with Hindi. But still I tried.Thanks again for your feedback.
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Posted: 23 July 2010 at 4:48am | IP Logged
nice story
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Posted: 23 July 2010 at 5:00am | IP Logged
Since its your first attempt I will say it was very good attempt. Never mind you will soon learn how to write in hindi. Passion can make a person very good learner.


About your story. seriosuly code at first sight looked like chemistry formula only but I know no such elements exist like l, a, o, c. It was fast paced liked it. But just a grip over story was missing somewhere I felt. nevertheless congrats to you for your first story and happy we have another writer here. Would love to read a lot more stories from you. 
A dose of story everyday on IF wow.

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Posted: 24 July 2010 at 12:50am | IP Logged
To all members,
Please please give your feedback.
I know there are grammatical mistakes and may be it  does not meet the standard of the stories posted by you, but still give your comments.
I am waiting for your response.

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