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Well guys i knw...many like mayur also...so i've written d first os same for both mayur n sajan...hope i've not disappointed any one of u'll...
so here is the same os but in Mayur version...Hoping fr ur reviews...
Memories Revisited Pg 1
Euphony Pg 6
It was pouring heavily and the road was deserted?.the night was silent and misty and the only sound reverberating was of the rainfall and thunder?She was walking aimlessly down the road and tears glistened on her cherry cheeks, her vision was blurred but she didn't bother cleansing her spectacles and walked an untrodden road, where she had no one to look forward too?nor her family nor her husband; she let out silent tears as she trailed back in the past into her memories...
It was 20thJune, the most precious day of her life; she got married to the love of her life on this very day?she was anxiously waiting for her dear husband to arrive, after all this was going to be a memorable anniversary for them, as she was pregnant and came to know about this joy in the wee hours of morning. It was way past 9 o'clock and worry was etched on her face?Oh! Dear lord hope everything is fine?why hasn't mayank returned yet? He promised me he would be back by 7 o'clock and it's almost two hours and no sign of him, mutterednupur as she paced the spacious hall of their apartment. Suddenly, the door bell rang and nupur sprang into action and ran towards the door; only to find a fully drenchedmayank standing motionless at the door with a near about two year old baby girl
She called me up and to be frank I was delighted to hear from her after three years, l went to meet her that's when I came to know about kiara; my daughter?I refused to believe but she was telling the truth and when I asked her why after years she wants me to accept our daughter ? she told me she was suffering from blood cancer and that too in the last stage and the only thing she wished was I accept my daughter, she get a family before her mother left for eternity?she didn't want her daughter to be an orphan like she was. She even confessed she didn't want to come in between us and hence, went far off but destiny played games and she had to come back.Mayank paused to take breath and continued further?dia died today in the morning leaving behind a part of her, her bundle of joy in my hands, I could not leave kiara ?I'm not hard hearted that I leave my daughter alone in this world when her father is alive and knows about her?.the only thing I hope and wish from you nupur is to accept kiara with your heart, I know it's difficult but not impossible, sighed mayank.
Without uttering a single word nupur got up and left the house as she needed some time and space to clear the mess and drain her soul to come to terms with reality. Shona wait?...nupur ?..where are you going? The voice became muffled as she walked away..."
And here she was walking on a lonely road and the words played and replayed in her mind, and she finally pondered, "I should not have walked away liked that, how could I do so? It's not as if samrat has cheated me, he himself didn't know about it?But he could tell me the day he found out?But the point is he came clean today, he confessed he didn't hide the fact from you?"She fought a battle with her inner self and after what seemed like eternity, retraced her steps towards her home??.
The sight that greeted her was beautiful an hour back she found it dreadful and now she found it beautiful! Mayank had fallen asleep on the couch and kiara was playing with his tie?.Oh! How could I not trust my husband she questioned herself, as she moved towards him and brushed the hair across his forehead; and he suddenly woke up with a jerk?"Shona is that really you?" and she nodded silently. "I'm sorry dear, I didn't want to spoil this day?I'm so very sorry?" spoke mayank. "Nomayank it's not you who should ask forgiveness but me, I doubted your love?I'm so sorry?" muttered nupur. And words and untold feelings were expressedthrough their eyes?and she hugged her husband tightly, when she heard kiara cry?."Oh! My baby, don't cry mamma's there with you now, no more tears from now on in my sweet daughters eyes" and tears welled up in mayank's eyes listening his wife talk to 'their' daughter; and he took his wife and daughter in a tight embrace, sending silent thanks to the almighty for making this anniversary memorable in every sense.
Love is not always expressed by physical gestures. It can also be expressed silently?love means connecting and bonding emotionally and being there with your loved one through thick and thin, and trust and understanding define love in the unspoken form!"
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I'm so sorry for the delay. I was a little busy with other things.
It was awesome. I could actually imagine the whole scene. The way you described it was too good.
You had written it so beautifully that by the end of the OS I had tears in my eyes.
The inner meaning to it was very nice.
I love the last lines. They are true in every sense.
Do write more and thanks for the PM.
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