Baat Hamari Pakki Hai

LOVE IS DESTINY...........DESTINY IS LOVE - Page 7

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Posted: 13 years ago
Niceeee part.
I feel sad for tara.
Update soon.




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Posted: 13 years ago
loved it.
continue soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update,i'm loving every bit of it,
now waiting when he will tell sanchi,
heyy dnt leave plzz continue!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Amazing, love it..
ps im new here Hello๐Ÿ˜›
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Posted: 13 years ago
u're doing a great job!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Great job!!
its awsomee! and thanx for the pm ๐Ÿ˜Š
love the part!
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Posted: 13 years ago
continue soon that was a nice update...
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved dadi and nidhi. they are too funny;   im glad shravan told tara  but hope their fathers dont make  S-T's jodi. hehe
great job!.
 
btw: why are u leaving the forum? :(
Edited by curry-sistah - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Shravan thinking ab aage kya karun ?
Papa se baat karun ya sanchi se
Hmm
Sanchi se toh dadi baat karne ko keh rahi thi
Main papa se keh deta hun

He reached his home and went inside

Papa toh abhi ghar pe nahi honghe hmm kya karun soch leta hun unse kya bolunga

He was just thinking when

Pratap entered the home he was very happy

Pratap:Madhura Madhura
He sees Shravan
Pratap: Shravan aaj main bahut khush hun tumse
pucho kyun
Shravan: kyun papa
Pratap: aaj Vikram ne mujhe tum dono ke project ki report submit ki hai aur woh bahut acchi hai aur yahi nahi woh report with plans city council ne pass kar diye hain aur ab Khannas aur hum ab tak ke is shehar ke sabse bade project pe kaam karenghe

yeh hamari company ke liye bahut bada project tha i am so proud of you

Shravan : thanks papa
Pratap: hmm acha tumhari mummy kahan hai mujhe unse kuch jaruri baat karni hai

Shravan: woh andar kamre mein hai
Pratap went inside

Shravan: bete isse acha mauka nahi milega papa se baat karne ka itne khush toh woh kabhi nahi hue abhi hi jakar bol deta hun

Thinking like this he goes and was just going to knock on the door of his parents bedroom when he heard

Pratap: Inder ji ........................ muffled .........Vikram ne.........muffled ...............hath manga.........muffled ......... Sanchi ne........... han woh bahut khush hai...................muffled

Madhura: yeh bahut acchi baat hai...............zindagi bahr ....................khush hai ......
Pratap: han unhone hume pucha....................izzat di..............Sanchi.......................ki khushi.........
Shravan ne jo kiya...................phir ....................

Shravan stopped and was like whats this
us gadhe Vikram ne kahin Sanchi ka hath toh nahi mang lia
mujhe abhi office jakar uski tange todhni padheghi

Thinking like this he drove his car like a maniac to the office
When he reached inside there was no Vikram aur Sanchi
He stood in the office fuming when

Vikram: arre wah Shravan main tumko hi phone kar raha tha
saying this he pushed a laddu in Shravan's mouth and then another one
Shravan was not able to speak with his mouth full but he made sounds
aggg........karrrrrrrr.............

Vikram: yehi puch rahe ho na ki laddu kyun woh bhi do do
arre do do khush khabri hai isliey
pehli mera rishta pakka ho gaya hai
dusri hamara project final ho gaya hai

Shravan:grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjj
Vikram: Sanchi ne chutti le li hai tyari karne ke liye engagement ke liye yeh mera card hai
Dekho yar tum mere bhi aur Sanchi ke bhi dost ho jarur aana acha ab main chalta hun
So before even Shravan could say anything he Vikram left the office

Shravan was left holding the card in his hand and mouth full of laddu
He threw away the card and left the office in fury
Shravan walking on the road

Shravan: usne han kaise kar di aakhir woh kya jatana chahati hai
mujhe usse milna hoga usse puchna hai
Mujhe maloom hai woh mujhse pyar karti hai tab iss rishte ke liye han kaise ki usne
he tries calling Sanchi on her mobile but she doesn't pick up
ghar pe call karun nahi kisi aur ne utha lia toh
Mujhe usse milna jaana hai woh mere sath kyun kar rahi hai aisa

While walking he doesn't know where he is going and reaches the same temple where his Dadi and Nidhi had seen him and Sanchi

Shravan sees the temple and engulfed with previous memories he thinks
 Inhone hi mera aur Sanchi ka rishta bandha tha yehi meri madad karenghe ab
Thinking like this he climbed onto the stairs
What he didn't notice was that  Sanchi is also climbing the stairs of the temple

He goes and stands in the line and starts devoutly praying , not noticing Sanchi
While Sanchi also has not noticed Shravan
But Dadi and Nidhi who had called Sanchi there noticed both of them

Dadi to Nidhi
Kudrat ka karishma dekho bhagwan ne dono ko ek hi sath yahan bula lia hai
Nidhi:han Dadi phir bhi yeh dono ek dusre se anjaan hai
Dadi: sapne dekhna chod hume kahin chupna padhega
Nidhi: kyun dadi
Dadi: agar bhagwan ne in dono ko yahan bulaya hai toh hume yeh dekhna chaiye ki woh chahata kya hai na ki bahgwan ke kaam mein dhakal nahi dena chaiye chalo

meanwhile unaware of each other both Shravan and Sanchi are praying to god together
(ram ram music going on in the background)





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Posted: 13 years ago
continue soon.
loved it.