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LOVE IS DESTINY...........DESTINY IS LOVE

atikna IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 21 July 2010 at 2:39am | IP Logged
hi everyone iam new here but a big fan of the show
i just can't help fast forwarding and trying to imagine the story
so i am going to write a fast forward fanfic


Sanchi shravan fanfic

 

Prologue- Sanchi and Shravan had a contract marriage for one year and Sanchi comes to love Shravan more and more. Even Shravan starts caring for her but block headed as he is he is determined to marry Tara as she is his supposed one and only love

At the end of one year Sanchi and Shravan separate . this cause lot of discord in Shravan's family as everyone loved Sanchi but seeing that both of them were determined to carry out the divorce they give in and Sanchi goes back to her mama's house.

Its one month after the divorce

Sanchi and Shravan have agreed to be friends but at a distance

 

At Shravan  house

 

Shravan's come out of bathroom and shouts sanchi sanchi 

Nidhi comes into his room

Yeh kya keh rahe ho tum Shravan Sanchi yahan nahi hai who toh kabka  apne mama ke yahan chali gayi  ab is tarah chilla ke plz sabko pareshan mat karo

Shravan remembers how as sson as he used to come out of the bath Sanchi used to give him is clothes had tea ready for him

He shrugs his head and proceeds to dress this was the third time it happened this month .

His papa and Dadi were not talking to him

He himself was not at all happy , at times he just felt lost without Sanchi at his side

He starts remembering the day he and Sanchi announced about their divorce

 

Flashback ' one month

 

Ghar pe bahut chehel pehel thi sab koi tyari kar raha tha . aaj sanchi shravan ki pehli anniversary thi .

Sab gharwale bahut khush the


Tabhi Sanchi aur Sharavan andar aate hain . woh dono chup hain

mr. pratap unko dekh ke khush hoke aage aate hain

aage beta aap log dekho tum dono ki pehli anniversary ki sab tyari ho gayi ahi ab jaldi se tyar hoke niche aa jao abhi havan hoga phir party

woh yeh keh kar mudne lagte ahin ki tabhi

Sanchi kehti hai "papa iski koi jarurat nahi hai"

jarurat kaise nahi hai beta aaj anniversary hai tum dono ki

nahi papa  hum aaj alag ho rahe hain



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sab sann reh jate hain 




well guys do u like it should i continue.......



Edited by atikna - 05 August 2010 at 11:45pm

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Posted: 21 July 2010 at 7:30am | IP Logged
I really likeeeee the concept.Plzzzz continue soon.



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Posted: 21 July 2010 at 12:48pm | IP Logged
i really liked the intro plz write more soon :)
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Posted: 21 July 2010 at 3:13pm | IP Logged
loved the idea. Plzz continue and if you have a pm list please pm me too:)
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Posted: 21 July 2010 at 9:30pm | IP Logged
plizz do continue!!!
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Posted: 22 July 2010 at 12:22am | IP Logged
2ND PART

Sab log sann reh jate hain .
tabhi dadi hanste hue aage badhti hain aur kehti hain" bacchon yeh kaisa majak hai woh bhi aaj ke din" Sanchi aage badh ke dadi ko baithate hue bolti hai
dadi hamari shadi ek jhuth thi ek samjhauta tha jo ki humne ek saal tak ke liye nibaya
Shravan mujhse nahi Tara se pyar karte hain aur ab unhe bewajah is rishte mein bandhe rakhna galat hai . dadi ne use dekhte hue pucha
beta Shravan tujhse pyar nahi karta lekin tu?
Sanchi ne aakhen jhuka ke kaha main bhi nahi karti Shravan se pyar ........Thumbs Down
at this Shravan who was listening closely started ........
he felt a strange pain in his heart.Thumbs Up
Pratap Shravan ki tarf badhne lagte hain ki Sanchi unke saamne aa jati hai aur kehti hai papa aap shravan ko iska jimmedar nahi theranenghe  yeh halat the jo hume yeh kadam lene mein majboor kiya
ab main aapse izzajat chahati hun

Shravan aage badh ke kehta Sanchi main bhi tumhare sath mama mami ko batane chalta hun
nahi Shravan yeh kaam mere akele ka hai aap ab apni life mein aage badhiye mujhe ab apne alag raste chalna hai
and she leaves a house
one by one everyone leaves the room Shravan just watches her going

and this was the last time he met her
 
back to present day

everyone was gathered at breakfast table
it was a very silent meal  people only spoke when necessary.
as soon as meal finished everyone left the table for their respective work


in Sanchi's home


it was a black day when Sanchi announced her marriage breakup but all was settled now
Sanchi had also told that now she didn't want to be married again and wanted to have a job and stand up on her feet
so today she was leaving for her first interview
unknown to her , Inder had told all this to Pratap and Pratap approved
and had also arranged his old friend Mr. Khanna to hire her

So Sanchi got her job and Mr Khanna called up Pratap and told him .
unknown to Pratap Saurabh too had been trying for Sanchi to get a job
and unknown to others Dadi and Nidhi had been going to temple every monday just to meet Sanchi.

So everyone at home apart from Shravan knew that Sanchi had now joined Khanna polyesters
as an employee


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Posted: 22 July 2010 at 2:34am | IP Logged
Veryyyyyyyyy nice part.Plzzz continue soon.




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Posted: 23 July 2010 at 12:52am | IP Logged
3rd part

two weeks later


Shravan was very happy today . Tara was coming back after her exams
and today will be the day i introduce Tara to my family aur woh sabko pasand aa jayeghi aur phir uske baad sab pehle jaisa ho jayegha 


thinking like that he came down to breakfast

Papa he said sitting down everyone looked up from the plates
Pratap glared at him
Papa main aaj aap sabko Tara se milwana chahata hun
everyone stared at him stunnedShocked
Dadi suddenly got up from the table and left the room
Unhappy

Nidhi and Madhura(Shravan's mom) followed her
Pratap left the table in anger
Rajat and Geeta quickly finished the breakfast and joined Pratap


so Shravan was left alone at the table

he quietly finished his breakfast and left for work

he was driving along and then came red light
Shravan glances along and sees Sanchi in the car nest to him
she is sitting with a young man and discussing something
Shravan cannot believe his eye
s

he sits staring at her forgetting everything
the light turns green and the car leaves
but Shravan is staring at the back of the car with his mouth open
its only when the car honking brought him back to reality

he started driving again
but all his mind was on Sanchi and that man
he kept on thinking who was that man
kaun hoga woh  kahin Sanchi ko koi bewakoof toh nahi bana raha
woh itni bholi hai kisi ne kuch keh ke use car pe toh nahi baitha lia


he decided he had to follow the car to see if Sanchi was safe or not Thumbs Up
but by the time he decided that the car was lost in the traffic
Shravan was really angry at himself

He reached his office but just couldn't concentrate on his work
he wanted to call Sanchi but as soon as he reached for his moblie something stopped him he just couldn't bring himself to call her.

All day at office he just couldn't forget Sanchi. H e tried to concentrate on his work but couldn'tClap
 in evening he just reached home when his phone rang
it was Tara
Shravan tum mujhe milne aane wale the aaj
kya hua kahan reh gaye

ohh baapre main toh bhul hi gaya
sorry Tara main abhi aata hun
nahin abhi nahi ab kal aana main aaj apne dad ke sath dinner pe ja rahi hun

at this she cut the phone
Shravan stared at it and finally giving a huge sign went insideCry

Everyone sat down for dinner
 Pratap said Shravan kal se tumko Khanna Polyesters ke sath hamare naye project pe kaam karna hai
main chahata toh nahi tha ki yeh itna important project tumko dun par abhi Saurabh bhi nahi ahi aur Rajat Geeta aur main hamare dusre kaam mein  phase hue hain. isliye tumkohi handle karna padhega

ji papa


After dinner everyone retired to their rooms while Shravan though about that man Sanchi
he got lost down the memory lane




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