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Posted: 19 July 2010 at 11:37pm | IP Logged
Hi everyone! I am not a very active member in Geet forums, although I absolutely love the show and MaanEvil Smile Especially Maan.

I've written a Fan Fiction in Pratigya forums and now thought I should try one here. You are welcome to both comment and critisize my writing and/or storyline. In fact criticism is highly appreciated since I will be able to concentrate in working on my flaws. Tongue

Oh and by the way, My name is Samira Tongue. You can either call me Samira, Sammy or even Mrs.
Maan Singh Khurana LOL. The choice is yours.




        Irrevocably Yours

 

 

 

 

Sunlight streamed over the natural landscape, casting its brilliant shine over the horizon. Fresh flowers of various colors bloomed, thus enhancing the beauty of this secluded place. She quietly inhaled the sweet scent of nature; the silence brought her a sense of tranquility in order to override her haunted thoughts.  It seemed as if eternity had passed as she continued to sit upon the wooden bench, silently observing the serene view.


As time elapsed, she found herself staring at the palm of her hands, slowly tracing the lines of her destiny.  Her vision blurred as a single tear drop fell onto her palm. A single tear personified hidden feelings of pain, fear and loneliness.


Geet raised her eyes towards the sky, 'is fate truly so cruel?' she asked the heavens above. 'Am I destined to live unhappily for the remainder of my years?' Ironically, she waited for a response ' futilely hoping that somehow god would answer her questions. She sighed in resignation and closed her eyes. 'My three wishes have yet to be accomplished' she prayed, 'until then, please give me the strength to continue on with my life'.


That said, Geet stood up and reluctantly casted a lingering glance over her shoulder before turning around and walking away in the unknown path, destiny had in store for her.

 

                                                                               

                                                        ***

 

He slammed his fist hard upon the desk, causing the staff to jump back in undisguised terror. Adi nervously fumbled with his fingers as a string of sweat streamed down his flushed face.


'S-sir' he stammered nervously


'Enough!' snapped Maan as he continued to glare angrily at his main designer. 'Did I appoint you this job for you to continuously make mistakes? He asked.


'No MK' murmured Sasha as she looked down onto the ground in humiliation.


'Then how the hell did this happen?' he asked vehemently.


'T-the orders went wrong' Sasha complained earnestly, 'it wasn't my fault ''


'Get out' Maan said menacingly.


Sasha's eyes brimmed with unshed tears as she stared at her boss hopelessly, 'but MK, I am really sorry'.


'Did you not hear me Miss Sasha?' Maan repeated, 'get out of my sight'.


With a sob, Sasha fled from the room ' her shoulders shaking uncontrollably from her dramatic tears. The remaining staff quickly left the room in fear that MK would soon vent his anger out on them. Adi stood trembling before Maan, at a loss of both words and courage.


Maan restlessly paced around the room, his hands clenching into fists ' 'Damn these women and their tears!' he swore loudly. 'You say a few words to them and their ready to cry!'


'S-sir' stammered Adi.


'If you be nice they will cry from being happy, and if you talk a bit seriously to them, then they cry from being sad!' continued Maan, 'and if you say nothing at all, they will still end up crying for no god damn reason!'.


'S-sir' Adi called out again.


'I can never understand these women! They use their tears as a weapon' Maan exclaimed unaware of Adi's lingering presence, 'tears have been used so many times that It has lost its own meaning'.


'S-sir' Adi called out again.


'What!' snapped Maan as he stopped pacing and glared at Adi.


'C-can I l-leave n-now' Adi trembled violently.


Maan sighed in frustration and nodded his head, watching Adi flee from the room in relief.


He sat back down upon his chair and stared unseeingly outside the window. The suns rays brought light into the room, a light that he abhorred with ferocious intensity. He quickly closed the blinds and welcomed the darkness to enter once again into the room and into his life.

 







Chapter Index


Chapter One - Page One

Chapter Two - Page Four

Chapter Three - Page Ten

     Chapter Four - Page Nineteen

       Chapter Five - Page Twenty Six

     Chapter Six - Page Thirty Five

        Chapter Seven - Page Forty Four

     Chapter Eight - Page Fifty Four

   Chapter Nine - Page Sixty Six

     Chapter Ten - Page Seventy Six

               Chapter Eleven - Page Seventy Seven

           Chapter Twelve - Page Eighty Eight

            Chapter Thirteen - Page Ninety Five

Chapter Fourteen - Page 104

Chapter Fifteen - Page 117    

 Chapter Sixteen - Page 129    

  Chapter Seventeen - Page 137

  

 




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Hi Samira! This was very good. Please do continue.

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Originally posted by Maneetkraze

Hi Samira! This was very good. Please do continue.


Hi dear!

Thank you for your comment Tongue.
I'll continue once I see if others liked the chapter Smile

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Originally posted by Aaliyah01

Sammy/Mrs.MSK Hug
 
Loved it, great start! Thumbs Up
 
Sasha, what a crybaby LOL
 
Look forward to the next part Tongue


Aaliyah! Hug

Thank you thank you Wink.

LOL I've always wanted Maan to tell her off! And since that hasn't happened in the show, I thought I should put it in my FF.

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Posted: 20 July 2010 at 12:45am | IP Logged
hey do carry on
i had no idea u were a write...
luved it

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Originally posted by _SuMmEr_LoVe_

hey do carry on
i had no idea u were a write...
luved it


Hey Summer!

Thank you so much dear Smile

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Posted: 20 July 2010 at 12:53am | IP Logged
Originally posted by siinnce.09

Originally posted by _SuMmEr_LoVe_

hey do carry on
i had no idea u were a write...
luved it


Hey Summer!

Thank you so much dear Smile

 
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