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Nice begginnig Nd I  Love the Charcter Sketch... Do continue Soon...


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wowow tht was sooooooooo nice CS and part 1

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nice update dear....pls continue soon...............................................

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PART-2
SHARMA OFFICE
GUNJAN IS MANAGER, DIA IS HR, NUPUR IS ASST. MANAGER.
nupur enters office wearing long skirt
g-hi good morning nupur aaj itna late
n- hi woh actually raste main mrs.kapoor mile the unki tabiyet tik nahi thi unhe ghar chod kar aa rahi hoon
g-tu bhi na hamesha logo ki seva karte rahti hain
n- kya karu aadat se majboor hoon waise dia kaha hain
g- woh uske cabin main hogi (dia enters)

D- hi nupz phir se late aaj kya reason hain
n- tu toh aise baat kar rahi hain jaise tu hi boss hain
d- boss to nahi puchegi isiliye main puch rahi hun
n- chod na ye sab kal tum dono aa rahe hona
d- haan aa rahe hain par kaunsa place
n- cafetaria
g- shayad main nahi aao mujhe kaam hain
n- natak mat kar bhul gayi college chodte waqt hamara promise ki every weekend hum sab saath main time spend karenge .
g- acha baba aaongi
next day morning shergil house
nupur cell rings dia is on line
d- nupur tum log kaha ho main or gunji kabse tumhara wait kar rahe hain
n- haan baba bhai nikal raha hain
on the dining table all are having breakfast
n- bhai
both adhi and sam ask at the same time kya hua
n- aapko nahi aapko (pointing towards sam) woh actually dia ki car karab ho gayi hain to kya aap gunjan aur dia ko pickup karne unke ghar jayenge
s- par nupz
n- pls bhai mana mat karna
s- acha tik hain
n- bhai (adhi is busily eating)
n- aapko sunai nahi de raha kya
a- (looks up) mujhe
n- nahi toh main sharukh ko bulaungi
a- kya hain
n- main soch rahi thi ki ab jab dia aur gunjan ko bhai pickup karrahe hain to suhaani akele kaise aayegi kyun na aap use pick karle
a- sochna bhi mat
 n- kya aap ek ladki ko aise akele chod denge(in full nautanki)
a- tu bhi to akeli hi jaa rahi hain na
n- toh aap use pick up nahi karenge toh main bhi aapse baat nahi karungi
a- itni choti si baat pe itna gussa
n- choti baat aap ko meri baat ki koi value hi nahin main aapse baat kyun karun
s- ab gussa chodo woh uske saath hi aayega
a- par bhai
s- adhi chup chap ja warna madam third world war shuru karegi
a- thik hain
n- dats like my sweet bhai ab mujhe der ho rahi hain main jaa rahi hun
s- kaha tum hamare saath nahi aaogi
n- woh actually mujhe kuch kaam hain complete karke aa jaongi
s- jaise aapki marzi
n- ok den bye saying she leaves
at bhushan house gunjan is waiting eagerly for sam but hides her feelings from dia. but to her suprise wen she gets down she sees sam talking to her father she secretly listens to their covo
sb- kaise ho beta
s- main teek hun aap sab kaise hain with eyes searching for gunjan
sb- tumhara bussiness kaisa hain aaj kal nahi dikhte hon
s- woh kaam ka stress jyada hone ki wajah se thoda busy tha
sb- tumhare papa ke baad tumne badi achi tarah se apni zimmedaari ko nibaya kaash dia aur gunjan ko bhi tumhara jaisa ladka milta
listening dis both sam and gunjan are happy just den dia enters
d- hi sam tum itna late
s- hi candy woh actually nupur ki wajah se late hua
d- yeh ladki bhi na khud bhi bhigdi hain aur sabko bigad rahi hain i think we need to leave baby were are u we need to go
g- aayi di (gunjan enters sam is busy admiring her beauty)
g- hi samrat
s- hi chashmish
d- tum dono kisi ka wait kar rahe ho chalo
(trio get into car dia forces gunjan to sit in front seat with sam)
sharma house
suhaani is busy with call just den adhi enters
s in phone- aa gaya main phone rakthi hoon
s-hi adhi tum yeha kaise
a- (in full irritation) yeha se jaa raha tha achanak se tumhe dekne ka man kiya aa gaya
s- really adhi
a- jyada naatak mat karo mujhe achi tarah se pata hain ki yeh sari plannin tum dono ki hain ab tum chal rahi ho ki main jao
s- ab chal rahi hun na itna gussa kyun ho rahe ho do minute abhi purse leke aayi
a- yeh nupur bhi na mujhe kaha phasa diya
s- apne apse kya baatein kar rahe ho chalo
(both go to cafetaria on adhis bike)
finally all are at cafetaria nupur between sam and adhiraj, gunjan b/w sam and dia suhaani b/w adhi and benji just den suhaani recieves a call seeing number she is excited
su- hi mayu tum kaise ho, kya kar rahe ho, are u missing me
m-di di mujhe bolne ka mauka todo acha aap pehle phone rak ke pc on kijiye mujhe aapko ek news deni hai aur main aapka reaction live dekna chahta hu
su- pc main to bahar hu pls bolna
m- aap ghar jaane ke baad bolunga saying he cuts phone
su- par mayu
(nups has her pc with her using cell dey connect to net and talk to mayu)
su- (direct web chat) hi mayu kya baat hain aaj bahut khush lag raha hain
m- di aap kaha se baat karrahi ho
su- woh main cafe main hun friends ke saath acha bol kya news hain
m- woh actually reh ne do baad main bolunga
su -tu sata nako aur bol
m- woh........
su- woh kya jaldi bol warna tujhe marungi
m- tik hain next week aane ke baad maarna
su- kya(suprised)
m- haan main next week hamesha ke liye mumbai aaraha hun
su- sachi tu mazak to nahi karraha hai na
m- nahi di sach main tik hain di mujhe kaam hain main jaa raha hun main aapse ghar jaane ke baad baat karunga aap apne friends ke saath enjoy kijiye
su- ok bye(she signs out) aaj main bahut khush hu mayank
b-wapis aaraha hain repeat mat karo tumhari voice se pure mumbai ko pata chal gaya
d- (beats him)just shut up benji toh suhaani treat kab dogi
su-aaj bill main hi pay karungi
a- main jaake order karta hun
b- kya pyar hain suhaani ne party ki baat ki aur tum uski taraf se order kar rahe ho
a- dia lagta hain ek maar kam pad gayi ek aur dena zara
n- so madam bahut khush hain
su- so to hun 12 yrs baad ek baar phir hum saath main rahenge
n- lagta hain mr.america ke wapas aane ke baad hamse nahi milogi
su- maine aisa kab kahan waise mere paas ek idea hai tu bhi single hain mera bhai bhi agar tum dono saath main honge toh kitna maza aayega hum charo date peh saath main jaayenge
g- tum pagal ho gayi ho
b- koi doubt hain kya
n- yeh nahi ho sakta
su- kyun
n- kab se apni love story set nahi kar paayi mere peeche padi hain paanch saal se wohi point pe atki hain jab tak tum logo ki love story set hogi tum dono budhe ho jaoge aur uske baad mera 110 saal lag jayenge i dont think tab tak hum charo zinda rahenge
su- nupur tu bhi na kab se try kar rahi hoon ye ladka hain ki baav hi nahi de raha ab tu hi bol main kya karun
n- ek kaam kar kal use uski favourite kheer bana ke try kar shayad baat ban jaaye
su- nupur tu world ki best saali hain
n- aur tu meri sweetest bhabhi
g- tum dono pacca pagal ho
n- jealous hai ok tu cutest bhabhi
g- tumhe nahi lagta kuch jyada ho gaya
adhi enters
a- kya baatein ho rahi hain
b- kuch nahin suhaani tumhari tareef kar rahi hain
a to suhaani- tum jab dekho mere peeche kyun padhti ho
su- tum mere peeche nahi padte ho na isliye.
a- dekho suhaani bachpana band karo office main bhi yahi karthi hain isiliye jab dekho hamare head se daily daant padthi hain
su- dekho adi mujhe chodo aur khud ke baarien main batao(teasingly)
a- mere bare main kya
su- tumhara naya assistant chiru tum dono to made for each other ho
b- yeh chiru kaun hai
(both sam and nupur start laughing)
d- tum has kyu rahe ho kuch to bolo
su- main bolti hun last monday hamare yaha ek naya trainee join hua uska naam hain chiruji shud hindi main baat karta hain village se aaya hain yeha ke taur tareeke seekna chahtha hain use adhi ka asst banaya gaya. parso varun adhi se baat karne gaya tha
flashback
adiraj is doing some work chiru is observing him varun enters
v- hai dude wats up
c- doodh upar doodh hain mujhe dikhayi nahi de raha
v-wat
a- ignore him i am fine waise wat r u doing here
v- i was passing from her i saw u just came by the way wats ur weekend plan
c- aap log weekend ke liye plan banate hain hamare yeha toh weekend apne aap aata hain
a- nothing different as usual friends ke saat hangout
v- dats great
c- aap dosto ke saath latkenge dekhiye aatma hatya karna buri baat hain aur aap inhe rokne ke wajah inhe protsahan de rahe hain yeh bahut buri baat hain
v just shut up
c- ek toh aap apne dost se galti karwa rahe hain aur to aur mujhe shirt upar karne ke liye kah rahe he
batameez
a- chiru ji meharbaani karke muh bandh kijiye
v- he is mad ill catch u later bai
c- yeh to had hi ho gayi woh koi chor hain kya jo aap unhe pakdenge bade shehar waalo ko tameez kahin se bhi nahin hai
v- hey wat r u talking
c- i talking hindi
a- chiru ji chup hojaiye
c- aap bich main mat boliye adiraj ji aapke dost ache nahin hai
and ders a big war b/w chiru and varun adhi trys to handle dem
flashback end
all burst out laughter.
b- adhi mujhe nahi pata tera itna intresting maaf kijiye itna shudh hindi bolne wala assistant mera matlab chela hain
a- benji tu muh band kar warna pitega
sam- already pit chuka hain
a- haan benji tujhe aisa nahi karna chahiye tha koi client ko agreement letter ki jagah love letter deta hai
g- benji tumne client ko love letter  manager ki post main aisa karta hain kya
s- sab nahin karte hamare benji baba karte hain
b- sammy tu chup are woh ek misunderstanding thi yaar aisa kuch nahin hai ek khi jagah dusre ko gaya
d- matlab tum kisi aur ko love letter de rahe the
b- nahi dia tum galat samaj rahi ho
samrat, nupur, adhi are still laughing remembering the joke. 
su- are koi batayega ki hua kya
s-tik hai ill say to hua yeh ki hamare benji baba ne ek client ke saat deal kiya jab client ko usne agreement ki paper di to vo gusse main aakar benji ki  pitayi ki kyunki woh letter agreement letter nahi balki love letter thi jo rohan ne ash ko likhi thi. ek baath to hain benji ki halat dekh kar ek baat confirmed thi ladkiyan bhi boxing kar sakti hain
b- itna bhi nahi pitayi ki
su- samrat rohan ka kya hua benji ki wajah se bechare ka kya hua
b- us kamine ko main nahi chodunga sale ne meri izzat ka kachra kar diya
all were enjoying teasing benji just den dia recieves a call- tik hainmain aa rahi hun
d-nupsi teri wajah se maine car ghar pe rak kar aayi ab mujhe bahar jaana hain kaise jao
s-kya tumhari car toh repair ke liye gayi thi na
n- woh maine aapse jooth bola sorry agar main aisa nahi kahti toh aap unhe pickup nahi karte
g- nupur tu kab sudregi teri bachpana  tujhe ek din bahut badi musibat main dalegi.
n-sorry kahana aisa kuch nahi hoga
d- woh sab chod ab main kaise jao
n- benji hain na drop karne ke liye kyu benji drop karoge na
b- (shyly) agar dia ko koi problem nahi hain to main drop karunga
d-thanks benji shall we leave
b- ya sure
both say bye to all and leave
g- i think ab hame bhi chalna chahiye
n- bhai tik hain phir main jaati hun
s- kaha
a- uske dost se milne
s- nupur tumhara dost yeh hain kaun jisse tum every week milne jaati ho
n- special and secret friend
s- tik hai jahan jana hain jao par jaldi aana
all leave
(precap: sajan, adhaani, benia scenes)

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nice part
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