mjht ff humsaath saath hain updated pg7 part9

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part1-pg1
part2-pg2
part3,4-pg3
part5,6,7-pg4
part 8-pg-6
part9 -pg7
shergil family- head of family ratna shergil with two sons samrat shergil and adiraj shergil and only daughter nupur shergil
samrat shergil eldest of all three. he loves basketball and gunjan and his sweet cute sister nupur. he is handsome,smart, naughty but became serious after his fathers expiry during his final year of college and took responsibility of his father
adiraj shergil is silent, padaku and always thinks about others.he loves booksand cute sister nupur stays away from girls respects elders he wanted to stop his studies for helping his brother  but sam wanted adiraj atleast tolead his life as he wishes
nupur shergil- the heart of shergil family younger dan sam and adhiraj. for shergil family she is like angel. for dem she is lucky charm. dey cant see her crying she is talkative, beautiful, intelligent, happy go lucky type even enemy starts loving her becoz of her nature. she is sweet can convince even stone to change with her talk.she is friendly wih everyone irrespective of der age. she is close to her brothers who share everything with her she even knows about der love life gunjan and suhani
bhushan family
shashi bhushan has two daughters dia and gunjan bhushan
dia bhushan- she is elder than gunjan she is beautiful, stylish, smart. she had affair with rv in college who dumped her off later. she loves her sister gunjan and best friend nupur equally not afraid of any one
gunjan bhushan- she is younger dan dia but elder dan nupur. she is studious, beautiful, sensitive  her mother expired while giving her birth it made her away from her father with great difficulty she made place in her fathers heart now her father loves gunjan and dia equally but due to her childhood she is afraid of loosing her father hence she never does anything her father dislikes wears salwar kameez typical indian girl, didnt accept sammys love for her father. nupur knows her more dan diya, her love for family and samrat and her reason behind hiding her love. nupur is her childhood friend but dey behave like twins
sharma family
shilpa sharma has 2 children mayank and suhaani sharma is elder dan mayank studied in excel best friends nupur,dia, gunjan from college. she loves adiraj but he doesnt give her chance nupur knows dis and tries to help suhaani but adiraj is stubborn suhani is sweet, beautiful, fun loving and naugthy. loves hermom and brother a lot who stays in london
mayank sharma- younger dan suhaani. he completed high school in boarding, higher studies abroad. would be md of one of leading companies in country  sharma industries soon going to expand der business in other countries also. he is punctual, sadu, akdu, padaku, boring but close to sister and mother
benji-close friend of samrat. fun loving smart secret lover of dia only sam and nupur knows it
rv- runs behind girls and dumps dem but still tries for nupur for her beauty she hates him
now elders
ratna shergil- she loves our culture, and her children gives dem full freedom she never forces dem for anything
shashi bhushan-he is typical indian father who hates western culture believes in superstitions but he has completely changed for his daughter he loves dem most can never see dem crying treats nupur equal to diya and gunjan always treats her as der own family
shilpa sharma- current md of sharma industries.she is taking care of business since many years after mr.sharma expired.now wants to retire giving responsibility to mayank. loves suhani and mayank a lot and has given dem full freedom.she is happy go lucky mom
past
sam, gunjan, adiraj, suhani , nupur, dia, benji belong to excel gang all are close to each other. mayank studies in abroad
present
sam is md of shergil industries. adiraj is doing research suhaani is assisting him but  still she is running he is not litening
gunjan,nupur, dia are working in sharma industries as dey love to be independant, mayank is in abroad and shall visit his hometown next week after 12 years and shall never go back. benji is working with sammy. rv is still running after nupur dis is introduction if u like it ill continue
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part1
bhushan house
dia is doing aerobics in dat loud music she listens a sweet voice
dia to herself- lagta hai gunjan baby ka aarthi shuru ho gaya mujhe neeche jaana hoga
swipe
in park
a guy and gal are doing exercise wearing jogging dress and other guy is doing jogging
suddenly a gal from opposite direction comes and hits him both fell down. the guy sees
the gal and is shocked
guy- tum tum yaha kya kar rahi ho
gal-wohi jo tum kar rahe ho jogging
guy-tumhe aur koi jagah nahi mila kya
gal- kyun yeh park tumne karida hain yeha pe sab jogging kar sakte hain
guy- go to hell(gets up and again starts jogging)
gal- adhi suno toh yeh ladka bina kabse khoshish kar rahi hun baav hi nahi deta dont
worry tum jitna chahe koshish kar lo suhaani itni aasani se tumhari peecha nahi chodne
wali  (saying dis sheruns after him )
guy doing excercise -nupur
use yeh idea tune hi diya hai na
n(doing exercise)- kya karu bhai dosti ki hain nibaani to padegi
s- acha dosti nibah rahi hain phir bhai ka kya
n- everything is fair in luv and war waise gunjan bhabhi ke maamle me bhiaapki madat kar
sakti hain
s-lagta hain hame chalna chahiye
n- (smiling) chalo
swipe
dia comes down wearing salwar kammez by den gunjan completes aarthi, shashi bhushan is
standing der praying to god dia goes to gunjan and takes aarthi
g-goodmorning di
d-goodmorning baby
g-aap bhi na di bahar short skirts pehanti hain aur aarti main salwaar kameez 
d-main aarthi main salwar kameez pehnu to tujhe acha lagta hai na isiliye
g- love u di
d- love u too baby
sb-(smiling)sara pyar ek dusre ke liye mere liye nahin
both hug him love u papa
sb- (putting hand on their heads)love u too beta hamesha aise hi khush raho
dia sees watch we r late we need to go otherwise well be late to office (dey go to get ready
to office)
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Originally posted by: gunurmayursajan

shergil family- head of family ratna shergil with two sons samrat shergil and adiraj shergil and only daughter nupur shergil
samrat shergil eldest of all three. he loves basketball and gunjan and his sweet cute sister nupur. he is handsome,smart, naughty but became serious after his fathers expiry during his final year of college and took responsibility of his father
adiraj shergil is silent, padaku and always thinks about others.he loves booksand cute sister nupur stays away from girls respects elders he wanted to stop his studies for helping his brother  but sam wanted adiraj atleast tolead his life as he wishes
nupur shergil- the heart of shergil family younger dan sam and adhiraj. for shergil family she is like angel. for dem she is lucky charm. dey cant see her crying she is talkative, beautiful, intelligent, happy go lucky type even enemy starts loving her becoz of her nature. she is sweet can convince even stone to change with her talk.she is friendly wih everyone irrespective of der age. she is close to her brothers who share everything with her she even knows about der love life gunjan and suhani
bhushan family
shashi bhushan has two daughters dia and gunjan bhushan
dia bhushan- she is elder than gunjan she is beautiful, stylish, smart. she had affair with rv in college who dumped her off later. she loves her sister gunjan and best friend nupur equally not afraid of any one
gunjan bhushan- she is younger dan dia but elder dan nupur. she is studious, beautiful, sensitive  her mother expired while giving her birth it made her away from her father with great difficulty she made place in her fathers heart now her father loves gunjan and dia equally but due to her childhood she is afraid of loosing her father hence she never does anything her father dislikes wears salwar kameez typical indian girl, didnt accept sammys love for her father. nupur knows her more dan diya, her love for family and samrat and her reason behind hiding her love. nupur is her childhood friend but dey behave like twins
sharma family
shilpa sharma has 2 children mayank and suhaani sharma is elder dan mayank studied in excel best friends nupur,dia, gunjan from college. she loves adiraj but he doesnt give her chance nupur knows dis and tries to help suhaani but adiraj is stubborn suhani is sweet, beautiful, fun loving and naugthy. loves hermom and brother a lot who stays in london
mayank sharma- younger dan suhaani. he completed high school in boarding, higher studies abroad. would be md of one of leading companies in country  sharma industries soon going to expand der business in other countries also. he is punctual, sadu, akdu, padaku, boring but close to sister and mother
benji-close friend of samrat. fun loving smart secret lover of dia only sam and nupur knows it
rv- runs behind girls and dumps dem but still tries for nupur for her beauty she hates him
now elders
ratna shergil- she loves our culture, and her children gives dem full freedom she never forces dem for anything
shashi bhushan-he is typical indian father who hates western culture believes in superstitions but he has completely changed for his daughter he loves dem most can never see dem crying treats nupur equal to diya and gunjan always treats her as der own family
shilpa sharma- current md of sharma industries.she is taking care of business since many years after mr.sharma expired.now wants to retire giving responsibility to mayank. loves suhani and mayank a lot and has given dem full freedom.she is happy go lucky mom
past
sam, gunjan, adiraj, suhani , nupur, dia, benji belong to excel gang all are close to each other. mayank studies in abroad
present
sam is md of shergil industries. adiraj is doing research suhaani is assisting him but  still she is running he is not litening
gunjan,nupur, dia are working in sharma industries as dey love to be independant, mayank is in abroad and shall visit his hometown next week after 12 years and shall never go back. benji is working with sammy. rv is still running after nupur dis is introduction if u like it ill continue

edited

part1
bhushan house
dia is doing aerobics in dat loud music she listens a sweet voice
dia to herself- lagta hai gunjan baby ka aarthi shuru ho gaya mujhe neeche jaana hoga
swipe
in park
a guy and gal are doing exercise wearing jogging dress and other guy is doing jogging
suddenly a gal from opposite direction comes and hits him both fell down. the guy sees
the gal and is shocked
guy- tum tum yaha kya kar rahi ho
gal-wohi jo tum kar rahe ho jogging
guy-tumhe aur koi jagah nahi mila kya
gal- kyun yeh park tumne karida hain yeha pe sab jogging kar sakte hain
guy- go to hell(gets up and again starts jogging)
gal- adhi suno toh yeh ladka bina kabse khoshish kar rahi hun baav hi nahi deta dont
worry tum jitna chahe koshish kar lo suhaani itni aasani se tumhari peecha nahi chodne
wali  (saying dis sheruns after him )
guy doing excercise -nupur
use yeh idea tune hi diya hai na
n(doing exercise)- kya karu bhai dosti ki hain nibaani to padegi
s- acha dosti nibah rahi hain phir bhai ka kya
n- everything is fair in luv and war waise gunjan bhabhi ke maamle me bhiaapki madat kar
sakti hain
s-lagta hain hame chalna chahiye
n- (smiling) chalo
swipe
dia comes down wearing salwar kammez by den gunjan completes aarthi, shashi bhushan is
standing der praying to god dia goes to gunjan and takes aarthi
g-goodmorning di
d-goodmorning baby
g-aap bhi na di bahar short skirts pehanti hain aur aarti main salwaar kameez 
d-main aarthi main salwar kameez pehnu to tujhe acha lagta hai na isiliye
g- love u di
d- love u too baby
sb-(smiling)sara pyar ek dusre ke liye mere liye nahin
both hug him love u papa
sb- (putting hand on their heads)love u too beta hamesha aise hi khush raho
dia sees watch we r late we need to go otherwise well be late to office (dey go to get ready
to office)

  when will you start dear
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PART-2
SHARMA OFFICE
GUNJAN IS MANAGER, DIA IS HR, NUPUR IS ASST. MANAGER.
nupur enters office wearing long skirt
g-hi good morning nupur aaj itna late
n- hi woh actually raste main mrs.kapoor mile the unki tabiyet tik nahi thi unhe ghar chod kar aa rahi hoon
g-tu bhi na hamesha logo ki seva karte rahti hain
n- kya karu aadat se majboor hoon waise dia kaha hain
g- woh uske cabin main hogi (dia enters)

D- hi nupz phir se late aaj kya reason hain
n- tu toh aise baat kar rahi hain jaise tu hi boss hain
d- boss to nahi puchegi isiliye main puch rahi hun
n- chod na ye sab kal tum dono aa rahe hona
d- haan aa rahe hain par kaunsa place
n- cafetaria
g- shayad main nahi aao mujhe kaam hain
n- natak mat kar bhul gayi college chodte waqt hamara promise ki every weekend hum sab saath main time spend karenge .
g- acha baba aaongi
next day morning shergil house
nupur cell rings dia is on line
d- nupur tum log kaha ho main or gunji kabse tumhara wait kar rahe hain
n- haan baba bhai nikal raha hain
on the dining table all are having breakfast
n- bhai
both adhi and sam ask at the same time kya hua
n- aapko nahi aapko (pointing towards sam) woh actually dia ki car karab ho gayi hain to kya aap gunjan aur dia ko pickup karne unke ghar jayenge
s- par nupz
n- pls bhai mana mat karna
s- acha tik hain
n- bhai (adhi is busily eating)
n- aapko sunai nahi de raha kya
a- (looks up) mujhe
n- nahi toh main sharukh ko bulaungi
a- kya hain
n- main soch rahi thi ki ab jab dia aur gunjan ko bhai pickup karrahe hain to suhaani akele kaise aayegi kyun na aap use pick karle
a- sochna bhi mat
 n- kya aap ek ladki ko aise akele chod denge(in full nautanki)
a- tu bhi to akeli hi jaa rahi hain na
n- toh aap use pick up nahi karenge toh main bhi aapse baat nahi karungi
a- itni choti si baat pe itna gussa
n- choti baat aap ko meri baat ki koi value hi nahin main aapse baat kyun karun
s- ab gussa chodo woh uske saath hi aayega
a- par bhai
s- adhi chup chap ja warna madam third world war shuru karegi
a- thik hain
n- dats like my sweet bhai ab mujhe der ho rahi hain main jaa rahi hun
s- kaha tum hamare saath nahi aaogi
n- woh actually mujhe kuch kaam hain complete karke aa jaongi
s- jaise aapki marzi
n- ok den bye saying she leaves
at bhushan house gunjan is waiting eagerly for sam but hides her feelings from dia. but to her suprise wen she gets down she sees sam talking to her father she secretly listens to their covo
sb- kaise ho beta
s- main teek hun aap sab kaise hain with eyes searching for gunjan
sb- tumhara bussiness kaisa hain aaj kal nahi dikhte hon
s- woh kaam ka stress jyada hone ki wajah se thoda busy tha
sb- tumhare papa ke baad tumne badi achi tarah se apni zimmedaari ko nibaya kaash dia aur gunjan ko bhi tumhara jaisa ladka milta
listening dis both sam and gunjan are happy just den dia enters
d- hi sam tum itna late
s- hi candy woh actually nupur ki wajah se late hua
d- yeh ladki bhi na khud bhi bhigdi hain aur sabko bigad rahi hain i think we need to leave baby were are u we need to go
g- aayi di (gunjan enters sam is busy admiring her beauty)
g- hi samrat
s- hi chashmish
d- tum dono kisi ka wait kar rahe ho chalo
(trio get into car dia forces gunjan to sit in front seat with sam)
sharma house
suhaani is busy with call just den adhi enters
s in phone- aa gaya main phone rakthi hoon
s-hi adhi tum yeha kaise
a- (in full irritation) yeha se jaa raha tha achanak se tumhe dekne ka man kiya aa gaya
s- really adhi
a- jyada naatak mat karo mujhe achi tarah se pata hain ki yeh sari plannin tum dono ki hain ab tum chal rahi ho ki main jao
s- ab chal rahi hun na itna gussa kyun ho rahe ho do minute abhi purse leke aayi
a- yeh nupur bhi na mujhe kaha phasa diya
s- apne apse kya baatein kar rahe ho chalo
(both go to cafetaria on adhis bike)
finally all are at cafetaria nupur between sam and adhiraj, gunjan b/w sam and dia suhaani b/w adhi and benji just den suhaani recieves a call seeing number she is excited
su- hi mayu tum kaise ho, kya kar rahe ho, are u missing me
m-di di mujhe bolne ka mauka todo acha aap pehle phone rak ke pc on kijiye mujhe aapko ek news deni hai aur main aapka reaction live dekna chahta hu
su- pc main to bahar hu pls bolna
m- aap ghar jaane ke baad bolunga saying he cuts phone
su- par mayu
(nups has her pc with her using cell dey connect to net and talk to mayu)
su- (direct web chat) hi mayu kya baat hain aaj bahut khush lag raha hain
m- di aap kaha se baat karrahi ho
su- woh main cafe main hun friends ke saath acha bol kya news hain
m- woh actually reh ne do baad main bolunga
su -tu sata nako aur bol
m- woh........
su- woh kya jaldi bol warna tujhe marungi
m- tik hain next week aane ke baad maarna
su- kya(suprised)
m- haan main next week hamesha ke liye mumbai aaraha hun
su- sachi tu mazak to nahi karraha hai na
m- nahi di sach main tik hain di mujhe kaam hain main jaa raha hun main aapse ghar jaane ke baad baat karunga aap apne friends ke saath enjoy kijiye
su- ok bye(she signs out) aaj main bahut khush hu mayank
b-wapis aaraha hain repeat mat karo tumhari voice se pure mumbai ko pata chal gaya
d- (beats him)just shut up benji toh suhaani treat kab dogi
su-aaj bill main hi pay karungi
a- main jaake order karta hun
b- kya pyar hain suhaani ne party ki baat ki aur tum uski taraf se order kar rahe ho
a- dia lagta hain ek maar kam pad gayi ek aur dena zara
n- so madam bahut khush hain
su- so to hun 12 yrs baad ek baar phir hum saath main rahenge
n- lagta hain mr.america ke wapas aane ke baad hamse nahi milogi
su- maine aisa kab kahan waise mere paas ek idea hai tu bhi single hain mera bhai bhi agar tum dono saath main honge toh kitna maza aayega hum charo date peh saath main jaayenge
g- tum pagal ho gayi ho
b- koi doubt hain kya
n- yeh nahi ho sakta
su- kyun
n- kab se apni love story set nahi kar paayi mere peeche padi hain paanch saal se wohi point pe atki hain jab tak tum logo ki love story set hogi tum dono budhe ho jaoge aur uske baad mera 110 saal lag jayenge i dont think tab tak hum charo zinda rahenge
su- nupur tu bhi na kab se try kar rahi hoon ye ladka hain ki baav hi nahi de raha ab tu hi bol main kya karun
n- ek kaam kar kal use uski favourite kheer bana ke try kar shayad baat ban jaaye
su- nupur tu world ki best saali hain
n- aur tu meri sweetest bhabhi
g- tum dono pacca pagal ho
n- jealous hai ok tu cutest bhabhi
g- tumhe nahi lagta kuch jyada ho gaya
adhi enters
a- kya baatein ho rahi hain
b- kuch nahin suhaani tumhari tareef kar rahi hain
a to suhaani- tum jab dekho mere peeche kyun padhti ho
su- tum mere peeche nahi padte ho na isliye.
a- dekho suhaani bachpana band karo office main bhi yahi karthi hain isiliye jab dekho hamare head se daily daant padthi hain
su- dekho adi mujhe chodo aur khud ke baarien main batao(teasingly)
a- mere bare main kya
su- tumhara naya assistant chiru tum dono to made for each other ho
b- yeh chiru kaun hai
(both sam and nupur start laughing)
d- tum has kyu rahe ho kuch to bolo
su- main bolti hun last monday hamare yaha ek naya trainee join hua uska naam hain chiruji shud hindi main baat karta hain village se aaya hain yeha ke taur tareeke seekna chahtha hain use adhi ka asst banaya gaya. parso varun adhi se baat karne gaya tha
flashback
adiraj is doing some work chiru is observing him varun enters
v- hai dude wats up
c- doodh upar doodh hain mujhe dikhayi nahi de raha
v-wat
a- ignore him i am fine waise wat r u doing here
v- i was passing from her i saw u just came by the way wats ur weekend plan
c- aap log weekend ke liye plan banate hain hamare yeha toh weekend apne aap aata hain
a- nothing different as usual friends ke saat hangout
v- dats great
c- aap dosto ke saath latkenge dekhiye aatma hatya karna buri baat hain aur aap inhe rokne ke wajah inhe protsahan de rahe hain yeh bahut buri baat hain
v just shut up
c- ek toh aap apne dost se galti karwa rahe hain aur to aur mujhe shirt upar karne ke liye kah rahe he
batameez
a- chiru ji meharbaani karke muh bandh kijiye
v- he is mad ill catch u later bai
c- yeh to had hi ho gayi woh koi chor hain kya jo aap unhe pakdenge bade shehar waalo ko tameez kahin se bhi nahin hai
v- hey wat r u talking
c- i talking hindi
a- chiru ji chup hojaiye
c- aap bich main mat boliye adiraj ji aapke dost ache nahin hai
and ders a big war b/w chiru and varun adhi trys to handle dem
flashback end
all burst out laughter.
b- adhi mujhe nahi pata tera itna intresting maaf kijiye itna shudh hindi bolne wala assistant mera matlab chela hain
a- benji tu muh band kar warna pitega
sam- already pit chuka hain
a- haan benji tujhe aisa nahi karna chahiye tha koi client ko agreement letter ki jagah love letter deta hai
g- benji tumne client ko love letter  manager ki post main aisa karta hain kya
s- sab nahin karte hamare benji baba karte hain
b- sammy tu chup are woh ek misunderstanding thi yaar aisa kuch nahin hai ek khi jagah dusre ko gaya
d- matlab tum kisi aur ko love letter de rahe the
b- nahi dia tum galat samaj rahi ho
samrat, nupur, adhi are still laughing remembering the joke. 
su- are koi batayega ki hua kya
s-tik hai ill say to hua yeh ki hamare benji baba ne ek client ke saat deal kiya jab client ko usne agreement ki paper di to vo gusse main aakar benji ki  pitayi ki kyunki woh letter agreement letter nahi balki love letter thi jo rohan ne ash ko likhi thi. ek baath to hain benji ki halat dekh kar ek baat confirmed thi ladkiyan bhi boxing kar sakti hain
b- itna bhi nahi pitayi ki
su- samrat rohan ka kya hua benji ki wajah se bechare ka kya hua
b- us kamine ko main nahi chodunga sale ne meri izzat ka kachra kar diya
all were enjoying teasing benji just den dia recieves a call- tik hainmain aa rahi hun
d-nupsi teri wajah se maine car ghar pe rak kar aayi ab mujhe bahar jaana hain kaise jao
s-kya tumhari car toh repair ke liye gayi thi na
n- woh maine aapse jooth bola sorry agar main aisa nahi kahti toh aap unhe pickup nahi karte
g- nupur tu kab sudregi teri bachpana  tujhe ek din bahut badi musibat main dalegi.
n-sorry kahana aisa kuch nahi hoga
d- woh sab chod ab main kaise jao
n- benji hain na drop karne ke liye kyu benji drop karoge na
b- (shyly) agar dia ko koi problem nahi hain to main drop karunga
d-thanks benji shall we leave
b- ya sure
both say bye to all and leave
g- i think ab hame bhi chalna chahiye
n- bhai tik hain phir main jaati hun
s- kaha
a- uske dost se milne
s- nupur tumhara dost yeh hain kaun jisse tum every week milne jaati ho
n- special and secret friend
s- tik hai jahan jana hain jao par jaldi aana
all leave
(precap: sajan, adhaani, benia scenes)

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