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Posted: 17 November 2011 at 10:56pm | IP Logged
beautiful os.u have described mayank's pain beautifully.this part was really touching

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Posted: 18 November 2011 at 12:44am | IP Logged

Sujata

 
dear it was very painful yet beautiful Os
 
the way you connect each and every line of Song with Mayank's feeling it was amazing
 
beautifully written
 
loved it

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Posted: 18 November 2011 at 1:14am | IP Logged
awesome...u made me cry sujaCryheart touching...

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Posted: 18 November 2011 at 2:21am | IP Logged
i cried again...
very very heart wrenching...
the entire journey down the memory lane was soo beautifully penned down...
awesome suja...

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Posted: 18 November 2011 at 2:51am | IP Logged
speechless
i was crying at the end
sooo beautifull
the memories were soo precious
ALLAH kare esa kabhi kisi k sath na ho 

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Posted: 18 November 2011 at 3:22am | IP Logged
Beautiful OS...
it wz really heart touching...
d memory flashback was fab...
loved it..Clap
keep writing...


Edited by DASTAK.. - 20 November 2011 at 1:57am

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Posted: 18 November 2011 at 9:22am | IP Logged
beautiful os

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Posted: 18 November 2011 at 9:48am | IP Logged
awww
i m speechless
CryCryCry
it was brilliantt
so nicely u expressed each n every emotion
i loved it
hatss off to uClapClapStarClapClap
loved it
may god bless u
thanks 4 the pm

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