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Posted: 26 August 2010 at 8:53am | IP Logged
very nice update
really touching
thanx 4 d pm

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Posted: 26 August 2010 at 9:35am | IP Logged
Beautiful OS dear
it was too touchy

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Posted: 26 August 2010 at 12:40pm | IP Logged
nice os

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Posted: 26 August 2010 at 4:50pm | IP Logged
lovely OS

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Posted: 27 August 2010 at 12:09pm | IP Logged
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Posted: 29 August 2010 at 1:09am | IP Logged
Originally posted by mayur_my_jaan

this was ff was gud but i didnt like it very much
Rakhi is a a very specal day n u wrote such a sad ff.
no sister wats to read such things
i felt really bad after reading it
just my opinion
sry if i hurt u
 
mayur_my_jaan,
 
sorry dont knw ur name, bt plz dont say sorry. i apprcte ur opinion.
 
basically u r right.....absolutly right. nosister wants to read such things..........specially in d day of Rakhi.
Rakhi is a special day 4 us, all sisters, who love their bros.
 
bt just think 4 moment, d situation of those sisters, who lost their brothers in such unwanter terrorist attacks. nt only 26/11, all those attacks happned in India n rest of the world. m just trying to penciled a situation, behalf of all those unfortunate people, who lost their beloved and crying all 4 lifetime.
 
hope u understand my pov.

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Posted: 01 September 2010 at 8:58am | IP Logged
 hi friends, here m update Mayur Reunion part-2. hope u like it. actually this os, now become a ss, one more part & a small epilogue ws there. bt 4 nw, i postd part-2.
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Part: 2.

 
Their driver ignite engine, Mayank waved them, n turned. He crossed some feet, suddenly he heard a harsh noice.......he quickly turned back and froze immediately.

Mayuri's car bumped on a huge steam......front portion almost smashed.

Mayank just run toward the car, without wasting any second.

People already gathered there  for help. Mayank stood there like a statue, when they laying Mrs. Sharma's motionless blood drench body.

Unconsciously Mayank stepped forward??.and found two little body.....he sat next to Mayuri's and placed his palm to her chest. Shocked!!!!!!!! The heart is beating weakly.

 "Mayuri!!!"  he screamed. People look at him with awe. He quickly placed his palm on Nisha's chest and found her alive.

"both-both are alive. I take them to the hospital." Saying that Mayank lift up Mayuri's little body and rush. Three men follow him with Nisha and Mrs.Sharma.

Someone calling the ambulance for driver's deadbody, he is spotdeath.

 

In hospital.

"She is no more. am sorry." The doctor said, come out from ICU. Mayank is frozen on spot. Unconsciously tear forming in his eyes, it was unable to believe.....Not again God!!!!!!

"that lady is dead. Who is she? Do anyone know her?" doctor asked.

"and-and children?" Mayank ask, "are they fine?"

"they are out of danger." The doctor said. Mayank sighted in relief??.thanking God silently.

Morning incident flashed in front of his eyes....Mayuri's talk...her eyes.......her behaviour...everything. the way she said, balon ko math chuo uncle??.a soft smile playing on his lips. Suddenly his thoughts interrupted by a Police Officer. He is the investigator of this accident.....he took them corner, asked about the accident.

 

Four day passed.

Mayank getting busy for his summit, but everyday he went to hospital once to meet Mayuri and Nisha.

Today, he busy in conference, suddenly his cell buzz........it was an unknow no. Mayank frown and took it....

"Mr.Sharma, m Dr.Irani?..can you please come here?"

"Why? Is anything wrong? Mayuri is ok na?" Mayank ask with so much concern.

"it's a problem about her??.please come fast. Inspector Krishna also here."

 

Mayank reached hospital asap. Inspector and Doctor stood in front of Mayuri's cabin. Without say any word the trio headed to doctor's cabin.

"it's a serious matter. Mayuri is fine, ll discharge today, but her father denied to accept her." Inspector said.

"WHAT???!!!!!!" Mayank shouts, "but why?????"

"because she is adopted by Mrs. Sharma. Actually Mr.Sharma always against to Mayuri. BDW, he took away his own daughter Nisha already."

"Ohh, but why not Mayuri? she is very sweet."

"because, he said, her mother was a mental patient. So he had a fear.....so you understood the educated superstitious people." Doctor sighted. "you are close to her, so we thought, before sending her an orphanage, we need to discussion with you."

Mayank heard their unsaid request, he become silent??.after some moment, Mayank broke the silence, "Inspector, can I adopt her???"

 Rest of two become very happy, "Thanks you Mr.Sharma, we really thankfull to you. Actually we also not want to send her an orphanage."

 

After some paper-work, Mayank took her from hospital. But before that, he gave his card to inspector for verification.....and also took the papers of adaptation. Mayank surprised to saw the address, it was an address of Pune.

 

He reached his hotel with Mayuri......she is very fun loving child, and also very sincere. She already understood that her father not with her, her chocolate uncle going to take care of her. After dinner they went to bed, Maynak place her middle of the bed, he himself on corner. He soothing her hair, suddenly,

"ungle, ek baat bolun?" Mayank nodded as Mayauri look at him.

"daddy ne mjhe chor diya na?" she asked innocently.

Mayank jolted in sudden question, "nahi, aisi koi baat nahi. Daddy jaldi aa jayenge."

"no no ungle, jhut bolna buli baath hai. Mujhe pata hai daddy mujhse pyal nahi karte. Isliye woh mjhe chol ke chale gaye." She start crying. Mayank couldn't see her tears, he hug her, "daddy nahi hai toh kya hua, Papa toh hai na, tum mujhe papa bula sakti ho!"

Mayuri look at him with surprise, Mayank smile, "yes, beta, fir hum dono Mumbai jayenge?..sath me rahenge?.bahut maza karenge.ok? now sleep, bahut raat ho gayi hai."

"ok, ungle?.good naiiit." Mayank make a false angry face, Mayuri giggle, "shooli Papa, good naiit."

"good night." He kissed on her forehead. Almost immediately Mayuri sleept?..he smile.

Mayank kiss her tiny palm and thinking about her?her innocent eyes??her sweet smile?sweet speeches..cute actions.....everything......everything like Nupur. He lost in his world.....is the world still same??? No, its not. 3 yrs is long time, even his life has changed forever. He sighted and closed his eyes for some sleep??past 3 years sleep was far away from his eyes??he cried for her every night......he spend all those sleepless night only with her memories.......their sweet-sour memories.

But tonight, he's sleeping peacefully.

 

Summit was ended yesterday. Mayank packed their stuffs and made 2 ph calls, one was obviously, Insp. Krishna, to give information to their leaving, and another was Sajan, they very happy to his decision. After some time Insp. Krishna informed Mayank that, he also went to Mumbai with them, as per rule. Mayank happily agreed.

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