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Zindagi...Do Pal Ki ...[MN OS] Pg 63 [17/Nov] - Page 44

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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow is was an amazing Os every part of it was wonderful. I especially liked the last part. I haven't read any ff or Os for past month because of my college, but i loved reading this OS it was amazing. 
Posted: 12 years ago
EEKS!
I LOVED IT! 🀣
Mayank and Nupur fighting over a lip-lock?
OmG!!
🀣 Samrat se basketball... 🀣
🀣 OmG! I laughed during the scene.
Uff! Suja! πŸ€—
I love u (behen behen 🀣)
Muahzz!
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Posted: 12 years ago


Hello, friends...Thank u so much for ur lovely comments...i really overwhelmed by ur response. so sweet of u guys.

i love uπŸ€—

so, here m again with a Mayur OS, but it was little bit sad. 

but this OS isnt unusual for uπŸ˜‰...coz u have read many sad OS in this forum😳.

u could understand what i trying to say

so, here is another update for u. 

but it was long and boaring... i knw u all maybe feels sleepy during reading.

so sorry for that ...plz , i apologizes for that in advance.



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Thank u so much guys... for liking d previous part n also ur sweet comment.

 

Love
suja❀️

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Posted: 12 years ago

ullu u made me read this again

sigh
mein yeah song wasy hi jab sunti hon tu mjhy season 1 k end yaad ata hai uper se tu...manhoos rola diya had hai yaar
 
it was efully painful ..so much
his pain was screming in this clamness...
tujhy tragedy queen hona chiay tha...kitna rolati hai tu
 
 
they way ur words were moving with the lyrics ..slowly ...with the love michive
smiles in tears yet so much of pain...
absoultly azming
i think words will be shrt to deifne it...
 
lovly dear
 
Edited by drfizaahmed - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome OS...
loved it lodsss...
last OS a ami joto heshechi ai OS a tottai kedechi...
feeling sooo sad for my Mayank...
n Nupur who was sooo helpless to leave her all d happiness beahind...
n for d babies...
beatifully written...
it was brialliant...πŸ‘β­οΈπŸ‘
beatiful past...
loved it to d coreee...
do write more happy wala OS plzzz
Edited by 18anila1 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
god suja di it was so beautiful😊 the way u expressed mayank feeling its really undefinable😊
 
i was crying😭 while reading this os its so beautifully written
amazing,superb,mindblowing,fantastic,lovely,great,...etc list is going on
just simply loved itπŸ˜ƒπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
plzzz do write more but romanticπŸ˜‰
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Posted: 12 years ago
Suja ur a wonderful writter hun
this OS's, the way u described Mayank's pain is speechless i really have no words for this OS, except to tell u that u really made me cry
i was in good mood when i open ur pm n then after 2mnt i had tears on cheeks really Suja i swear
i'm glad that my sis left the room wen i was reading the OS otherwise she would've like u 😑 ...
as i told i have no words for this OS but ur a ⭐️ hun well done
thanks for the pm n no thanks for making me cry 😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
suja wht is this? 😲
 
i have no describe...it was amazing update.selection of wordings plus song loved it...but yet was heart wrenching...😭😭
 
it brings tears in my eyes...i was completely engrossed while reading and could realise its ending...
 
y nupur left them alone...πŸ˜” there kids need her as tht of mayank...but she'll be there with thm always...
 
suja os was really amazing...i m reallly a bif fan of urs writing...
 
thnaks for the os dear...
 
do write more...
 
love ya dear...πŸ€—πŸ€—
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Posted: 12 years ago
Do u realize how much u made me cry...
Thats why i hate sad stories...but trust me it ws beautifully written...
Goshh the way u portrayed his feelings i ws bound to cry...
This is the most painful thing when mother dies giving birth to her child...this cud  be the best moment for mayank but nupur's death shattered all his happiness...
Lovely os...really wonderful...
Write more but plz no sad ones...
Thnx for pm...