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Chiinnu

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Chiinnu

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Posted: 30 July 2010 at 1:06am | IP Logged
Originally posted by drilabh

you killed daya????? and then u will continue later???? another behrupia????? another agonizing wait for daya fans????? and i dunno, ure narration is nice but abhijeet behaving like ds..... well.... gud story but sad too.... and u brought prabha here??? nice move.....
so happy to see ur comment.

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Posted: 30 July 2010 at 1:09am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Puri_2711

Clap Clap Clap..awesome.........Clap................
& Shocked...............how this happened daya sir pe doubt dal diya Cry.................

hoping daya sir is fine..........Smile Smile Smile............ doctor change karoLOL how can he say that......LOL LOL LOL
hope to see daya sir back in next part........ Big smileBig smile Big smile
continue asap Big smile
hi purni...thanks for reading my story.

Shagnika

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Posted: 30 July 2010 at 4:00am | IP Logged
ShockedShockedShockedShocked What was that??CryCry

i have told u this before... ur narration is very different. Its like from a professional novel writer.Clap

the portrayal of characters is something i am shocked to seeShocked... U seriously feel Abhijeet would behave exactly like this???Shocked  Well, looking forward to the concluding part.... last scene till now is ShockedCryCry

lets see....waiting for the remaining part!Big smile

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Posted: 30 July 2010 at 5:20am | IP Logged
what was that. I can't believe what I read. You narrated beautifully but somewhere ACP and Abhijeet behaved out of character (till this point, waiting for remaining part how their this behavior can be justified).

please aise point pe khatam mat kiya karo. don't hang for so many days complete it in few days. I will be waiting after reading concluding part then will give review of whole because looking answer for so many things yet.


Edited by sunnyp1414 - 30 July 2010 at 5:24am

Chiinnu

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Posted: 30 July 2010 at 8:24am | IP Logged
hello shagi and sunny...looks like you are confused other than being entertained....i have no time to spend on my lap.thats why i decided to make it 2 parts.i will complete it soon.

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Posted: 30 July 2010 at 8:29am | IP Logged
Originally posted by chinnu_manikyam

hello shagi and sunny...looks like you are confused other than being entertained....i have no time to spend on my lap.thats why i decided to make it 2 parts.i will complete it soon.


are no Chinnu.... i loved the narration..its really different ! but please end it fast.. it was shocking to see Daya dieing again! LOL And of course it was entertaining... but....

Chiinnu

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Posted: 30 July 2010 at 8:32am | IP Logged
but...it do not entertain you because it is incomplete,right? Ok ill finish it soon

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Posted: 30 July 2010 at 8:35am | IP Logged
Originally posted by chinnu_manikyam

but...it do not entertain you because it is incomplete,right? Ok ill finish it soon
Big smile M excited to get the answers to the unanswered questions.... Wink

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