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nishalpvsk Senior Member

Joined: 28 October 2009
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Posted: 10 November 2010 at 8:02am | IP Logged
chinnu wonderful story
but bhura mat manna last part aisa lagaa ki u were just jumbled n mixed up
but stoory accha laaga
matlab bahut jaldi main llika gaya lekin ploting acchi thi good keep it up mor in ur future too

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DemonStar IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 16 March 2006
Posts: 14360

Posted: 18 November 2010 at 6:24am | IP Logged
Hey chinnu, sorry for the late response... I haven't been able to come online much lately and I only just checked this one out. Really loved your story, plot is great and the descriptions of the surroundings and events are really wonderful, it's really nice to visualise all that! Again I see there's a great combination of suspense, great character moments, emotions and technical details in the lab. Terrific work, loved it! Smile

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Tanza Goldie

Joined: 09 May 2010
Posts: 1009

Posted: 13 December 2010 at 9:58am | IP Logged
Chinnu di, read target abhijit today.......great story I'd say.....I love those emotional moments of him always......n Daya, such a lovely friend Big smile

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visrom IF-Stunnerz

Joined: 26 November 2009
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Posted: 18 October 2011 at 1:13am | IP Logged
Opened...and waiting for a story from you.

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