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monika21 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 06 November 2010 at 10:00am | IP Logged
Oh long awaited part II. chinnu will read & post my views on monday. Big smile

dr.fahmi Goldie

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Posts: 1484

Posted: 06 November 2010 at 12:43pm | IP Logged
Again a fantabulous work chinnu. sudden twist of mitra and sana was least expected. But it was good. I agree with visrom that mitra's arrest was a bit rushed. But i must admit ur description style is awesome. overall it was great storySmile
Chiinnu IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 06 November 2010 at 11:20pm | IP Logged
thanks for reading friends. will add some more action next time.
sunnyp1414 IF-Dazzler

Joined: 22 November 2009
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Posted: 07 November 2010 at 3:30am | IP Logged
first of all belated Happy Birthday.
I am late everywhere. secondly I will read second part in day or two.
zulaikha Newbie

Joined: 04 April 2010
Posts: 41

Posted: 07 November 2010 at 4:56am | IP Logged
By now i had forgotten the previous partEmbarrassed, so had to go back to read it again
Loved your story, and way of describing everythingSmile, keep rocking!!Smile
And Happy belated BirthdaySmile!!

Edited by zulaikha - 07 November 2010 at 5:02am
ilovedaya Goldie

Joined: 19 September 2010
Posts: 1483

Posted: 07 November 2010 at 10:18am | IP Logged
chinnu di the story is very good, specially the description of our dashing hero.Day Dreaming any girl can fall for him and u described this fact very beautifully,Embarrassed i really loved it very much but i think the climax was a bit hurried. overall a very good job.ClapClapClapClapStar and a big Hug for u.
Chiinnu IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 23 May 2010
Posts: 16227

Posted: 07 November 2010 at 10:36am | IP Logged
thanks kittu and zul...i am so happy to know that you all enjoyed my story.

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Shagnika IF-Rockerz

Joined: 02 February 2010
Posts: 7863

Posted: 07 November 2010 at 11:20am | IP Logged
Oops!!! So this story has been completed! I noticed it now!

I will read it tomorow and then ccomment dii Smile

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