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Posted: 01 November 2010 at 3:06am | IP Logged
great going di,ClapClap please post the next part, as everyone is waiting for that.Smile

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Posted: 02 November 2010 at 4:31am | IP Logged
Great work chinnu di!!Thumbs Up
take ur own time to compelete the story!!Big smile

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Posted: 02 November 2010 at 6:46am | IP Logged
thanks for reading everyone....will post the next part ASAP.

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Posted: 03 November 2010 at 8:42am | IP Logged

chinnu... please post what happened to Mithra latterWink

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Posted: 06 November 2010 at 6:23am | IP Logged

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Posted: 06 November 2010 at 8:37am | IP Logged
Smile "He touched his fingers near left cheek and started looking around". The moment I read this I knew it was Abhijeet.LOL
 
The description of the scene where Daya was pulling her out of the Qualis etc has been elaborately done. But how the CID caught the actual Mitra lady has been a bit rushed. Maybe you could have added some action there.
As a crime story, attention should be given to the manner in which criminals are caught.
 
Otherwise, the plot is very good.
 
And Happy Birthday again. Party

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Posted: 06 November 2010 at 8:44am | IP Logged

Agree with all points said by Visrom...

But great plot Di... I liked the part 2 very much... Nice job Birthday Girl...Big smile

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Posted: 06 November 2010 at 9:16am | IP Logged
Thanks for the birthday treat Chinya !!! A very nice story !!! Well elaborated like you always do !! Nice work re !!

I loved your description and plot quite a lot !!! Action was a little less but still a very well written story !!!

Once again Happy Birthday re !!

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