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Posted: 04 October 2010 at 7:22am | IP Logged
Originally posted by chinnu_manikyam

thank you so much for reading, shagee.
My pleasure!   Big smile

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Posted: 04 October 2010 at 9:18am | IP Logged
Read it...your plot was good. But there are a few things which I found out of place. Daya and ACP knew Abhijeet was in danger. Now, our CID team and ACP is not one which would arrange for protection of one person. We saw that in last week's episode. Knowing our trio, they would just ask him to take care and Abhijeet would stay alert enough with gun in hand and staying awake all night. C'mon, they play with danger every day.

And if Daya and Vivek wouldn't usually tail Abhijeet without telling him what the problem is. So there would be no reason for Abhijeet to try and escape to another route. He would just call Vivek and order him to tell the truth.

That's what looked out of place. And the kiss, well.....nothing wrong, but Abhijeet????? heee heee....Wink

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And the kiss, well.....nothing wrong, but Abhijeet????? heee heee....Wink[/DIV]
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Posted: 27 October 2010 at 3:17am | IP Logged
@chinnu - I just read only the begining of your story... nice start ClapClap 

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chinnu excellent start. just superbClapClap

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Clap Clap wow chinnu... wonderful story... Star totally Daya sir centric Embarrassed i wish we could see this kind of episode sometime..Smile ohh again poor tasha...Confused waiting for the next part...

The national highway is now passing through beautiful landscapes. The important sites near chitradurga are over and now the NH 13 is like a river flowing on the hill top. The flowering trees and gentle breeze made the road tour more joyful. Daya was looking outside with the glasses open and having a cute smile on his lips.

very nice imagination.......


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lovely ClapClapClap............. i guess u used all the imagination in the part ClapClap............... good to see abhijit on bike Big smileBig smile............

mitra AngryAngryAngry........... how dare she bit daya sir palm Angry.......

NH13 drive seemed to be wonderful WinkWink........ a long drive Big smileBig smileBig smile............

overall awesome part Big smileBig smile.........as it was daya sir all the way Big smileBig smile........... waise i am wondering how mitra not affected by handsome officer WinkWinkWink

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