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Posted: 17 July 2010 at 8:11am | IP Logged
dear dazzlingangsta
thank you so much for all of your hard works and very nice postsClapClapClap
i have been more silence reader but every time with your written updates i have understood what's the storyline.to be honest i didn't like the end of story!!!!!!!!!!D'oh
thanks again
best wishesSmile


Edited by bahane - 17 July 2010 at 8:13am

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This is one of your best updates ever.  I've changed the font size of the comments below that I found absolutely priceless LOLROFL
, as well as inserted my own in this font

I too wish they had ended it @ the palace, w/ Pranay or Raja Beardo teaching her how to read, and Rani-ma making Suhagi comfortable and welcome.  The ending hug @ the funeral ghat was rather abrupt Ermm


Originally posted by dazzlingangsta

Hello readers Hug

So since today is the last day of our Devi, Enjoy the update tho' it's not a piece of fun article.LOL And atleast for the last update, appreciate my work guys! I see so many views for my post but no one likes my update nor anyone comments on it except for Vrisha and Abs. You know, how bad I feel for thisCryCry and no one cares my feelingsCry

Okay now enough of this emotional atyachar and lemme jump in today's final update, so bholo Devi maiyya ki
JAIThumbs Up

Taiyy-ji comes to Taniya and tells that today should be the end of Raja-beardo and his family.AngryDead Taniya asks her why they have to do the work so soon. (I'll tell you Aunty why you have to kill them today itself 'coz you are not going to be seen after todayLOL). Taiyy-ji tells that since lakshmi has come to know about everything and now, Taiyy-ji tells Taniya to go and murder Pranay out of the haveli while she finishes the rest in haveli itself! (Why do they have to Kill Rani-ma also?!?Cry).

Taniya comes running to Pranay and tells him that her bro had met with an accident while he was coming to meet her. Pranay takes her to meet her bro
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In the Haveli, Taiyy-ji and Co. with some other servant decide to Kill each family member. but then suddenly they get a news that Lakshmi has escaped from her room so they go running towards the room where she was locked! (How did lakshmi escape?!?Ermm She could disapparate or what?!?Ermm). <= She is a Devi, remember? LOL

Now Pranay and Taniya are in pranay's "Classic" JeepLOL. Taniya is busy doing her nautanki and creates a tensed atmosphere.Dead Then she does some more Nautanki and gets Pranay out of the Jeep! Now pranay gets down and goes on a 'Taniya's fake bro searching Mission'ConfusedLOL. now this evil taniya gives her evil smile and then she drives that jeep towards pranay's directionAngry. Now pranay Turns back and gets shocked by Taniya's action and he gives his first Monkey jumpLOL. Then again she comes with the jeep and he gives his second Monkey JumpConfused (OyE! He was so cool in those jumps that he can directly go join a CircusLOL). Now he stands there like a Zombie and starts waving at the jeep which is coming towards him in a super fast speed. (OMG! Is he MAD?!? He thinks he got an award for the best Zombie and he is supposed to stand and wave like that?!?ConfusedLOL). Now Taniya doesn't miss the chance and goes and hits his legs.Angry Pranay falls down and cires in pain. Now Taniya tells him, "You must be wondering why I am doing this, right?!? Okay, so now lemme tell you clearly before you die, what I am doing!! i have teamed up with your Taiyy-ji and I have made all these plans! How did you expect that I would love such a Idiot person like you?!?Confused I have come here only for Money. now I am going to kill you and next your whole family! Miss me, pranay!" (OMG! Why should pranay miss you?!? Vrisha is the one who will miss you, Aunty-jiROFLWink). And now, she reverses the jeep and comes fast to hit him. By the tim she reached half the distance to crush him under, GoluEmbarrassed comes there like some NinjaLOL and takes pranay out of that way. Now Taniya again reverses the jeep and comes in the direction of them but Pranay takes a rock and throws it at the jeep. This rock bangs with the front glass of the jeep and it diverts Taniya's route and she bumps onto a tree and gets unconciousClapClapClap Where on earth did Golu come from?  They're just scrambling to get people out for this last episode ShockedLOL

Now in the Haveli, Taiyy-ji and Co. have come to the room where Lakshmi was locked but they dun' find her so they start searching in the Haveli!


In Raja-saheb's room, Raja-beardo will be discussin about pranay running away with taniya and suddenly he gets a call from somewhere and he gets shockedShockedShockedShocked (OMG! The CV's have done all this so quickly!!Confused).

Now Lakshmi is sitting with Rani-ma and both of them are getting freaked out in the room. and suddenly, Pranay comes to the Mahal and starts knocking his mum's door!
(Arrey! Pranay also turned out to be a Ninja!!LOL). He tells his Mum that it's him and his mom let's him in.

Now in the Living room, Raja-beardo has already called the police and now everyone gathers in the living rooom.( Police also are Ninjas!!ShockedLOL Looks like everyone here are Ninjas!! No wonder the show is getting over this fast!!LOL). Now Taiyy-ji and Co. will be coming down, and they suddenly spot this police crowd in the living room so they start running up again!Confused Pranay spots them running up and he directs the police in that directionClap. Now taiyy-ji and Co. lock themselves up in a Room and inside, this taiyy-ji will be getting tensed along with her son and DIL. Pranay, from outside comes and starts knocking the door and says, "Baddi-Ma, please open the door" (OYE! Why is he knocking the door as if he is doing so room service in a hotel?!?ConfusedLOLLOL). Now Raja-beardo comes there and he too knocks the door and tells her to open and finally, he gives orders to the police to break open the door. now the police finally open the door and this Taiyy-ji, she points the gun at all of them!! Now taiyy-ji says, "This is my house and my wealth! Now only my dead body will leave" so she puts the gun on her fore-head and shooots herself!!Shocked (OMG! Suicide!!!ShockedShocked). The bullet enters her head from the right and goes out thru' the left!!ShockedShocked (So guys, that means, the blood from her head popped out like some Ninja, too!ShockedShockedConfused. The scene was kinda scary tho'Confused The way the blood flew out looked like she really shot herself!!ShockedDead). Seeing this scene, lakshmi starts screaming and even rani-ma starts screaming and crying and both Bhanu (Taiyy-ji's 'not so happening' son) and Urvashi breakdown crying! police arrests them, finalyy!Approve

Now the last rites of Taiyy-ji is going on!Unhappy Raja-beardo is putting the ashes in the water (Arghhhh! Did I see Raja-beardo with open hair?!?Dead I hope not!!) and then all pray and then Raja-beardo comes out from the lake and goes to Lakshmi and asks her for he forgiveness! (And yeh lo!!! He has opened his hair!!Dead I am feeling sick in my tummy!!Dead). but lakshmi still decides to leave by saying that all this relationships are fake.Cry Rani-ma too tries to stop her but the effort goes in vain!!ConfusedCryCry. Now Pranay comes to her and says her to forgive him and he extends a hand towards her and tells her to hold it once again that nothing can seperate them now but she still decides to leave. All Rani-ma, Raja-beardo and pranay are heart-broken!! Now While lakshmi is leaving, Suhaagi tells lakshmi that she could see repenting sorrow in Pranay and she should give him a chance and she had also taken saat-pheres and now she can't just break all the ties and leave. She encourages Lakshmi to go back to pranay. Now lakshmi turns back and goes running into pranay's open arms and both of them hug while everyone present there beam with happines!!!ClapClapClap Where did Suhagi & Golu  come from all of a sudden?  And why was Suhagi dressed in white?  Tai-ji is dead, and they went out of their way to invite Suhagi & Golu for the funeral, but not Ghasita, Bantoo & rest of family? Not that I wanted to see them Shocked

The End!!Big smileBig smile

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Jai Ho Devi Maiya ki!!!!!



Edited by Vrisha - 17 July 2010 at 10:03am

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Posted: 17 July 2010 at 11:04pm | IP Logged
Yea Vrisha, the CV's wanted to the show in a smart way but this did look Over-SmartThumbs Down

OoO and Thank you for liking my special commentsEmbarrassedEmbarrassedHug

And I wanted Ghasita to be insulted but that was not there!! Afterall, he was the one who made Lakshmi into a devi for money and that important part was missingAngry

And BTW, Vrisha, you dun' miss Taniya, dun' you?!?WinkLOL

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Posted: 17 July 2010 at 11:05pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by bahane

dear dazzlingangsta
thank you so much for all of your hard works and very nice postsClapClapClap
i have been more silence reader but every time with your written updates i have understood what's the storyline.to be honest i didn't like the end of story!!!!!!!!!!D'oh
thanks again
best wishesSmile


Thank you so much!Embarrassed You dunno how deeply it touched me when you commented on my work for the first time!Big smileHug

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Posted: 19 July 2010 at 1:59pm | IP Logged
Gangsta

Honestly, I  thought that Tania's transformation was too forced and artificial - like the ending in Kashi where Shauriya's mom accepts Kashi.  I mean, it's perfectly possible that Pranay had a real girlfriend in Tania in the US, and that when she found out that he was being forced to marry someone else, she was heartbroken and did everything to stop it.  So this twist I just didn't like.  But anyway, Lakshmi got her prince on a white horse. LOL

But I  did like Raja Beardo being genuinely remorseful to Lakshmi for cheating her out of his own greed, and acknowledging that she's  a Devi b'cos of the way she still tried to save her sasural despite knowing how  she was cheated.  Maybe he should have fallen @ her feet a second time begging her not to go.  Pranay too.

And yeah, I wasn't happy that Ghasita & Bantoo didn't  get properly punished. Angry

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Dear Friend...

Your Updation is Good .... Thanks so much .....

 But u forget one thing ....   Each one here are diffrent to ur Mood of Viewing .  and differ from ur View ... so if u don't express ur Emoticons and comments ... it will more help full for ur Friends ... who reading  ur Updations ... Hope u will accept this request on future updations on this site ..

Thanks for ur Work .....

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